Flash fiction: Where’s Hammy? by Val Muller

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story involving one or more of the following: a pumpkin, a cold wind, rustling leaves, a scarecrow, candy wrappers, someone in costume.

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit series Corgi Capers. She is drawing a corgi a day over on social media. You can follow at facebook.com/corgicapers or find Val Muller on Instagram at Instagram.com/mercury_val.

Where’s Hammy?

By Val Muller

The leaves rustled on the darkened sidewalk as another porch light switched off. The older kids were skipping home, where their dad waited, and I stayed behind to wait for little Beth and her Aunt Julie. Julie was carrying Beth’s bulging candy bag, and Beth skipped down the sidewalk, swinging her arms wildly, obviously high on sugar, one of her hamster ears flopping crookedly down toward her chin.

“Julie, how much candy did you give the three year old?” I asked.

“Lots!” Beth said, grabbing the bag from her aunt and peering in to show me. Then she gasped. “Where’s Hammy?” The nightmarish question in the high-pitched toddler voice echoed of a scene from a horror film. All that was needed was a dolly zoom shot: the toddler, the leafy sidewalk, the missing hamster.

All would not be well.

I looked up at my sister. “Where’s Hammy?”

“Hammy?” she asked. “It was just us.”

“Yeah, it was you and Bethy and…”

“Hammy!” Beth said.

“Oh. You mean the stuffed animal.” Julie looked around calmly. Childless, she clearly did not understand the gravity of the situation.

A cold wind rustled more leaves on the sidewalk. “Mommy, I’m tired,” Beth said, lifting her arms to me. I picked her up, and she snuggled in, but we both knew something was wrong. “I need Hammy and then let’s go home to bed.” She did not yawn. There would be no yawns until Hammy was found.

“Um, I’m sure she’s here somewhere,” Julie said.

“Hammy’s a boy,” I reminded her.

“I mean, he. He’s around here somewhere.” She forced a laugh.

A group of kids ran toward us, then stopped a few feet away. “Look, candy!” they called, pointing to the ground. They all dove to pick up a candy wrapper that turned out to be empty. Unfazed, they tossed the wrapper and continued on.

“Did you see a hamster?” I called, picking up the trash.

They did not answer. One of the boys, this one wearing a reaper costume, picked up a Jack-o-lantern from the end of a driveway and tossed it into the street. It splattered, the battery-powered candle illuminating the pumpkin guts on the pavement. The kids laughed maniacally and turned down a street, their laughter echoing like demons through the emptying night. Halloween was quickly degenerating. There would be nothing else tonight except mischief, and tomorrow there would be only pumpkin guts and Christmas sales everywhere.

I was getting annoyed.

I should have warned Julie. Hammy is the thing. The thing you can’t lose. The universe. The everything.

“Hammy is like Linus’s blanket,” I blurted.

Julie stopped short. “Oh.”

Silence. We had both grown up on Charlie Brown. Now she knew.

“Where’s Hammy?” Beth whispered. Tears were close. The sugar was the only thing preventing a breakdown, and that crash was imminent.

“We’ll find him,” I said. Heat prickled my neck despite the cold wind. I knew we needed a backup Hammy, but we were waiting for a Black Friday sale. That would come too late.

For tonight, we had to find him.

Beth was known to put Hammy in all manner of places. He’s been in our mailbox, he’s been in her clubhouse outside until midnight, he’s been in carseats and in trunks, in toyboxes and even in the fridge once. He’s been strapped to a swing in a park, and luckily many merciful souls left him alone until we came back for him. But tonight—the kids tonight were full of mischief. They were likely to tear Hammy apart or roast him in a lit Jack-o-lantern. We had to find him before the hellions.

Hammy likes to push buttons on elevators and doorbells, he likes to look in piles of leaves, he likes to climb trees. Hammy has been found in all manner of places, and tonight, everyone’s yards were like cluttered attics, with Halloween décor and Autumn leaves everywhere.

I glanced at the neighborhood.  Another porch light turned off. It was after 9, and it seemed even the houses sensed it was time to shut down for the night. This was the quiet part of Halloween night, the spooky part, the part where the summer months clock out and the cold, dark months take their turn.

I shivered. “Let’s go backwards. When do you remember having Hammy?”

Beth jumped out of my arms. “He was everywhere! We got so, so much candy.” She started to babble about all the kinds of candy she got, but I took her hand and walked with Julie back down the street.

We searched leaf piles, we searched inside witch’s cauldrons, we searched inside mailboxes. Nowhere.

A lone group of adults was having a fire pit in their driveway. “Want a s’more?” they asked.

I gave in. The warmth, the friendliness. If I just sat there, maybe Hammy would just materialize. To sit somewhere warm, to have someone hand me something delicious without me having to make it or think about it…

In two seconds flat, Beth was covered in sticky chocolate and marshmallow. “This is yummy!” she squealed.

At least the sugar would delay her meltdown another few minutes.

The couple made small talk – they were cousins of the house’s owners, staying for the long weekend. “You don’t get much wholesomeness in these parts, do you?” one of them asked. Turns out, they were from the Midwest. They weren’t used to the cutthroat lifestyle some places on the East Coast can force upon you. I wondered whether we made the right call, taking the jobs we did and staying in the east.

“Look, now Hammy can have a s’mores too!” Beth shouted. She pointed to a giant scarecrow display in the middle of the lawn. The scarecrow was holding one of those orange trick or treat pumpkin buckets, and sure enough, Hammy was peeking out over it, watching the whole thing. Julie and I smiled at each other and finished our s’mores.

After a quick wipe-down, the toddler cuddled the missing friend in her arms. As I picked her up for the walk home, she yawned, the sugar rush peacefully leaving her body. It was the dark time of night, the cozy time, and we were all due for a good rest.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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Book Review: The Moth Keeper by K. O’Neill

This is a beautifully-illustrated graphic novel about a girl named Anya, who is training to become the moth keeper for the Moon-Moths, a group of moths essential to her nocturnal people. The moth keeper has a lonely life, staying alone in the dessert all night to guide the moths.

Anya is conflicted, both determined to prove her worth yet also drawn to question whether their way if life isn’t lacking in some way.

The setting and people remind me a little of the world of Zelda, and the people have animal qualities, such as animal ears.

What I loved about the art is that it tells the storg oftentimes without words, forcing the reader to appreciate the artwork and its nuances. I had about an hour to read the book, and I was determined to finish it, which I did, but I would have preferred a slower pace to enjoy all the art, and I did go back to several places later to enjoy the art again and look for hidden details.

I always read graphic novels with the question in mind of whether I would recommend them to my kids or my students. I think my 8 year old might have a little trouble with some of the subtleties in the story, but an older elementary/middle school would be able to, and high schoolers would probably appreciate the story on more levels.

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Flash fiction: Rowdy By Val Muller

This month’s prompt is to write something summery. This week’s tale comes to us from Val Muller. Check out her newest work, the illustrated children’s book Billy the Earthworm Finds His Courage.

Rowdy

By Val Muller

Bill and Robbie sat by the pool, nursing the $22 rum buckets they bought. $19.50 with the senior discount.

Bill remembered years ago when he and Helen used to split two or three of them. Then when they had kids, they would be lucky to split just one, maybe, during a good vacation week when the kids were especially cooperative.

Then the kids grew up. They traded rum buckets for golfing and shopping and sightseeing. Then Helen got sick, and Bill was too sad to drink.

With Maggie gone now, Robbie was in the same boat, and the two agreed to go on vacation together, a widowers’ retreat so to speak. It felt strange.

Of course without Helen or Maggie, there was no one to meticulously plan the days, to pack for contingencies, to keep Bill well behaved. But there was no reason to misbehave, either. Helen, his reason for all, was gone.

For the first two days, the men stayed by the pool, went looking for seashells, and went grocery shopping for the room. But they grew more comfortable, and the echo if bachelorhood resounded in their hearts. Hence, the rum buckets. It felt fun. It felt adventurous and irresponsible. It felt good.

In the pool, a group of high schoolers were tossing a football around. They were loud and boisterous. Their play was the definition of horseplay, roughhousing, and ball sports, all actions forbidden according to the set of rules posted on the wall, the ones Bill had read at least three times due to lulls in the conversation.

Helen would have texted the front desk and reported the boys. They had, after all, taken over the whole pool, and several parents of small children looked terrorized, clinging to the edges of the pool to protect their young ones from a stray football.

Bill looked at Robbie. He had just taken a sip of his rum, and the football landed a foot from him. Robbie looked at Bill.

“Come on, old man!” the rowdiest of the boys shouted. Robbie didn’t move. He just took another sip. Bill shifted his weight in the beach chair.

“Hey, old man, you hard of hearing?” The rowdy teenager crossed his arms and stared from in the pool. Was he mocking the stance of an old man? What did he know about aging?

Bill almost chuckled. It was funny. He knew he was old. He felt old. He looked old every time his reflection stared back at him. But a part of him was still a kid, still a teenager. A part of him would never accept his age.

Before he or Robbie could respond, a security guard arrived. He beelined to the pool and said something to the footballers. Bill looked around, trying to guess which parent had texted the front desk to report the teens.

The boys groaned and cursed, but they got out. The angry one pulled himself out of the pool effortlessly, with muscles he took for granted, with ligaments that knew no fatigue. No aches or pains or groans.

“Keep the ball, old man,” the boy told Robbie. “It wasn’t even mine.”

The security guard walked by. He sighed and looked at Bill and Robbie. “Kids,” he said.

The man looked to be about Bill’s age, maybe a few years younger. Maybe this resort security job was his retirement, a way to keep young and active.

“He’s who we always complained about,” Bill said to Robbie after the security guy moved on. “Now he is us.”

Robbie picked up the football. “Years ago, we WERE those boys.” He reached with his spare hand for his drink but then stopped. He took the football in both hands. He tossed it to Bill. They were only a few feet away, and instinctively, Bill caught it and tossed it back. Made eye contact.

“No ball play,” he said, half joking.”We’re just two old men,” he said. Then he stood up. Tossed the ball again to Bill.Bill caught it and stood up. Tossed it back to Robbie, who also stood.

He saw Helen look at him with that little wink that was a little judgment but mostly admiration. She would have said, “Bill, no ball play,” or maybe, “why don’t you two do that on the beach?”

But then he saw her younger. Before kids. She may well have jumped right into the pool and motioned for the ball. His mental image of her was replaced by another–an older man in the pool. And he WAS clapping, motioning for the ball.”

I played linebacker in high school,” the man said. Bill tossed the ball back to Robbie. The security guy had disappeared, likely making his rounds elsewhere. Robbie tossed the ball back to Bill and nodded to the man in the pool. Bill chucked the ball at him. It was the perfect catch.

Bill hurried to the edge of the pool and jumped in. The old man in the pool snapped the ball to him just as Robbie did a cannonball to join them. #

The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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Book Review: The Bridge Home by Padma Venkatraman

I chose this book last summer, I think, during a free cereal book giveaway, and I chose it because it had earned the Walter Dean Myers Award for Outstanding Children’s Literature. It did not disappoint.

It’s a book about children, and for children, but its themes may be upsetting. For instance, my ten-year-old does not like in movies or books when people die if she did not expect it, and I had to warn her about a death in this book. That is all I will say about plot spoilers.

The novel is essentially a letter that main character Viji is writing to her sister Rukku. Growing up in India, the girls first deal with an abusive father. After witnessing him become physically abusive, Viji decides to run away from home, taking Rukku with her. Rukku is developmentally disabled, and together, they venture into the city to try to make a life for themselves. Their experiences show the reality of life for children in other parts of the world, where, for instance, they search trash heaps and sell scraps to men who exploit them for their labor and threaten to do more. The children are essentially powerless, as they do not have resources or knowledge to better their position. They live in fear and really rarely plan more than a day or two into the future.

The narrative is straightforward yet poignant. Although there are many along their journey who stand in their way, there are also those who help the children. It’s a great book for readers in the US who might think their lives are difficult, and it is a great read for everyone to learn about compassion and the inspiration to improve one’s life.

Ultimately, I recommended the book to my daughter—I just told her who died so she wouldn’t get too upset.

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Publication alert: 100 word story

I’m pleased to announce that a 100 word story I wrote, “Goodbye, Sorry for My Faults, and Thanks for the Lessons,” was published by Rat Bag Lit. I came upon the prompt a while ago and figured I’d give it a try. You can read it for free here until August 23, and after that time, I’ll try to post it here on my website. Hope you enjoy!

https://ratbaglit.substack.com/p/goodbye-sorry-for-my-faults-and-thanks

I’m sharing a 100 word story I wrote that is now live at Rat Bag Lit.

When I saw the chance to write a 100 word story involving an alien 👽 , I jumped at the chance.

It will be live here for the next 4 weeks: https://ratbaglit.substack.com/p/goodbye-sorry-for-my-faults-and-thanks . Enjoy!

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New book published: Billy the Earthworm Finds His Courage

Screenshot of "Billy the Earthworm finds his Courage," available on Amazon.com.

I’m so excited to announce a new publication and a new genre for me: illustrated works!

All three of my kids have had a block of time spanning several years during which they constantly asked for stories (I am in the middle of it with the two year old). I remembered and then wrote down the best of these stories, and I promised I would create them one day.

With my kids young enough to still appreciate them, I figured it was time. “One day” was now.

Life with a 2, 7, and 10 year old is busy, to say the least. Throw my full-time teaching job on top of that, and time becomes a precious commodity.

There is a lot of running around, taking kids to Taekwondo, swim, soccer, wrestling. My challenge as a creative person had been how to use some of that time productively.

I do what I can: jogging during half of morning swim, bringing a laptop to edit or write afterwards. But even with my first child, it was clear that mental silence during waking hours was to be a thing of the past. Almost right away with my oldest, I turned to drawing as a creative outlet that allowed me to work even while a very loquacious child was practicing her craft.

It started with bringing a sketchbook everywhere and trying to fill it with everything from pencil sketches to acrylic paints to alcohol markers.

“Wendy,” an acrylic painting I entered in a local art contest (third place) a few years ago.

But life on the go necessitated that I create art the same way I create writing: in sometimes short, stolen moments between (or during) appointments and lessons.

After a year or so of physical drawing, I turned to digital pen and a tablet (Android FTW!), since digital paint never dries. I even splurged on a drawing screen that hooks up to my computer.

My sweet set-up/happy place

The first of my illustrated kids books is Billy the Earthworm Finds His Courage. It started on a grumpy, rainy day when my son needed something to do in the car. I told him to imagine ways an Earthworm might try to cross a driveway that was being guarded by birds. My oldest chimed in right away, helping my son to brainstorm ideas. Many of those ideas made it onto the pages of the book.

dedication page from my latest book

What I like most about this story is that Billy is so content in his life, and when he hears the call for something better, he hesitates. I think we all at some point have felt that safety is more appealing than risk, and we forego the chance to improve our situation because we are afraid of the unknowns of change.

This book was several years in the making if you take into account the learning curve for digital drawing (after honing regular drawing/painting skills, filling several sketchbooks, and trying to work in fragmented chunks between kid activities and distractions). With the learning curve conquered, books will hopefully emerge much more quickly now.

My current work in progress is about a girl and her friend/toy dinosaur who decide to melt fruit snacks in a hot car and the ensuing mess. You would never guess which of my kids (ahem, toddler!) is the inspiration for that one.

But I am also working on illustrating my Corgi Capers series. I’ll be illustrating the first three (re-releasing them), and I have two more books in the series written and ready for illustration.

I am proud to have taken the time to produce human-created artwork that is imperfect yet has a soul. I am against generative AI for writing and artwork, as I believe the expression of art and the work that goes into creating it is part of what defines art and makes us human. The magic of written and visual art is finding something that resonates with you and realizing that you and the author/artist share a thought, idea, or feeling – whether you are living down the street, in a different time zone, or decades and decades apart. I hope a piece of my new work resonates with you.

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Book Review: Blackout by Clayton/Jackson/Stone/Thomas/Woodfolk/Yoon

The book Blackout contains interconnected stories by authors Dhonielle Clayton, Tiffany D. Jackson, Nic Stone, Angie Thomas, Ashley Woodfolk, and Nicola Yoon. It’s about a series of Black young adults who find themselves in various parts of New York City during a blackout, and its theme is love and finding/being true to oneself.

The stories are all young adult centered, so it’s a good read for high school. In fact, I was supposed to read this book back in January, but things got away from me. I was given this book with a bookshelf that someone was giving away. When I heard the high school I work at was reading the book as part of a book club, I wanted to read it, but–yearbook deadlines and other things got in the way. With more time in the summer, I was able to devour this fast read.

I would rate the stories as PG-13. They are all centered on love (of all types and genders, with nothing explicit in any of them), and they are all sweet and end happily. The young people in the stories often notice or comment on the grandparents’ generation and how the stories of how grandparents met are told time and again, inspiring the current generation. What I enjoyed more than the love stories was the message that people should be true to who they are, and that’s when true love happens–when we stop pretending to be who we are not.

I don’t want to give away spoilers, but some examples of plot in the book – there are two characters competing for the same internship, there is a big party in Brooklyn that many characters are attempting to reach despite the widespread blackout, there is concern for the elderly in their group home during the blackout, there are concerns about how we change when we either go or don’t go to college. I enjoyed how the stories were interwoven so that it felt like they were all happening in the same time and place, but at the same time each one had its own voice and personality. I don’t have a favorite necessarily–they were all slices of life and highlighted the importance of individual stories, and they are geared toward the turbulent years of young adulthood, especially as high school is ending.

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Book review: Airfield by Jeanette Ingold

Following the life of newly-fifteen-year-old Beatty, a girl growing up near an airfield during the dustbowl era, Airfield is a good read for anyone interested in a coming of age tale, a tale about discovering one’s parent, and a historical look at the 1930s American small-scale airline industry.

Beatty lives with various family members, never staying too long in one place, while her father takes on inconsistent work for the airline. He never seems to want to talk about Beatty’s mother, even though Beatty hears rumors that she was a pilot. Worse, he does not want her up in the air.

Beatty and her family work hard, help who they can, and do what is needed. Beatty works for free, collecting only tips, as a way of proving herself useful to the airfield that is barely making ends meet. As a backdrop to this story, we see how passengers flew and were treated in the 1930s.

My favorite part about reading stories of the past is when I am drawn in to the small details of life so that I feel like I am there. Even small things, like watching characters struggle to find housing or food, makes me realize what an abundant time we live in, and it gives me a healthy dose of respect for the past.

This is a must read for young women, but anyone interested in pilots or airplanes would find it a quick read as well.

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Flash fiction: Caught in the Act by Cathy MacKenzie

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to write a story in which someone pugnacious plays a major role. This time, it’s Cathy MacKenzie’s turn.
Cathy’s writings have been published in over four hundred print and online publications.

Check out her website (www.writingwicket.wordpress.com) for more information.

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Caught in the Act
Cathy MacKenzie

I was caught unawares when Fred suddenly appeared at the desk and shrieked, “What are you doing?”

I felt my face go hot. My arms fell to my sides like limp noodles—though I was unaware they’d fallen until I snapped them up into a defensive cross to protect my face.
Fred slammed one hand on the desk, leaning over me like a boxer waiting for the bell. No, he was my husband; he wouldn’t actually strike me. But he sure looked like he wanted to.

Still, I’d been caught in the act. And by my husband, the one person I always wanted to impress.

“What are you doing?” he barked again, towering over me.

“Nothing,” I mumbled, surprised I could even speak through the thick dough in my throat.

He glared at me, his jaw working as he scanned the desk, his eyes locking onto the evidence. “Nothing? You call tearing through a dozen donuts like a starved dog ‘nothing’?” He pointed at the open box.
Funny, though. Hearing his booming, combative voice echo through the room, my guilt suddenly vanished. I had been on a diet for three weeks. I hadn’t eaten dinner the previous evening, nor had I eaten breakfast that morning. I was starving; I had to eat, and there was nothing else but those donuts. I couldn’t leave the office, not when I was manning the premises. And the boss’s wife couldn’t starve, could she?

He didn’t wait for an answer. He threw up his hands in disgust and marched down the hall to his office.

I slumped into the chair, swallowed the mush in my mouth, and licked my fingers, my heart hammering against my ribs.
I was filling in at Fred’s company while the receptionist was ill, something I did on occasion. I didn’t do much besides answer the phone and offer greetings when someone entered the building. Quite boring, actually. I’d much sooner be home doing my own thing, but I felt it was my wifely duty to help in his time of need.

And this was how he thanked me?

I was devastated he’d caught me in the act. I almost cried but then reconsidered. What good would tears accomplish except to run my mascara and ruin my foundation? And what had I done, really? I hadn’t stolen company funds, nor had I snooped into financials. No, I had simply been caught—literally—with my hands in the cookie jar, to use a cliché.

But it was Fred’s fault! He had practically dared me by leaving the box of confectionary goodness with me at the front desk earlier that morning. “Help yourself,” he had said, dropping the box on the desk. He snickered, leaning in close. “Smell good, don’t they?” he’d taunted before disappearing, quite aware I possessed no willpower.

We’d been married for almost forty years. Shouldn’t he have clued in to my faults by now? Or was he just looking for an excuse to pick a fight?

Yep, you guessed it. I didn’t take those luscious, mouth-watering globs of goodness out back to the guys in the warehouse as I’d been instructed. Fred wasn’t supposed to have returned until early afternoon when he was going to take me to lunch. He’d never have known had he stuck to his schedule. While pigging out, I’d rationalized I’d order a diet soda and salad.

Minutes later, he returned. “I can’t believe it,” he hissed. “You ate ten of them? Those were for the warehouse crew! Do you have any idea how hard those guys work?”
I looked inside the box, truly stunned to see two lonely donuts. Had I eaten ten? How many calories had I consumed?

I knew I was wrong, but his bullying crossed the line. If he wanted to treat me like an adversary, I might as well act like one.

While he watched, I reached into the box, grabbed the jelly-filled one instead of the old-fashioned plain, looked him dead in the eyes, and took a massive, defiant bite.

“Too late for the box to go to the warehouse now,” I said through a mouthful of filling. “Ten hulking guys couldn’t share two anyway. And now there’s only one.”

His face turned a deep crimson, but the sweet mixture instantly soothed any feelings of inadequacy. Gah, they were so good! Lunch was damned; I’d take donuts over a salad any day.

Fred would eventually calm down. He always did.

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The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: http://www.valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

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Book Review: Long Live the Pumpkin Queen by Shea Ernshaw

As a fan of The Nightmare Before Christmas, I was drawn to this book, which follows what happens to Sally after the end of the film, when she and Jack finally get together.

I wasn’t sure what to expect, since the film appeals to children and adults alike. My daughter actually wanted to read the book, so I read it first to see if it was okay for kids. It is. There is a little bit of Jack and Sally kissing, but mostly it’s a coming of age of sorts for Sally.

She and Jack are married, and it’s almost Halloween. They go on a very brief honeymoon and then all goes wrong. In short, a door is opened to a different world, and all the beings in all the worlds seem to be fallen into a permanent sleep. Sally is the only one who can save them.

It was a good plot-based read with some development of Sally’s character. She begins feeling like she doesn’t fit in as the queen of Halloween. This could serve as a metaphor for one growing into a role, or taking on a new role and needing to make it your own.

What disappointed me a little is, I never felt like I was actually in a world. If I hadn’t seen the film a million times, I would not have had much to imagine. That said, there were repetitive parts, like Sally constantly feeling the leaves stuffed inside her rustling, etc., instead of her heart fluttering. From what I know of those who write a book that takes place in a world someone else owns (ahem Disney), I am assuming the author’s hands were tied in some ways. Ernshaw is a NYT bestselling author, but I just felt a certain something was missing from the tale. There were also some plot weirdnesses. For example, the film ends at Christmas time. This is when Sally and Jack presumably start dating. So, did they date from December through October and then decide they just had to get married 2 weeks before Halloween? It caused a rushed honeymoon, but if these creatures live either forever or for a very long time (a character during the tale is sentenced to 100 years of service), why the rush to marry at such an inconvenient time?

That said, I felt drawn to finish the story, as I really wanted to know what happened. I won’t go into details of her backstory, but they played a role.

I will definitely let my daughter read the book, and I think the plot elements will hold her interest.

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