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The Electronic Wordsmith

Today I’m happy to feature Nancy Klann Moren, author of The Clock of Life (which I’ll be reviewing later this summer). I love her point about writing by hand. I agree that it’s an important (but dying) art. Hope you enjoy!

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cor·re·spond·ence   [kawr-uhspon-duhns, kor-]   noun

 1. communication by exchange of letters.

2. a letter or letters that pass between correspondents.

I received a card from my friend Kendra today.  An honest to goodness card, sent through the postal system.  She put pen to paper just to say hi, you’re my friend and I like you enough to make the effort.

 

Other than the rare individuals like Kendra, it seems the only hand written cards traveling the pony express routes these days are from children forced to send thank you cards to Grandma and Grandpa for the latest birthday gift, or to dispatch a “Flat Stanley” school assignment to that same set of grandparents.

 

Every time I get something in the mail from Kendra it makes me feel great.  Of course, that’s the intention.  She has the thought, makes the effort, puts in the time―and the cherry on top; she chooses a novelty stamp to fit the occasion.

 

I once got a note on the back of a deposit slip because she thought of me when she was in line at the bank.  Well, that just blew a hole in the “I don’t have time to write” excuse, didn’t it?

 

She once cut the front panel off a Mac and Cheese box, wrote on the backside and sent it like a postcard.  “You’re the Cheesiest,” was all it said.  Just, “You’re the Cheesiest.”  For me, it doesn’t get much better than that.

 

She says she loves pretty paper.  And pens, of every size and color.  And stickers, and stamps.  She says there’s something that goes on in the brain when you transfer your thoughts on paper trough handwriting―that it slows you down so your intensions are more deliberate, your thoughts more true.

 

I’m sure that’s all spot on, but I think she simply wants to share a part of herself to lift someone’s day, and let them know they are appreciated in the most personal way possible.

 

There’s a heartfelt moment in my novel, The Clock Of Life, where my protagonist mails a post card to his mother:

 

I sulked for a good while, then remembered an old, unused postcard I’d seen in the catch-all drawer. The background showed two paddleboats, the Delta Queen and the Mississippi Queen. Big red letters across the middle said Hello from the Mississippi River Parkway.

I wrote in the small section on the backside and told her it’d been seven days since she left. “I know you’re working real hard to get better, and Uncle Mooks and me are working real hard, too.”

That’s all that fit. I didn’t mention anything about the box, or the many secrets she’d kept from me, or how I was starting to feel like a man.

I stuck my thumb in a jar of beet juice and pressed hard where the signature would be, then signed J.L. inside the smudge―just J.L.

 

Have we all been using the computer so long we’ve forgotten what Kendra (and J.L.) know?  Tangible trumps virtual every time, and I plan to stalk up on pens and pretty paper, and “correspond” more.

Author Bio:

 

I tried my hand at writing short fiction while traveling for work in advertising and marketing, as a creative outlet on long plane rides. That led to me signing up for writing classes, writer’s conferences and local workshops.  My goal―to create unique stories told in a distinctive voice.  I’m happy to say my stories and have garnered awards and publication in anthologies.   My collection of short stories is titled, Like The Flies On The Patio.  

 

OLYMPUS DIGITAL CAMERAShort stories were my primary genre until one morning while in a workshop at The Santa Barbara Writers Conference, I read an excerpt.  When I finished, the instructor, Sid Stebel, asked what I was doing for the next couple years, because, “What you have written isn’t a short story, it’s a novel.”  After a good deal of foot dragging I realized the subject matter was so important I took up the challenge and penned the novel, The Clock of Life.

 

I am now working on a new novel loosely based on the time my friend and I found an old diary in an antique shop and took a road trip to find the lady who wrote in the book.  The girls will not be named Thelma and Louise, but the story will take the girls cross country and they will get into all sorts of trouble.

Nancy Klann-Moren,  Author

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Faire EveThis novel blends fairy folklore with the modern world as a girl named Eve learns she is the blood descendant of otherworldly royalty, and she is the only one who can save the fae. I most enjoyed this novel’s blending of folklore and mythology into the storyline. I love faries and the idea that there is a hidden world behind everything we do and see. I was particularly enthralled with the idea expressed in the book that anyone with knowledge of the fairy folk actually goes insane because people simply can’t handle the idea. There’s also a romantic interest that begins through dreams and thoughts between Eve and one of the fae. Finally, I love the idea that fairies have wings that “retract” into the body to heal. When I was younger, I perpetually checked the mirror each morning because I was convinced that wings were going to spring from my back! Yes, the strength of the book is the imaginative tale.

What I found least effective was the point of view. The book followed a largely omniscient point of view, so just when I was starting to ‘get into’ a character, I was shown someone else. The omniscient perspective lent itself more to telling than showing, which isn’t what I prefer.

All in all, I would recommend this book to anyone with a love of fairy culture or fanciful mythology, especially a young adult reader.

This week’s post comes to us from Cathy MacKenzie, who writes mainly short stories and poems. The prompt this month for the Spot Writers is to write a short story including three of the following words: courage, car, obvious, sashay, checked, twitched.  Cathy used the following words: courage, car, obvious. She hopes you enjoy her story!

Check out her blog at: http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/  Her books are available on Smashwords at:  https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/camack

 

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Shadow Dance

 

At the restaurant, in between mouthfuls of Thai chicken bites and Caesar salad, I take stock of Dan, my husband. I’m startled to notice how much thicker—and darker— his hair seems. Has he died his white hair a tawny brown? His face—once etched with deep furrows and molted with red blotches—is smoother than I remembered. His burnished skin glows, like he’s spent too much time outdoors.

When we arrive home, I glimpse my own face in the hall mirror—a face I almost don’t recognize. I stare at the drawn reflection bordered with wispy whitish hair. Crows’ feet fan from the outer corners of my sunken eyes, and fleshy bags perch beneath dwindling lower lashes. My jowls sag like soggy dishrags pinned to the clothesline on a breezeless day.

When I sense Dan’s presence, I move away from the mirror. He stares at me like he hasn’t seen me before, just as I seemingly viewed him for the first time earlier at the restaurant. I want to hide my face in shame. Does he see tell-tale age on me? Will he search out someone younger? Or has he already?

Without a word, he turns and sprints to the garage to work on his vehicles, specifically his ’65 Mustang. He cherishes that car, caring for it like a mother would her newborn. I’ve spied on him in the past while he caressed its smooth, firm body. I’ve seen him tenderly slide a soapy cloth across the surface, and, after carefully spraying off the suds, lovingly rub on the oil paste like one would apply sunscreen over a svelte young woman. I’ve watched while he polished the frame to a radiant sheen.

I often wonder what goes through his mind while he continually kneads an ever-immaculate chassis into gloss shimmering like a new black patent shoe. Does he think of me? Someone else? Or is he too immersed to think of anything?

White I watch his backside vanishing down the hall, I debate whether to follow. Instead, I remain in the kitchen and gaze around the recently redecorated room—the stark black granite, the all-matching stainless steel appliances, the resurfaced cupboard doors—and wonder where life begins and ends. Similar to poofs of smoke on a windy day, my years disappeared too fast. What good are material possessions? What happens to things when we’re gone?

Where will that car go? Who will treasure that vehicle as my husband does?

More importantly, who will cherish me when he’s gone? He’ll depart first. If not, I’m certain I’ll live longer than a dratted car that gobbles up his time and money.

A force of courage propels me to again peer into the mirror. The features are displayed before me, etched for all time in that rectangle of recently Windexed glass. Mirrors don’t lie—they never did; they never will. My eyes can lower to hide what they don’t want to acknowledge; I can’t be scarred by what I can’t see, but, unfortunately, I’ve already seen it. I already know. Tearing out my eyes won’t make the years disappear. Time has taken its rightful place. Obvious age has attached itself, and there’s nothing left once those deadly talons have latched.

Maybe luck would have been on my side had Dan succeeded in blinding me that day many years ago. The searing liquid hit me square in the face, but didn’t penetrate into my eyes when my eyes instinctively closed tight. No one can touch that car of his—except him, of course; I learned that the hard way.

Perhaps not being blinded was my downfall. Had I been blinded that day, I wouldn’t be able to see today how I have morphed over the years. I’d forever remember me when I was twenty-five, when I was still desirable.

What happened a few minutes ago when Dan saw me by the mirror? Did he suddenly encounter an old woman instead of his once-young, pretty wife?  Or had he even seen my beauty those many years ago? Perhaps he’s only ever had eyes for his Mustang, for he’s owned that vehicle longer than me. That car’s family, after all. Not to mention the car has retained its beauty and grace throughout the years; its appearance has have never changed, thanks to his meticulousness.

I sneak down the hallway and open the door to the off-limits garage. The Mustang leers at me—the headlights glare and the grill sneers like fangs. The body shines as one titanic twinkling star, revealing reflections of youth and lust. At the far end of the triple-car garage, Dan holds a blow torch, hard at work on an old Chevy. He doesn’t hear the door’s creak nor does he see me enter the forbidden room.

When I stumble over a pile of car parts, I lunge to the Mustang rather than tumble to the concrete where I would chance a bone fracture.

The racket jars Dan from his intense labours. “What you doin’?” he shrieks. “Get off my car!”

I jump back. But it’s too late. My body and greasy fingerprints have marred the gloss of his favourite friend. Within mere seconds, before I realize he’s leaped in front of me, I feel the heat—hotter than anything I’ve ever previously experienced.  

“Take that, you…” The rest of his words are garbled. Someone else might have been able to decipher them, but not me.

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 The Spot Writers- our members:

 RC Bonitz
http://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller
https://valmuller.com/blog

Catherine A. MacKenzie
http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com

 

 

Today I had the chance to interview Clara Bowman-Jahn, a member of the Round Hill Writers and children’s book author of Annie’s Special Day.

 

Clara Bowman-Jahn author photo(1)Tell us about yourself:  I am an immigrant and that has colored my whole life, who I married, how  I raised my children, who my friends are and every aspect of my life even though it was so long ago at age seven. This question is one that could take a long time and be very boring for your readers so I will leave it at that.

Tell us about your book:  My children’s picture book “Annie’s Special Day” is about a little girl who is celebrating her birthday with a different adventure every hour. It is about time and clocks. It is a basic concept book.

 
Did you always know you wanted to be a writer? No I didn’t but I have always written. I have been compelled to write and have three file cabinets full of journals where I have short stories, diary entries, to-do lists, and basically anything my brain needs to remember in them, all in spiral notebooks.

 
What is your “day job”? I am retired from 32 years of nursing and now write full time. That includes marketing and speaking about my book to elementary schools.

Are any elements of your book autobiographical or inspired by elements of your life? Yes, the whole idea sprung from a desire to record the beautiful sounds of birdsong coming through the open window in May one year. They were so splenderfous I invented Annie to “hear” a different bird every hour. What Annie heard has since been edited out but that is what inspired me to write the book. Annie-(01)-outside-cover-na

 
If you were to be stranded on a desert island, what non-survival item would you bring along that you couldn’t live without?  I would bring an empty spiral notebook and pen or pencil. But then it is a survival item so maybe I can’t bring it along.

Are you working on any other projects at the moment? Yes, two other picture books are in the revision stage and I am working on a memoir.

Here’s my facebook  http://www.facebook.com/ClaraBowmanJahnand my twitter      https://twitter.com/#!/@Cbojahn
blog        http://clarbojahn.wordpress.com/
also and finally the place to buy “Annie’s Special Day” is http://www.etreasurespublishing.com/(although it also available on Amazon and Kindle)

This award-winning play starts during the plot of Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun (see my review from last week). We see the drama in Hansberry’s play from the perspective of Russ and Bev, who are selling their house because of bad memories that have happened within it. They don’t seem to care that, by allowing the first black family to purchase a home in an all-white neighborhood, they are causing a firestorm of controversy.

The play is so easy to read that it’s difficult. Reading down the page, sometimes there are conversations carried on with each person saying only one or two words. Sometimes these conversations are funny, but there are often deeper, less humorous things happening beneath the surface. Race relations are brought up early enough with Francine (and her husband Albert) working for the white family. The way Bev and Russ treat “the help” reminds us of the time period, 1959, and the controversy of the original play.

Also making a comeback from the original is Karl Lindner, the man who offered Hansberry’s original characters a great deal of money not to move into the all-white neighborhood. My favorite part of this play is what a jerk Karl is in this play as well. There wasn’t much characterization of him in Hansberry’s original, and I think Norris had a bit of fun with this guy. Betsy, Karl’s wife, is deaf, and I wonder if that’s the only reason she’s married him—because she can’t truly hear what a jerk he is. Still, she must know. Karl fusses about everything from a black family moving in to the neighborhood and the temperature of his iced tea. He is even asked to leave.  But again, this establishes the motif of deafness—either real or metaphorical.

Most jarring about this first section is the trouble that Russ and Bev are dealing with: their son committed suicide after it seems he couldn’t adapt to life again after experiencing war.  He had been accused of killing innocent people during his tour of duty, and he couldn’t handle the guilt. This adds a whole new dimension to the original play; it becomes the reason the Youngers were able to afford such a home when all the other, similar houses were priced much higher. Still, we learn that the Youngers never knew of the history of the house they bought; it seems the family (Bev and Russ) did not want to disclose that information in the interest of selling their home.

In the second part of the play, 2009, a white family is discussing plans to raze the original structure and build a better, bigger house upon it. This first scene is ridiculously uncomfortable, with the couple discussing various by-laws and architectural requirements with other officials and lawyers. They can’t seem to stay focused on one conversation, and as a reader I just wanted to slap them all. In the midst of this ridiculous conversation, Lena keeps trying to speak. She is the great-niece of Lena Younger, the grandmother in A Raisin in the Sun.

In this act, Lena returns to remind everyone of the history of the house (the fact that her great-aunt worked hard to earn the money for the house). It seems, however, that her real concern is that the renovation will start to improve the neighborhood so much that it will start pricing people out of it. It’s noted that the neighborhood, in proximity to the city, is meant to be a working-class neighborhood, but Lena implies that there is now a plan to change that, changing the demographics of the neighborhood along with the housing renovations.  

I found it interesting that the baby motif is continued from the original play. Everyone in the play seems to be expecting. In the original, this was a source of great hope—the perpetuity of one’s family through subsequent generations. This theme is furthered by Lena’s presence, reminding everyone of the history of the neighborhood (despite the fact that the group then gets distracted by discussing how integrating races actually brought more crime to the neighborhood—and then sheepishly try to cover up what had been said). In the end, there’s an argument between the new couple about the expected baby, which it seems the husband doesn’t even want. Hauntingly, the final scene returns to the theme of children, as we see the troubled soldier sitting down to write a note—we know it’s his suicide note—in the presence of his mother.

In the end, there’s a lot to analyze in this play, and it would be helpful to see it performed. In short, everyone has problems and agendas, and—like Walter and Ruth in Hansberry’s original—people rarely, if ever, truly see eye to eye.

Today, I’m happy to feature a cover reveal for Shutter Creek, a romantic suspense novel by Ann Swann, officially released today.

swann2She went looking for an old flame and found a serial killer instead.

When Beth lost her father to cancer and her husband to another woman, she didn’t know where to turn.  So she retreated to the family cabin at Stutter Creek.  Some of the best times of her life were spent at that cabin.  That’s where she met her first crush, a boy named John.  But that was many years ago . . . could he possibly still be around?  Or would she find something sinister instead?

Ann Swann is the author of All For Love, a contemporary love story published by 5 Prince Publishing.  She is the author of Stevie-girl and the Phantom Pilot, and Stevie-girl and the Phantom Student, tales of the supernatural.  She has also written numerous award winning short stories.  She lives in West Texas with her husband and their rescue pets.  She loves libraries and book stores and owns two different e-readers just for fun.  Her to-be-read list has taken on a life of its own.  She calls it Herman.

Excerpt:

Amanda Myers was making a conscious effort to keep her heavy foot off the Toyota’s gas pedal when she spied what appeared to be a small boy standing beside the road. An old fashioned newsboy cap nearly obscured his tiny face.

Mandy hit the brake and steered the Celica toward the gravel shoulder. With a practiced hand, she quickly texted her coworker, Myra, and asked her to concoct a cover story for her tardiness.

The kid had seemed very small in silhouette—maybe five or six years old—and no house or vehicle in sight.

When Myra texted back to say the boss was on the warpath, Mandy replied, “Well, just tell him I stopped to pick up a boy on the edge of town. That should really turn his face red!” It was an inside joke. Everyone knew when the boss’s face was red it was wise to give him a wide berth.

Myra sent back a row of question marks.

“L8R,” Mandy responded. She looked all around. She had assumed the little guy would come dashing up to the car as soon as she had come to a stop. But even when she could no longer hear the crunch of her tires on gravel, he still hadn’t materialized.

I didn’t pass him by that much.

Craning her neck to see past the Toyota’s blind spot, Mandy dropped the phone into the center console drink holder and shoved the gearshift into park. A thick stand of live oaks cast a deep shadow over the bar ditch. The setting sun made the trees appear as black-paper cutouts in a landscape collage.

After checking her mirrors to make sure no one was behind her, Mandy pressed the button to lower the passenger-side window.

It was almost all the way down when a man yanked open the door and exploded into her world like a tornado into a trailer park.  Her hand flew to the gearshift, but she couldn’t engage it.  Even as her flight instinct kicked in, part of her mind was telling her this was almost certainly the same strange guy who had requested her section at the restaurant the night before.  His eyes had seemed to follow her all around the crowded dining room, and his oily stench had made him stand out like a spot of mold on white linen.

Mandy drew in breath to scream, her hand scrambling across the console for her phone or the gearshift, whichever came first, but he was too fast.  With lightning speed, he dove across the seat and slapped a rectangle of duct tape across her mouth.  At the same time, he buried his free hand knuckle deep in the thick blonde braid at the base of her skull even as his other hand slid down to her windpipe and began to squeeze.

Mandy’s fight instinct kicked in then, and she whipped her head back and forth in an effort to dislodge his hands. His stench, and the oily filth of his unkempt hair, was sickening. She clawed at his eyes, ripped at his skin, but it was no use.  The psycho laughed and simply leaned his head back out of her reach.

That’s when Mandy began to claw at her own face, attempting to scratch the silver tape off her mouth. It didn’t matter. There was no one around to hear her scream even if she could have gotten it off.

She wasn’t a quitter, though.  Mandy did her best to get her feet out from under the steering column to kick. But he was pressing down on her with his whole weight. She was trapped. Calmly, the psycho took one hand off her throat, doubled up his fist, and hit her so hard the back of her skull struck the driver’s side window with an audible whap!

Then he went back to her throat. As his deceptively thin fingers crushed her windpipe, Mandy’s grip on reality began to loosen.  Tiny strobes flashed inside her skull.

He squeezed even harder, the tips of his fingers disappearing into the flesh of her throat.

At the last second, as her world began to grow dark, a memory flashed through Mandy’s mind. She remembered how as a small girl of six, she had begun to worry about running out of air because if you couldn’t see something, how did you know how much of it was left? She could see balloons, though. So she had begged her mom to buy several packages of the colorful party staples, which she’d then blown up and stored in her bedroom closet. Her mom humored her. Her older sister, Kami, however, couldn’t let a good thing like that go unnoticed.

She had waited until Mandy was out, then she’d tied all the balloons together and attached them to the stop sign on the corner. Mandy had felt so humiliated when she came home from school and saw them. She’d wanted to get them down and put them back in her closet, but she couldn’t bring herself to do it. She would have let herself run out of air before giving her sister that satisfaction.

The balloon bouquet had wilted quickly in the hot New Mexico sun.

Now, even as she was dying, Mandy grasped the irony of that memory. She really had run out of air. Her last coherent thought—as the fireworks behind her eyelids exploded in the grand finale—was of those wilting, multicolored balloons.

About Ann Swann:swann

Ann lives in West Texas with her handsome hubby and three rescue pets.  All For Love is Ann’s first romance novel.  She is the author of the Young Adult books: The Phantom Series.  Book One is The Phantom Pilot, Book Two is The Phantom Student, and she is hard at work on Book Three, The Phantom of Crybaby Bridge.  Ann has also published short fiction in the anthologies Timeless (paranormal love stories) and Campfire Tales (spooky stories for the young at heart).

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This week’s post comes to us from Val Muller, author of the children’s mystery series Corgi Capers. Val tells us, “To celebrate the release of my horror novel Faulkner’s Apprentice, I thought I’d go dark with my next flash fiction story. Hope you enjoy!” Faulkner’s Apprentice is a supernatural chiller about a young woman who gets more than she dreams of—and exactly what she wanted.

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The tire thud had felt harder than she’d anticipated. Almost like running over a log. Maybe it was her speed. Rhiannon wasn’t going to slow her car, though. No, as soon as she saw him there on the side of the road, her headlights illuminating that sleazy smile of his, she’d pressed her high-heeled toes to the floor.

But after the thud, she slammed on the brakes, skidding to a halt. A crack of thunder echoed in the distance, and Rhiannon looked back. Only an amorphous shape was visible in the rear-view mirror, a lump on the roadway, and she summoned the courage to open the door. She checked whether anyone had seen, but the country road was deserted at this hour—as usual. After all, that’s why Matt forced her to meet him here, week after week after week.

Forced.

Yes, it had been forced. If not for the supplemental income he provided, she would have lost her house. She couldn’t help it that she had been laid off, or that all her money went to her daughter’s cochlear implant surgery. Her relationship with Matt had started off innocently enough. A friendly date. The offer to loan her money for the mortgage. Feelings of guilt that led her to ignore her inhibitions, to give him what he wanted every single week. First she spent the night at his house, or let him stay at hers. Then he made her spend the night in his truck with him. When he got bored with that, he insisted on moving their affairs to places more adventurous. An abandoned barn. A chilly creek. The roof of the restaurant where she worked. Each time, before he made his request, he gave her more money for her house. And of course, he always mentioned her daughter.

“Be a shame if little Angie didn’t have money to go on that field trip you were telling me about.”

“Here’s a little something for Angie. Buy her some new shoes for the summer.”

“Isn’t Angie’s birthday coming up soon?”

By the fourth week, he knew she’d never be able to pay him back.  Not in legal tender, anyway, just as he had hoped. And she’d been stuck, subject to his sick, twisted desires.

After three months, she told him they were through. They had been lying in the corn field after what she hoped would be their final tryst. “I’ll pay you everything back,” she’d promised. “Only, we can’t see each other anymore. It just isn’t healthy.”

He pinned her down, then. His eyes flashed with rage. His was not a healthy mind, and Rhiannon thought it would be the day she would die. “You’ll be back with me because you owe me,” he threatened. “Seven thousand dollars is worth a helluvalot more than three months. I own you for at least three more.” He stood up, throwing a handful of bills—that week’s portion of the mortgage payment—at her trembling body. “You stop seeing me, and I cut you off. And your daughter will have nothing. Is that what you want for little Angie? To be kicked out of your house? To live in some forsaken apartment somewhere? To scrounge for food and clothing? Is your waitress job enough to support the two of you? I heard they’re cutting hours at the diner.”

She was crying, then, and he took her once more, enjoying his power over her. “I’ll see you on Tuesday,” he said after he was finished. “You’ll show up after work, 10:45 on the dot. And you’ll miss me between now and then. Understood?”

She had nodded, crying, on the ground, and even then—as he sashayed away, buttoning up his flannel shirt—she knew she had to kill him.

Now, walking from her car, she looked at the dark silhouette on the roadway. In a flash of lightning, it twitched once—and only once. Her nightmare was over. She looked at her car. Certainly, evidence was all over her bumper and her tires. She doubted there’d be an all-night car wash. Her mind raced. What if she were caught? What could she plead in her defense? Her daughter’s angelic smile flashed across her mind as another bolt of lightning flashed in the sky. A heavy drop splashed into her eye, and she looked up just before the deluge. And then, the skies opened up. The rain washed away the dust of the country road. Already, water pooled in muddy puddles. Her tire tracks would soon be obliterated. She looked at the blob on the roadway. It, too, was being washed away of any incriminating evidence. She sauntered to her car, watching the rain pour over the windshield, the bumper, the fender. It washed over the horrible past of the last few months, washed it away with the dust, and she drove into the night with the sound of rain pounding against her windshield. She smiled as she drove, feeling more refreshed than she had in months, as the corpse of her past grew smaller and smaller in her rear view mirror.

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The Spot Writers- our members:

 RC Bonitz
http://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller
https://valmuller.com/blog

Catherine A. MacKenzie
http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com

 

This week, I had a chance to interview Mysti Parker, author of Hearts in Exile, the third book in her fantasy romance series. Mysti Parker (pseudonym) is a full time wife, mother of three, and a writer. Her first novel, A Ranger’s Tale was published in January, 2011 by Melange Books, and the second in the fantasy romance series, Serenya’s Song, was published in April 2012. The highly anticipated third book, Hearts in Exile, has already Profile Pic 2013_received some great reviews. The Tallenmere series has been likened to Terry Goodkind’s ‘Sword of Truth’ series, but is probably closer to a spicy cross between Tolkien and Mercedes Lackey. Mysti’s other writings have appeared in the anthologies Hearts of Tomorrow, Christmas Lites, and Christmas Lites II. Her flash fiction has appeared on the online magazine EveryDayFiction. She has also served as a class mentor in Writers Village University’s six week free course, F2K. Mysti reviews books for SQ Magazine, an online specfic publication, and is the proud owner of Unwritten, a blog voted #3 for eCollegeFinder’s Top Writing Blogs award. She resides in Buckner, KY with her husband and three children. I look forward to reviewing her book later this summer.

Tell us about yourself: Full time wife, mom of three (four if you count my husband), writer, and caretaker of 3 demanding cats, 1 smart dog, 3 hermit crabs (though one is missing), and a bunch of fish in a big tank. Actually, scratch the fish. They’re my husband’s job. I’m not so good with fish. They tend to go belly-up when left to me. Besides reading and writing, I love good chocolate and a nice red wine. And coffee. We live in Kentucky near Louisville. It’s a great location for proximity to everything, but our summers are hot, and our winters are weird.

Tell us about your book: Hearts in Exile is the third installment in my stand-alone fantasy romance series. It chronicles the life and love of Igrorio (Sir Robert) Everlyn, a paladin who played a major role in Book Two, Serenya’s Song. What makes this story unique from the first two books is that he and Loralee, the heroine, fall in love as youngsters, and we get to see their love develop over the years and in the midst of all kinds of tribulation. And there are dragons!

Betrayal sends Loralee into exile on a hidden island as the Dragon Keeper, while Sir Robert is left to believe she’s been dead for the past decade. Their reunion sheds light on everything that kept them apart, but it also upsets the delicate balance of the island. And, if there’s one place you don’t want to be, it’s on a hidden island with rebellious dragons. Makes for a bad day, if you know what I mean.

Hearts in ExileFINALWho is your favorite character in your book, and why?
It would have to be Loralee. She’s a really strong heroine, and not in the sense of a kick-ass sort of fighter like Caliphany was in the first book, but Loralee’s got a fortitude about her that is admirable. She doesn’t crumple when life gets turned upside down. Sure, she feels it and it would be unrealistic if she didn’t, but she finds ways to overcome each situation she’s put into. One of my favorite quotes from her is after she and Sir Robert are reunited, and he asks her how she can’t hate everyone that was involved in her exile. She responds with:

“I did [hate them] for a long time, until I realized hatred does nothing from such a distance, except to harm the one doing the hating.”

I think it revealed so much about her character and just how strong she is.

What’s your favorite scene or location in the work you’re currently promoting, and why? I love so much of this story, but my favorite part is probably early in the story, after the Great Plague struck. Loralee healed Igrorio (young Sir Robert) from near-death and, as the oldest daughter of the High Priestess, she’s assigned with helping him recover, not only from his injuries, but from the intense grief over losing his parents. She decides he needs a hobby to distract him, so she takes him “dragon hunting”. Since dragons were thought to be extinct at the time, their “hunting” consists of finding dragon-related things all over the city of Leogard. At first, he’s not into it, but by the time they’re through, you can tell he’s healing, and that they’ve fallen for each other. Unfortunately, it’s not meant to last, but those scenes are so poignant and sweet, they’ll definitely stick with me forever.
Are you working on any other projects at the moment? I’ve started a novella featuring Sir Robert’s best friend, Sir Francis and his lady love, Princess Leona. I’m having a lot of fun with it, and hope to publish it before Book Four is finished next year. Here’s the opening paragraph:

Sir Francis Toryn knelt at the executioner’s block. The heavy oak structure, complete with a half-circle indentation fit for a neck of his size, was surprisingly clean. Perhaps the king had ordered a new one carved especially for this day. How very kind of him.

See? Fun!

I’m also working on a series of flash fiction involving a run-down hotel full of quirky characters. It’s based on the time I spent working in one, so I have some stories to tell! Flash fiction provides a great break for me between the novel-writing. And I LOVE my flash fiction critique buddies, the Flash Dance group at Writers Village University!!!

Finally, where can we find you? I float around all over the place. Try one or more of these:
Blog: www.mystiparker.blogspot.com
Facebook Page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Mysti-Parker/103786449704221
Twitter: @MystiParker
Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4625596.Mysti_ParkerMelange Books: http://www.melange-books.com/authors/mystiparker/mystiparker.htmlAmazon: http://www.amazon.com/Mysti-Parker/e/B0055LOTX8/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1

I’m about to read a play called Clybourne Park, which borrows plotline from A Raisin in the Sun, so I thought I’d review the original play this week and review Clybourne Park next week. This review contains nearly a complete plot summary and will thus spoil the play if you haven’t read it. This is a play I teach most years, and I enjoy watching my students’ reaction to it. Just like the younger characters in the play, my students have been somewhat sheltered, and for some, this play opens their eyes.

A Raisin in the Sun is a play that takes place in the predominantly black South Side of Chicago during the time of racism in the mid-to-late 1950s. As the play opens, the Younger family is eagerly awaiting an insurance check for $10,000 (a significant amount of money in those days—much more significant than today). This is a life insurance payout for Walter Younger, the grandfather of the family, who has recently passed. Throughout the play, Mama, the grandmother, reminisces on the work ethic, values, and dreams of her late husband. She references that they had lost one baby to poverty and worked very hard to raise their other two children, Walter and Beneatha, who are now adults and live in the small apartment with Mama, Walter’s wife Ruth, and Walter and Ruth’s son, Travis. Needless to say, it’s a tiny apartment for so many people, but Mama works hard to provide for everyone to have a stable life.

The conflict comes when Walter reveals that he wants to use the insurance money for a business proposition: he wants to open up a liquor store with some friends. On the other hand, Beneatha would gladly accept the insurance money to pay for her schooling—she is currently an undergraduate student (the first in her family to go to college) and wants to be a doctor.

Walter criticizes his sister, telling her she should be a nurse instead, or just get married and be quiet. He disapproves of her ambition and her insistence on vocalizing her opinions on everything, which was not readily accepted for females of her time. At the same time, Walter is trying to become an entrepreneur, which was not easily done for African Americans at the time. Meanwhile, Mama just wants the family to get along. As if the arguments aren’t bad enough, Ruth finds out she’s pregnant with another child, and the family worries about where the baby will sleep—Travis already has to sleep on the couch in the living room, and Mama and Beneatha are doubled-up in Mama’s room. The trouble pushes Ruth to consider having an abortion, and the decision nearly tears the family apart. Walter, selfish to get rich quick, doesn’t seem to care about his wife’s decision. Mama is sorely disappointed, and Ruth is emotionally frustrated.

Mama, who has already lost a child to poverty, resolves to buy a house, allowing Ruth to have the baby. The most affordable house, though, is in an all-white neighborhood. Houses for blacks are much further away and much more expensive. Though the family is hesitant, they are happy to be moving…except Walter.

In the end, Walter makes a stupid decision. He takes the money and invests it with one of his “partners,” a man no one else in the family trusts. The man runs off with the money, leaving the family penniless. They have the chance to sell their house in the all-white neighborhood for a profit—the whites in the neighborhood do not want a black family to move in—or move into the neighborhood and work hard to collectively make enough money to pay off the house. Mama leaves it all up to Walter, who is ready to sell out in exchange for the money.

The final scene is the crux of the play. Walter rehearses to his horrified family just how he will act when the representative of Clybourne Park comes to give him the money in exchange for signing an agreement not to move into the all-white neighborhood. As he rehearses, he begins in a bitter way, but his dialogue breaks down so that at the end, he is speaking in a dialect that would have been used by slaves. In a sarcastic way, he is telling the imaginary man that he and his family are not worthy of living in the neighborhood—they are not human beings, and they have no right to dirty the white neighborhood. At this point in the play, Walter is crying because he realizes the true significance of his decision and words, especially because his young son is watching. Walter realizes how wrong he was, that he and his family need to retain their dignity, even at the cost of hard work and sacrifice.

It’s an important decision that perplexes my students every year (“Why didn’t he just take the money and screw the white neighborhood? Hell, I’d do it over again in another white neighborhood, too, and get rich off of ‘em!”). But in the historical context, it’s an important decision. Throughout the play, Mama references the fact that she lived so close to slavery that for her, pride and dignity—and basic luxuries like a safe place to live with enough food—are things she appreciates, but things that her children take for granted. This sense of pride is found again at the end of the play.

Just like Beneatha is trying to forge the way for other women to become doctors, Walter and his family decide to forge the way for people of all backgrounds to live in neighborhoods that would eventually, even if decades later, would no longer be segregated. It’s an inspiring ending and important for the younger generations to read. They live in a different world, and it’s healthy for them to understand the struggles that people fought so that we live in a largely equal world with largely equal rights.

If you aren’t able to see the play performed, it’s a quick read.

I look forward to reading Clybourne Park and see what Bruce Norris does with this storyline.

The Spot Writers are back! We goofed off for a while, but here we are again. No serial novel this time—we’re doing Flash Fiction or whatever comes into our heads. Our contribution this week comes from RC Bonitz, author of A Blanket for Her Heart and the A Little Bit of– series

 Courage in The Bookstore

 She checked her lipstick in the mirror and touched it up a bit. Fluffed her hair, then ran a brush through it just to be sure. Her stomach twitched with nerves as she finished and prepared to step from the car. Was this it? Could she pull it off? No harm in trying.

Should she sashay into the store or just walk in normally? Best not to overdo, right? Well, maybe. Well, of course. She shouldn’t be too obvious; he’d think she was a ditz. He was smart—had to be. He worked in bookstore didn’t he?

A bell tinkled when she entered the store and the woman at the cash register looked up with a smile. “Good morning.”

Darn, where was he? “Hi,” Maggie said, her heart sinking.

“Can I help you?”

“No thanks, I just want to browse,” she muttered. After she’d worked so hard to build up her courage he had to be there. He just had to. Maybe he was in the back. Unpacking new books. Gift wrapping. Except no one else was in the store. Darn, darn, darn.

Maggie drifted down the nearest aisle, pretending to read titles. She pulled a book from a shelf and idly read the back cover, then put it back. What was it about—she’d forgotten already.

“I thought I heard a customer come in.”

That deep voice was unmistakable! He’d been in an aisle or in the back, but had come out to the register now. Her heart thrilled. And that anxiety went into a high speed rush. What to do? If only that woman would take a walk somewhere.

“One did. She’s in the first aisle,” the woman said. There was a pause and then the woman went on. “Go see if she needs help.”

What was that about? Hadn’t she said she’d browse? The woman was sending him to help her? Maggie groaned. Was she that obvious?

“Hi, good morning,” he said behind her.

She turned, her cheeks warm and probably bright red. “Hi.”

God, he looked so handsome. Six-two at least, with those dark eyes and that perfect face; he took her breath away.

He grinned. “It’s you.”

“What? Yes, it’s me.” What did that mean?

“Sorry, that sounded dumb. It’s just that you’ve been in a lot lately.” His grin softened and his eyes twinkled. “And you haven’t bought a single book.”

She grabbed one off the shelf without looking. “I’m buying one today.”

“You like Romance novels then?”

“Yes, oh yes.”

“That’s a cookbook.”

“What? Oh yes, I like them too,” she said. Oh what a mess she was making of this. He’d think she was a total ditz.

“What’s your name?”

“Maggie. Corcoran.” Had to get that last name in there if she wanted him to call her. At least she did that right. God, her hands were sweating. And it was a good thing she wore deodorant today.

“That’s a nice name. I’m Greg. Hanscom. I’m pleased to meet you.”

He got his last name in there too? He was pleased to meet her? Was he thinking what she was thinking? Oh my gosh! What should she say? It was time to sashay a little.

“You don’t have to buy that book, you know. But, I’d like to have your phone number,” he said softly.

She gave him a big smile. It was definitely time to sashay. “It’s 555-5555.”

His face crinkled into happiness. “I go on break in a few minutes. Can I buy you a coffee?”

 

 

The Spot Writers- our members:

 RC Bonitz
http://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller
https://valmuller.com/blog

Catherine A. MacKenzie
http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com