Val Muller

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In case you missed it, here are some notable stops on my Faulkner’s Apprentice blog tour:

This book hooked me from the start. It begins with a deranged boy, Don Julius, trying to solve a code hidden in a book. We learn that this is the bastard son of the king. When the king arrives to pay a visit to the boy’s mother, he scolds Don Julius for not being masculine enough. He slaps the boy, “encouraging” him to get drunk and sleep with lots of women. This action has a profound effect on the boy, who had been using the mystery of the code to calm his various ailments—both his thoughts and his physical ailments. It’s left to imagine all the horrible things he’ll do to women over the following years (and he does!).

The book transitions to the story of Marketa, a young woman who helps her family by working at their bathhouse. At this time in history, bathing was not the respected custom it is today. The family’s bathhouse provides full-service bathing—and I do mean full service. As she blossoms to womanhood, a man becomes enamored with Marketa. She is disgusted, but her mother forces her to do things like sit naked for him and help make his bath time extra pleasurable. Marketa, however, is a girl of science. Despite her gender, she wants nothing more than to learn her father’s trade of bloodletting. She is infatuated with the human body and how it works, and she refuses to sleep with anyone at the bathhouse, even if it means she’s losing out on extra money for her family.

The two storylines merge when the king sends his son to a facility located in Marketa’s town, located away from the king. The king has promised the deranged young man a position—if he can be healed. Marketa’s father is enlisted to help with the bloodletting that promises to help Don Julius. As well, the king has allowed the boy to start looking at the coded book once more, as this seems to have worked to quell his craziness years prior. Don Julius has noticed Marketa, however, and has demanded her presence at the bloodletting. He seems to think Marketa has emerged from inside his coded book. Obsessed is an understatement.

In addition, Marketa has secretly been asked to report on the patient’s progress to an agent of the king—in exchange for the most updated medical news from Prague. To add to the mix, Marketa and her father have been having visions of a lady in white—we learn little of this save that it’s some type of omen, and it’s important to note whether the woman is wearing white or black gloves (Marketa sees no gloves; her father sees black ones).

This book is well-written, with just enough mystery and darkness to captivate me. I recommend it to anyone interested in a historical book in which the storyline merges well with the history of the time to make it come alive. Though the storylines are somewhat disturbing, I recommend this book for anyone with a penchant for things dark.

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~ About the Author ~

Urania Sarri 2Urania Sarri lives in Korinthia, Greece with her husband and sons.

She holds a BA in English Language and Literature and an Msc in Teaching English to speakers of other languages (TESOL). She specializes in teaching English to young adults and she totally adores her job. While doing so, she takes any opportunity to convey to her students the passion of reading. She is fascinated by paranormal stories and appreciates good romance whenever she gets her hands on it!

 

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~ About the Book ~

Title: Beguiled

Author: Urania Sarri

Published: Self Published

Genre: Paranormal, Time-Travel, Romance

Content Warning: Subtle Sensuality

 

~ Synopsis ~

The war between the present and the future has started. Compelled to cooperate with the forces of the future in order to gain Christopher back, Emma has taken on a new mission. The portal that connects the two worlds must be relocated otherwise there is no hope for humanity. But there are so many obstacles she has to overcome; Christopher has given up on their love, her best friend has been kidnapped and the life-changing truth about her family is revealed. Worst of all, a new, unexpected menace under the name Frederick, Christopher’s evil double, threatens their lives.

Will she be able to secure the future of mankind and claim the love she has fought so hard for? What if Christopher has decided to sacrifice himself again in order to save her?

In Beguiled, the second book of the Gate Deadlock series, love knows no deadlocks.

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~ Excerpt ~

When the rain got me, I was still running along an unfamiliar street that seemed endless on both directions. Within seconds, the drizzle became a cold downpour that soaked me to the bone, plastering the thin shirt and jeans onto my body. My hair was sticking on my face, pricking my eyes like dozens of needles, but I didn’t stop. Lost in a haze of despair, I could not comprehend the faint voice in my head that warned me to go back. I kept running away. Where I was heading, I could not tell anymore. Everything around me seemed strange and obscure; no houses, no shelter, only the perennial olive trees and the murky veil of rain. For the last two years in my life, every day, every minute, every second had been spinning around one single pivot; that rescue mission had been the only pivot of my new life. It had defined my actions, my thoughts, and my whole existence. I had gone a long way, overcoming any personal limit and fear, transcending time, only because I was fixed on a purpose. I had left my old life behind.

I had a life once.

Now, my mission was my life. A mission that had taken me far away from my family, my friends, my studies and my future. But I did not care anymore. I had chosen my destiny. It had always been about him. Christopher. He had turned his back on me and the pivot support had suddenly vanished. I had nothing to lean on. My whole life was collapsing. I was collapsing. There was no angel coming to my rescue this time.

A sharp pain in my chest blocked my breath, forcing me to stop. But I welcomed the pain, didn’t want it to ease out. Strangely enough, it seemed to be the right thing to feel. This is how some people have died, right? Perhaps this could be the end…

“Hey, you’re standing in the middle of the street!” a voice in my head shouted. “And that yellow light approaching is about to crash into you in minutes. Can’t you hear it? You have to move to the side. Don’t just stand there. It’s a car! It’s definitely a car and the veil of hale certainly does not help. MOVE!”

Then why wasn’t I moving? Could I be waiting for the car to put an end to this excruciating obstacle race I had started?

I closed my eyes and held my breath as the roaring sound of the car approached.

 

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This is the story of a boy named Caleb who was given up for adoption as a baby. He is raised at a horrible orphanage until he’s rescued by a relative who opens his eyes to an entire world of magic that exists. He is taken to Elemental in order to catch up on his training (it took many years for Caleb to be found, and he is late in starting his training). When he arrives, things get heated quickly, with the magical world being attacked by enemies.Picture

For me, the story began with tension in the very first pages—a father having to give up his boy for adoption at an orphanage he knew was not ideal (or else risk the infant dying). It was a poignant chapter and had me cheering for the characters to succeed. This scene was very effective: it slowed the action down to provide indirect characterization of the father, the orphanage staff, and even the baby.

But the plot quickly sped up and turned “happy” with Caleb being adopted a few years later and the orphanage being punished and reformed for its terrible treatment of children. (Tension could have been increased by focusing on how he made it through all those years, making the reader more desperate to see the orphanage punished). The tension for me was then lost until halfway through the book, when the attacks on Elemental began. In the middle part prior to the attack, too many happy things were happening, and there was always description of all the types of food the children were being served for meals. Trying to put myself back into my childhood days, food was not a primary interest, but I would definitely have pondered other details, such as the appearance of the magical creatures, arriving in a new world, etc.

I enjoyed the plot of this tale, but a problem I have with any books about wizarding or magic schools is that I can’t help comparing them to Harry Potter. This is no fault of any of the authors—just something that can’t be helped. That said, my main suggestion for this book would be to focus more on showing rather than telling. The book is told from a largely omniscient perspective, which makes it easy for us to understand the whole story. But at times I longed for a more limited point of view, especially from Caleb’s perspective. I wanted to experience the story from a child’s point of view. There would obviously be so many complex feelings involved in being adopted, discovering a family, discovering magic, and discovering latent abilities—and having to confront hidden memories from a forgotten past. Because of the omniscient perspective, I felt that Caleb accepted things too readily, and the story happened too quickly.

What I enjoyed the most was the message woven throughout the text. The people of Elemental, while not overtly religious, have strong faith in the world, a higher power, whatever you want to call it. This faith helps them know themselves and understand their place in the world and beyond it. This contrasts sharply with the enemies Caleb encounters, who have a selfish and confused view of the world that leaves them lost. I enjoyed this message, as I believe all fantasy stories ultimately come down to a discussion over philosophy of life, with magic and other elements helping us to metaphorically understand ourselves better.

The author clearly has a great imagination. I would suggest slowing down the plot to let us experience things from Caleb’s perspective. Still, this was a fast, imaginative read with a  great message.

I’m excited to announce the release of the official trailer for Faulkner’s Apprentice. 

The Kindle version of the novel is only $2.99, which you can purchase here. Enjoy!

 

 

As the author of a light-hearted mystery series for kids, people have been asking me lately, “why horror?” Some seem surprised that mild-mannered Val would write about ghosts and murder and a bad man who seeks everyone’s demise.

The reason I like horror is the same reason I like 1984 by George Orwell. In 1984, Winston’s spirit is tested to its breaking point—and it breaks. The novel does not follow the typical formula of an archetypal tale. There is no return to home with a new mastery of the world—at least, not in the traditional sense. 1984 ends in what I consider the most despairing final scene in literature. Though the tone of the last chapter is calm and happy, the irony between tone and content is horrifying: Winston has been completely broken down by months (years?) of torture and brainwashing, and he is convinced that the enemy of all mankind’s freedoms, Big Brother, a being/idea he once detested, is there solely for his benefit. In the end, his spirit is completely broken. He loves Big Brother, and he cries tears of happiness that he has finally been saved from himself and his horrible thoughts of freedom.

For me, 1984 is a wake-up call. Sure, it’s a hyperbole (at least for now!), but each time I read it, which is at least once per year, I get chills. I imagine all the horrible things that might become of our society, and I appreciate what I have all the more. I take more deliberate steps to educate myself about things that could, at some point, turn our world into an Orwellian nightmare.

Horror has the same effect on me. When I read horror (and I prefer psychological, suspense horror—not hack-and-slash horror), I am awakened from the banality of life. In Faulkner’s Apprentice, Lorei is stuck in a rut, working dead-end jobs in hopes of making it big as a writer. She gets annoyed at her friends (whose lives seem to be coming together rather nicely), but she doesn’t quite appreciate all that she has going for her. When the bad man enters her life, Lorei is awakened. When the bad man threatens her mother’s ailing mind, Lorei realizes how much she has taken her mother for granted. When the bad man tempts Lorei with a taste of success, Lorei realizes just how much she wants to achieve success that she was previously unwilling to work for. Though it happens in a disturbing, sometimes gruesome, way, the horror in Faulkner’s Apprentice awakens Lorei.

I don’t like the Saw movies at all. I have never been able to get through an entire one (at least, not without looking away), and I never tried to make it past Saw II. But I completely “get” the premise (at least, as far as I understand it from the limited amount of screen-time I was able to see). The mastermind in Saw who tortures people has a somewhat admirable motive at its core: he wants his victims to truly appreciate life, and he believes that by pushing them to the brink of death, he will achieve his goal. Granted, the way he goes about teaching them to appreciate life is illegal, immoral, demented, despicable, and disgusting. Yes, so disturbing that I can’t even bear to watch. But the point of those films is a hyperbole of the point I am making here. Horror pushes us to the edges of our comfort zone with the goal of awakening us from the blending-together of days in our lives.

With so much technology and so many conveniences, it’s easy for the days to blend into each other, for years to happen without our consent. Horror, for me, is an alarm clock, a wake up that pushes us to—in the words of Thoreau—live deliberately.


Faulkner's ApprenticeYou can check out Faulkner’s Apprentice for about the cost of a cup of coffee at this link.

Lorelei Cecelia Franklin broke a twenty-year streak of bad luck when she won the L. Cameron Faulkner fiction contest. Apprenticed to the reclusive and famous author, Lorei will spend three weeks with the master of horror himself in the secluded mountains of Virginia. On her way to Faulkner’s mansion, Lorei meets a leathery man who snares souls that desire too much, and everything in the mansion screams warnings against him. But with her lust for Faulkner, her appetite for fame, and her wish to protect her ailing mother, Lorei’s chances for escape are slim.

As a freedom lover myself, I absolutely adored this book! Yes, I know I just ended that sentence with an exclamation mark, but this book deserves it. This is a futuristic/dystopian novel set in a future civilization that loosely follows the traditions of the earth we know. The book follows Matty, a seventeen-year-old living in this futuristic society, as he is tested by the king to solve the mystery of “What was January Black?”

It’s going to be hard to provide much summary of this book. Since the whole thing is a mystery, anything I include is likely to spoil the fun of solving the mystery yourself. But I’ll give you a few important points: Matty is somewhat rebellious and is ashamed to have his father hold the rank of commandant. He prefers living freely, not under the watchful eye of the government, which his father only helps condone and enforce. Matty finds himself becoming friends with the king (and from the start, you will wonder about this. The king seems overly nice to Matty. Is there something up with that? Is Matty being set up? What are the king’s motives? You will wonder this, but you won’t find it out completely until the end).

Throughout the novel, there are references to artifacts and snippets of items from the Old World that have been all but lost: a snippet of Patrick Henry’s famous speech. A “Don’t Tread on Me” flag. Aging books in a world of e-readers. Matty seems naturally drawn to these artifacts of the Old World, and the king’s challenge only pushes him further into his obsession with books and research.

As far as everyone in the society knows, January Black is the name of the ship that was used to bring people to Columbia, the land where everyone now resides. But when Matty turns in his report explaining so, the king tells him he is wrong, and Matty spends the rest of the book trying to uncover the hidden truth. There’s an element of romance in the novel as well: Matty falls in love with Iris, a gardener (gardening is not approved for someone of Matty’s high social class, but he defies society and dates her anyway).

Without spoiling any more, I will say that we slowly learn that Matty’s society is a controlling one. Everyone is being tracked by the government, and it’s implied that this first started with “good intentions” such as the government being able to more effectively track citizens for medical reasons benefiting said citizens. But it seems things have swung too far toward a “Big Brother” government. I enjoyed watching Matty discover the hidden truths about his own government (which controls the country’s media content) and about the history of the country and why it is hidden. This is a great read for lovers of freedom and fans of American history. It’s fun but frightening to imagine how easily our world might turn in to Matty’s one day.

Yes, another classic. I’m teaching it again this year, so I thought I’d post a review while I’m thinking about it. This book is among my favorites. Mark Twain’s sense of humor permeates the story, yet there’s a serious underlying issues that he treats with intelligence and grace.

The story follows Huck Finn, a thirteen-year old boy living in Missouri just prior to the Civil War. Tired of being “sivilized” by the widow who has adopted him, yet terrified of his abusive, alcoholic father, Huck fakes his own death and runs away. On his way, he meets Jim, a runaway slave (and friend from Huck’s town) who recently learned he’s going to be sold to a plantation further south—far away from his family. Torn by society’s standards (it’s wrong to help a runaway slave, and the widow already told Huck he might be headed toward “the bad place” when he dies) and his own moral compass (Jim is his friend, and even though he is a slave, he seems strangely like a human being!), Huck decides to help Jim escape.

Using the lens of a thirteen-year old boy, Twain criticizes society of the time, making the statement that people are ignorant and cruel, and morals should be individually-calibrated, not dictated by others.

First, the ugly. This book has a history of being banned, but mostly because people have no common sense. Twain uses the n-word in this book more than two hundred times. As a result, some school districts have banned the teaching of the book. Some have even called the book “racist.” But the most important thing to understand is: this book is an anti-slavery, anti-racist work. Twain was trying to show, through ignorant (though comical) characters, how closed-minded humans can be and how it’s sometimes impossible when living by society’s accepted standards to do the right thing. Kind of ironic to have people boycotting the book and proving Twain’s sad truth about humans right, even over a hundred years later.

But the entire work is praising the anti-slavery movement (in fact, the book was written after the Civil War, but Twain still wanted to show his thoughts about the south, and racism, in general). The n-word in the book is used in a descriptive way, not a derogatory one (though, granted, the word itself has come to have a very derogatory connotation) the same way I might say, “there’s a hairless rat.” A slave is a terrible thing to be (and thus, to be called), but the term in the book is only meant to refer to a slave, not to insult it. On the surface level, the book is an adventure and coming-of-age tale. Huck encounters numerous friends and foes and goes on lots of adventures before everything works out (mostly) well in the end.

On a deeper level, the novel is a satiric look at society. Some key elements: at once point, Huck becomes involved with a family that has been feuding with another for generations. The go so far as to bring guns to church and scold each other for being too slow to arrive with a gun when the threat of their enemies is nigh. In another section of the novel, Huck meets two tricksters who call themselves the Duke and the King. They are despicable, but Twain uses them to illustrate the worst in humanity. At one point, they put on a “fake” Shakespearean play, raking in lots of money for tickets. When half the town is fooled and angered about losing their money, Huck thinks it’s time for the King and Duke to run away before they’re caught. But the King and the Duke know people too well: those who were tricked do not reveal the tricksters; rather, they allow the other half of the town to waste their money on the fake Shakespearean play.

I won’t go into more detail about plot summery—there’s always Sparknotes, as my students like to remind me—but I will say that this novel is humorous and touching, a satirical work with just the right amount of optimism. My favorite part of the book, though, is the ending. Huck returns to society and realizes that he doesn’t want to deal with people after all (a boy after my own heart!), and so he hightails it out West. It’s something I think we’d all like to do at times–even if just metaphorically.

In an effort to teach myself Photoshop’s “pen” tool (which can be used to create computer illustrations), I created this scene from Faulkner’s Apprentice:

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The scene is a compilation of a few concepts in the novel. The woman in front is the protagonist, Lorelei. Lorei’s dream has always been to be an author, but she’s never been willing to put in the effort that will earn her success. She miraculously wins a horror contest, landing her a three-week stay with the king of horror, L. Cameron Faulkner. But her efforts seem to come too easily, and her circumstances seem too good to be true. She finds herself followed by “the bad man,” nearly a Svengali to her. Through the novel, strange tears in the wallpaper continue to perplex her as well, and she learns that everything at the Faulkner mansion is not as it seems…

I created the above computer illustration based on this very rough sketch:

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I think I finally understand how the pen tool works. Now I just have to work on shading and adding depth and textures.

Anyway, if you’re in the mood for artwork, here’s one final piece I put together while, once again, practicing my Photoshop skills:

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This scene takes place in the basement, in my mind the creepiest location in any house. The bad man is once again plaguing Lorei, this time in an unseen way. I like the expression on the model’s face–she is horrified and yet cannot look away. In the novel, Lorei finds herself doing things she wishes she wouldn’t. And the bad man’s eyes have just the perfect touch of evil and sick enjoyment of her torment.

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