Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story in which mistaken identity plays a major role. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series. Find out more at www.CorgiCapers.com.

A New York Reunion

Val Muller

With her son moved out–he was on a three-month surveying expedition in Africa, and largely out of contact for the duration–the house was too quiet. How many times could she vacuum and dust Rob’s room? An absent son left no messes to clean. Funny, all those years when cleaning and cooking and laundry seemed never-ending. And now what she wouldn’t give for a son or a husband to care for.

Janet knew she’d have to downsize. It wasn’t really the money: Micheal’s life insurance policy had paid for the house and left her a modest safety net. Her job at the college paid all her bills, so she saved Micheal’s nest egg for retirement. But she was too young to retire. She had too much life left. And the house kept her too tied to her son and late husband. She was an empty-nester now. Now it was time to focus on herself.

Which is why she found herself in the City. The college was out for a brief fall break–yes, even special collections librarians got the time off–and she took the four-day weekend to bus into the city. She stayed at a modest hotel outside of Manhattan (it was still ridiculously expensive, but what the heck?). She decided not to do all the touristy things. She’d seen the sights before, done all the touristy things back in her college days. This time, she visited local shops, looked off the beaten path.

Which is what brought her to KatKafe. She’d stopped in expecting a cup of coffee only to find the KatKafe was actually a book store, with no caffeine or cats to be found. She browsed the shelves. The books were all so new and supple. Nothing like the fragile collections she housed at the library. Here, she could actually handle the books, touch their pages, indulge for enjoyment and let down her guard.

This morning, during a walk through Central Park, she remembered the tapestry she’d hung on her dormitory wall. Everyone had a tapestry back then, it seemed. Hers was from freshman year, a highly-stylized illustration of a dozen or so angels meeting on the head of a pin. They were surrounded by celestial miasma. And didn’t that perfectly capture her personality in college? It was all about possibilities and pushing limits.

And there were the handfuls of friends in various circles, ones she still saw on social media but not personally in years. Decades. Gosh, she’d gotten old. There were her junior-year apartment-mates: Jennifer, Jess, and Jenn (the 4 J’s, they were called). Then there were her library cohort buddies: Matt and Ashley and Riley. And a handful of friends from the hip-hop club where she bravely but pitifully practiced her dancing skills.

There was Henry, of course. There was always Henry. He was the one that got away. After two years of on-again, off-again, they simply drifted apart. She always suspected they were too passionate about each other. The intensity of her feelings scared her, anyhow. Made her stupid and irrational. But isn’t that what love does? With Micheal it had been different. Words had come easily to her. Her heart didn’t flutter stupidly when he entered the room, but intellectual conversations flowed prodigiously. Micheal was more like a comfy hoodie. Henry was like bungee jumping. And you can’t bungee jump every second of your life, can you?

Janet was flipping through a book about the cosmos in the KatKafe when she saw him again. His hair was gray now, but its wild cowlicks were unmistakable. When he looked up from his book–he was also browsing in the section on natural sciences–the sparkle in his eye pierced her heart. Isn’t that just like fate, to throw him back at her in a second chance after all these years…

“Henry?” she screamed. But she didn’t scream it. She didn’t even say it. Her mind willed it, but her mouth would not comply. Her heart fluttered ridiculously, just as it had always done. Why did Henry make her so stupid? Just. Say. Hi. You are a grown woman. What is wrong with you? She forced herself to think of things scarier than talking to Henry. Childbirth. Her son leaving home. Losing her husband. This is nothing, you silly cow. Say. Hi. To. Him.

She cleared her throat and he looked up.

Oh, come on, she plead. But her brain-body sabotaged all efforts. Say. Something.

He smiled. That same lopsided smile that melted her heart. “I see we have similar tastes.” He pointed with his eyes to her book.

“You know I’ve always fancied space,” she managed.

“Same,” he said.

Her mind raced, but every word in the English language meant nothing.

Say. Something.

“I’m here alone,” she said. The words surprised her. So she was going for blunt honesty? Desperation, even? Maybe. Maybe she was tired of being alone. “I mean, my son is grown and moved out. And my husband’s been gone for…” He was cocking his head. Was this a good thing? Should she stop talking? She shook her head. “I’m sorry. I just thought, after all these years, why beat around the bush anymore, right? You’re here, I’m here. I thought this was an actual cafe, and I really need a coffee. Would you–care to join me?” She realized she ought to smile, and she was shocked to find herself already beaming, without her knowledge.

He smiled back and grabbed the book out of her hand, bringing it to the cash register. “My treat,” he said. “I always thought the way to a woman’s heart was through books, not drinks.”

She raised an eyebrow and nodded. Henry had certainly grown more assertive, too. She eyed his fingers as he paid for the books. Not a wedding ring to be found. Last she’d heard, he’d been married, but he wasn’t big on social media, and she was too ashamed to stalk him. Maybe the stars were finally aligning.

“There’s a great shop right down the block. We can get a cup, and I know a little park bench we can snag.” He handed her the newly-purchased book.

“Thanks, Henry,” she said.

He looked confused. “Good guess,” he said. “That would be something if it were right. It’s James,” he said, taking her hand.

Her hand went limp for just an instant before she firmed it up and laced her fingers with James’. He was neither a warm hoodie nor a bungee jump. He was somewhere in the middle. Like a new flavor of coffee and a book she’d never heard of. And maybe that was just what she needed.


 

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

editing_logoA friend loaned me this book last year, but in my sleep-deprived state, the metaphors in the first chapter were lost on me as impractical, and I put it off to the side in hopes of something more blunt. Fast-forward some months later, and I was able to read the entire book (It’s just over 100 pages) on a nice late summer Labor Day. Yes, even with two kids involved!

I always enjoy reading other writers’ “how to” books, or books in which they tackle the subject of writing. Most of them agree that there is no definite right way, or single way, to accomplish a novel. In fact, most writers agree that each novel is unique for each writer, and each writer’s process is different from the rest.

Dillard uses many metaphors in this book, following her preference for literary writing. They resonate and make her points for her. In a quote that I pulled to read to my AP Literature students when we talk about reading to appreciate and analyze literature, she writes, “The reader’s ear must adjust down from the loud life to the subtle, imaginary sounds of the written word.” In this section, she writes of the differences between movies and novels, and how those who like movies are not generally readers, questioning why so many authors try to write books that would appeal to non-readers in the first place. In other words, make use of the written word as its own medium. She certainly did this in the way she wrote the novel–without chronological organization and with generous use of metaphor.

She certainly follows her own advice, revealing details about her writing life at planned moments to make points stronger. One of the main takeaways was that she really detests the writing life. It’s a calling, for sure, but she seems to do what she can do put off writing, at least in her anecdotes. This is interesting to me. I suppose, working full time and parenting, when I make time for writing, I truly appreciate it. But I have heard from so many people that when something becomes your full-time job, you end up detesting it. Dillard’s book surprised me in that she focused on so many of the physical details of her writing life, such as heating up water for coffee or looking out the window of her writing retreat. (For me, I write whenever and whereever I can, and I couldn’t honestly tell you all those details. It’s interesting to read about the struggles of a full-time writer).

The other takeaway that stood out to me is the idea that a writer will never be able to fully capture the concept that started the need to write the novel. She did not explicitly mention the poem, but the advice reminds me of “Kubla Khan,” in which Coleridge expresses frustration at not being able to capture the entirely of his vision. As Dillard notes, the medium–paper and words–will necessarily fail us, and the medium itself starts to impose its own meaning, changing the work as we try to capture something ephemeral and transcendent.

I did not leave the book with the secrets of writing. I did come away feeling that some of my writing struggles are common to other writers. I was reminded about the fact that rough drafts can be really bad, and that some days are spent simply taking out sentences that were put in the day before. Writing is a process and a slow one for most.

The book is a fast read with some interesting metaphors. If you’re a writer, it’s worth a quick read–if nothing else, it will help you procrastinate for another two hours or so 😉

Welcome to The Spot Writers. August’s prompt is to use these five words in a story or poem: besides, fishes, inn, owing, born.

This week’s story comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara dreams, reads, edits texts, translates, and occasionally writes in two languages. She also has a lot of fun.

The Botanical Mystery Writer

by Chiara De Giorgi

“If you need me, I’ll be at the inn!”

I stepped outside and strode to the car. As soon as I sat behind the wheel, I regretted my words. The whole point of me staying at the inn for a few days was to get away, to have more space, to be quiet and finally be able to concentrate and write. The twelve chapters I was owing to my editor were screaming to be written, but there was always something more urgent, more important, more… I don’t know.

It was so frustrating! I had been so happy, when my agent had called me! Guess what? I sold your botanical mystery series! It’ll be a success, I tell you! It is as if you were born to be a botanical mystery writer! Yeah, well: apparently I was also born to be the wild card for my family, especially after that fateful phone call.

The advance from the publisher was good enough for me to quit my job as an underpaid waitress at the lousy diner just outside town, and my brother and sisters were quick to take advantage of the situation, Since you’re not working, please take Mother to the doctor’s tomorrow. Since you’re not working, please be a good auntie and pick up the twins after ballet class. Since you’re not working, please go to the grocery store and buy food for everyone. And so on. I’ve been so busy with everybody else’s needs, I haven’t had the time to sit down and write, yet. And my first deadline is coming up, in just a week. That’s why I booked a quiet room at the inn in the woods. I shouldn’t have told them.

Stupid, stupid, stupid, I muttered while driving up the winding road. They had never taken me seriously, neither me nor my ambition to become a writer. This world needs people who work with their hands, not people who play with their words. Why don’t you do something useful, something worthy? Do you really think you’ll be able to live off your books? And what’s a botanical mystery, anyway?

I gripped the steering wheel and grunted. Oh, I so wanted to show them! Maybe they’d been boycotting me on purpose.

Suddenly I pushed the brake pedal. I had never noticed that sign before: a B&B right up the hill. Not the inn everybody knew about. The sign said “B&B He Fishes – The Perfect Retreat – 4 miles”. If I met fishermen, they could assist me with the plot twist I was considering, which involved the attempted murder of a fisherman. The B&B was only four miles on the left, while the inn was twelve miles up north. It would save me precious time, besides being somewhere nobody would be able to find me.

I quickly typed a message and sent it to all my siblings: “If you need me, I WON’T be at the inn”. Then switched off the phone and turned left.

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

Welcome to The Spot Writers. August’s prompt is to use these five words in a story or poem: besides, fishes, inn, owing, born.

This week’s story comes from Cathy MacKenzie. Cathy’s novel, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, is available from her locally or on AmazonMISTER WOLFE (the sequel) coming soon!

“Go Fish”

by Cathy MacKenzie

Amber looked up toward the large blue-shingled house, which was so unfamiliar to her. What little they’d moved into the house two days previous was in disarray. The bulk of their furniture and other possessions weren’t due to be delivered for another week. Until then, the family would sleep at the Riverside Inn and spend days at the house.

According to her mother, there was plenty to do at the new house. “Dad has to mow the lawn, and I have to clean,” she’d said. “You kids can organize your rooms.” She had smiled. “And play, too. Summer will soon be over.”

Right, Amber thought. Organize our rooms? What is there to organize?

She was thankful she didn’t have to deal with school the same time as the move. But Labour Day would soon be upon them, marking the end of summer vacation. Luckily, her parents had bought a house in the same neighbourhood, so she and her brother, Julien, would still be attending the same schools.

Her mother couldn’t understand why it had to take so long for their furniture to be packed up and delivered. “Spencer, why don’t we rent a truck and move ourselves? This is ridiculous,” she had spouted. “We’re less than ten blocks away, for Pete’s sake.”

Apparently, the end of July was the busiest time for movers in their area, and Amber’s father wouldn’t admit he had procrastinated calling the moving company. She knew he had messed up when she overheard him arguing on the telephone with the company. She was glad he’d apologized or they might never have gotten a moving date.

Amber liked their new house, which was much larger than their previous one. The grounds were more spacious, too. Numerous colourful flowers grew alongside the house, mostly all foreign to her, although she did recognize the daisies.

And, of course, she was familiar with rose bushes that bordered one side of the fish pond.

But what good was a fish pond without fish?

“I can’t believe there’s no fish,” she said, glancing at her brother.

“Yeah, according to Dad, the previous owner said they died.”

“I don’t know why we can’t get more.”

Julien sighed. “Mom can’t be bothered. She figures Dad won’t help out and then it’ll all fall on her. In the spring she said we can get some. She hates the thought of them in the cold all winter. You know her.”

“But goldfish are supposed to survive over the winter. Though I don’t know how.”

“You’re supposed to make sure there’s a hole in the ice so the fish can breathe while they hibernate.”

“If they hibernate, why do they need a hole in the ice?”

Julian glared at her. “I don’t know. Just what I’ve read.”

“Dad says you read too much.”

“Yeah, well Mom says you daydream too much.”

She ignored him and stared into the pond. She shook the unopened container of fish food, which she had grabbed off the shelf in the garage.

“I’m going to sprinkle some food on the water. Maybe if the other people had fed them, they’d still be alive.”

“No sense feeding dead fish,” Julien said.

Ignoring her brother, she unscrewed the lid and sprinkled flakes on the water.

“It’s probably old. That’s why they left it,” Julien said. “Outdated. Not good for anything. And you know what? If the owners said they hadn’t fed the fish for two years, it’s probably more like five. Everyone lies.”

The flakes floated together for a few seconds and slowly separated.

“The poor dead fishes,” Amber said, swiping at her eyes with her left hand. She’d been teary lately, which was unusual for her, probably owing to the stress of the move. She was only twelve, but her hormones would be raging sooner than later. And more tears, she figured.

She shrieked. “Look! What’s that?”

“What’s what?”

“There.” She pointed. “Isn’t that a fish?”

While she watched, another bright orange fish swam alongside.

Another appeared.

And a fourth.

The last two were a paler orange. Almost translucent.

“I don’t believe it,” Julien said. “They can’t have survived for this long.”

“Look, they’re jumping at the food. We have to go tell Mom.”

“No, we can’t tell her. She’s got enough on her mind. Besides, if you tell her, she’ll freak about them all winter long.”

“What, then? We don’t tell anyone they’re here?”

“We’ll just come down and feed them every day. Then, over the winter, we’ll make sure there’s a hole in the ice. We can surprise Mom in the spring, once the snow is gone.”

“Mom wasn’t born yesterday. Don’t you think she’ll find out?”

“How will she find out? Besides, once she knows these fish survived, she’ll be more receptive to getting more.”

“What about Dad? Should we tell him?”

“No, Dad’ll only tell Mom. They don’t have secrets, remember.”

“Yeah, right.” She’d heard her parents talk enough about how marriages shouldn’t have secrets, no matter how small. She giggled. Her father hadn’t shared the moving van story. “Okay, it’s our secret? No one else’s?”

“Yep, it’s our secret.”

“Oh, I love secrets,” Amber said, already anticipating telling her mother. She might even tell her the moving van secret.

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

My son turned one recently, which is a big milestone. I’ve been selling many of the baby things, clearing out space in the house, and reclaiming time for myself as he sleeps longer through the nights (though not straight through just yet…).

The hardest years of my life were the two years when my children were infants. Being sleep-deprived is no joke, and when lack of sleep impedes the body’s ability to heal, things like illness and weight gain become a reality in addition to an inability to concentrate or process everyday thoughts and functions. Nutrition goes out the window, and any down time is dedicated to catching up on essentials (i.e., laundry, piles of dishes and bottle/pumping supplies) rather than only sort-of essentials (showering, finding an outfit that matches).

And even well-intentioned people, trying to be funny, have a way of making things harder. Sometimes a simple comment of “Bet you don’t have time to write much anymore with the baby, huh?”, even if said with a chuckle, stings more than the speaker could imagine.

It’s hard to explain what it feels like to lose the “self,” to spend one year, and then a second, with the primary task of keeping a small child alive. Things that used to stress me out about my full-time job seemed irrelevant, but a high fever could sweep me off my feet with worry like no meeting or deadline ever had. At the same time, things that used to give me purpose, like writing and running, also took a back seat. I was more of a function than a human.

Now that I am actively writing and running again, I feel that my soul and body are reconnected.

I have been thinking about how our society in general doesn’t offer much support to new mothers. It’s always been asserted that moms are superheroes, able to do amazing things non-moms could not imagine. I see how this is true, not because moms are stronger than others, but because we are simply pushed to our limits the way many don’t have to be.

I bought my husband a pair of running shoes for his birthday. The kids ended up falling asleep on the way to the running store, so I sent him in to a running specialty store with a list of possible candidates for running shoes while I waited in the car with the nappers. I considered waking the kids—I really wanted to look around in the store—but anyone with kids knows…let a sleeping baby/toddler nap.

My husband returned with an awesome pair, telling me that the sales clerk said “your wife knows her shoes.” The smile that brought to my face was surprising. The “runner” me existed in high school and college. That was the me that would consume stories in Runner’s World and track the progress of famous runners as they trained for big events. That part of me had been dormant for years. Why did a compliment from a stranger bring such joy?

“You should get a pair,” my husband said.

My current pair of running shoes was from the clearance rack of Kohls. They’re okay, but they’re nothing special. The “runner me” in high school would never have bought them to train in. I thought about what I would tell the sales clerk if I did go into that specialty store. “I used to run a lot, but now I’m mostly stuck behind a double stroller. So I don’t really need speed. Or performance. Or stability. I guess I’ll just stick with my old pair and save the money for daycare.”

I shrugged it off until I read a heartening story.  It’s from Runner’s World, and it’s about a woman named Lyndy Davis, who battled post-partum depression by returning to running with the goal of breaking the Guinness World Record for fastest half marathon with a child in tow. Her result is pending approval, but she ended up smashing her goal, running a half marathon at a 6:13 per mile pace.

6:13 per mile. Pulling a child.

She noted in an interview that her son was often up every night, every hour, on the hour, making her delirious with sleep deprivation.

I’ve been there.

Reclaiming running and merging her role as mother with her love of running brought her back.

Then I read about another woman, Cynthia Arnold, who ran a full marathon at a sub-7:20 per mile pace while pushing three kids—185 pounds of kids and stroller—the entire time. Her race is also a pending Guinness Record.

I share these stories because I’ve seen so many people wallowing in sorrow or self-pity. Those things are contagious. They are easy to spread. But so is positivity.

Seeing these women run with their children, after battling the same challenges of sleep deprivation that I’ve faced, was heartening to me. Most striking, perhaps, was Davis’s quote in a social media post about how running with her kids, she wasn’t even nervous about the race anymore, the way she used to be.

And it’s true. Having kids is the biggest challenge of my life. But it has made me stronger. Things that used to take up all my brain space with worry and anxiety and no big deal anymore. Kids have made me see what’s truly a priority. They’ve also made me prioritize, be more efficient.

As I think of these two women running faster than I probably ever care to again, I return to my husband’s offer for a new pair of running shoes. I think I’ll focus on cushion and bounce, something that’s good for jogging uphill behind a double stroller. But something with good response as well—for when I decide to smash my past few years of 5K times.

Besides, I always do my best brainstorming for novels when I’m out for a run.

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This week’s prompt is to use the following words in a poem or a story: besides, fishes, inn, owing, born.

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series. Learn more at www.corgicapers.com.

Poseidon’s Consort

By Val Muller

Shivering in the sea breeze in the setting sun, Amphitrite made her way to the only inn in town. She already missed the calm, perpetual whirl of the ocean, the warmth of water. The air made everything feel too cold and open, even as it carried the comforting, salty scent, reminding her that home was only a few steps away…

Besides, she reminded herself, this little trip was her choice.

The inn smelled of humans and earthy, old, stagnant scents. The air lacked the fluidity of water. Someone was cooking a stew or a chowder, but it smelled more of chickens and boiled onions than of fishes.

Amphitrite approached the innkeeper. She had to do this, she reminded herself. Poseidon had been raging too long, and she needed a break. Why she was the only being who could calm his tempestuous rage was beyond her. Normally she just dealt with it and kept the balance of the sea, but tonight she had enough. Not even the dolphins or the whales could calm her.

“Needing a room?” the innkeeper asked. He wiped his hands on a rag and sized her up. His eyes remained dim, seeming unimpressed with what he saw.

She nodded and adjusted the scarf around her hair, her dry and baggy clothes, trying to absorb his accent. Humans had such awful nuances in dialect and diction. But before she could answer, a man broke through the door, his hair wild and eyes wide, no doubt owing to the wind battering against the door.

“Storm! Tempest!” he yelled. “Poseidon’s enraged!”

A barrage of men, mostly sailors, hurried in and pushed past Amphitrite. The innkeeper screamed over their frantic din, their worries over Poseidon’s mood and the fate of their ships.

“Must be a spat with his missus,” one said.

The innkeeper’s hands grew heavy with the coins he collected as all the rooms were rented out, two or three or more men to a bed. Desperation and panic at the storm turned to banter as the men turned to drinking and tales. The innkeeper could finally turn back to Amphitrite, forgotten and pushed to the corner. He apologized for the lack of rooms. Amphitrite smiled, letting her hair out of its scarf and letting her eyes glow like sea jewels. She did not disguise her voice but instead let it flow melodious like the sea. Before long, he’d invited her to his own private quarters, recent widower that he was.

She smiled, knowing after a night with her, once she returned to the sea to calm her husband’s rage, the innkeeper would rename the inn for her and send her golden coins each week, ones that sparkled when the sun filtered through the saltwater. She would feed his business, for a time, with her little trysts to dry land, allowing her husband to rage now and then, driving business to the inn. How fun it would be to see how many coins the innkeeper would send her way.

She let her dress slip from her shoulder. The innkeeper was nothing special, but he was an authority figure here in this little town by the sea, whatever it was called. What harm could it do? After all, she thought as she led him to his room by the hand, like a mermaid or a siren pulling a catch beneath the waves, why should Zeus have all the fun?


The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is a story about a tree of (any type of) significance that is cut or falls down.

Today’s post comes from Phil Yeats. Last December, Phil (using his Alan Kemister pen name) published his most recent novel. Tilting at Windmills, the second in the Barrettsport Mysteries series of soft-boiled police detective stories set in an imaginary Nova Scotia coastal community is available on Amazon.

Our Big Old Chestnut

By Phil Yeats

I checked the caller ID after my phone chirped. “Hey Sis, what’s up?”

“Damn tree, it’s broken another window.”

I sighed, unsurprised by the abrupt announcement without as much as a hello, how are you. That’s how our minimally communicative family behaved.

“The old chestnut, I suppose.”

She snorted. “What else. It’s old, rotting, and too damned close to the house. A bloody limb broke off, but Mum won’t let us cut it down.”

I checked my appointment calendar. “Two meetings this morning that I can’t avoid. I’ll head out as soon as I’m clear.”

“Here between five and six?”

“Looks like it.”

At one, I left the city that had been my home for two decades to the town where I lived as a teenager. My formative years hadn’t been easy ones. We lived in an isolated off-the-grid house that complicated most activities, but the real problem was my father’s strange beliefs.

He’d sit for hours reading his bible but didn’t attend church. We didn’t belong to any known Christian congregation, but he based his life on the insights he gained from his readings.

He never tried to influence me, or expect us to follow his example, but it made us different, outcasts from society. I followed my own muse until my eighteenth birthday. On that morning, my almost non-existent father announced that his bible reading taught him it was my duty as his son to leave home and never return. He didn’t just kick me out. He provided a substantial nest egg that would, in his view, provide for the college education I needed to find my calling.

And what about my mother, you might ask? She was an enigma, seen but seldom heard, and never known to express an opinion. And my little sister? She was only twelve when I left.

Ten years later, I returned to the family home. My father had died, and I thought my mother and sister, now twenty-three and living at home, would need me.

My first homecoming was a strange event. Mother didn’t acknowledge my presence and my sister appeared incapable of dealing with the bizarre situation. But we made contact, and she eventually learned to approach me when dealing with our mother become too difficult.

This time, I bought a new window pane at the nearest glass shop the evening I arrived. In the morning, I climbed the tree and removed the broken limb. I discovered our chestnut was beyond hope, so soft a screwdriver sunk in to its hilt.

After installing the window pane, I found my sister tidying the already spotless kitchen. “You’re right about the tree. It’s unsafe, it must go.”

“But Mum won’t agree. It’s her house, she pays for everything and well, she makes all the decisions.”

I sighed, dreading the confrontation I couldn’t avoid. I’d been home two or three times a year in the decade since my initial return after my father died. During those trips, she never appeared. If I needed to discuss something, I visited her private sitting room. The meetings never went well.

“Come in, Jacob,” she said when I knocked on her door. I was taken aback because she didn’t bark in her normal fashion. In fact, she sounded almost pleased to welcome me. “Come stand by the window,” she added when I hesitated inside the door. “I watched you trying to repair our old chestnut. You’re here to tell me it must go.”

I nodded, and she continued before I said anything. “I remember watching with trepidation as you climbed into the highest branches, and Margaret with her dolls in the shade below. She was so timid, afraid to climb to the lowest branch. They’re among my few fond memories.” She abandoned the window and strode to the door. “I assume you and Margaret will dine before you return to the city. Tell her I’ll join you.”

I stepped through the door. “And she should contact the arborist before that sickly old tree does any additional damage.”


 

The Spot Writers—Our Members:
Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/
Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/
Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com/
Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

I had purchased this book after hearing the author speak at a conference a few years ago. I’d forgotten about it and needed a quick read I could focus on while watching the kids this summer. While this is the third in a series, I had not read the other two: I chose this one after hearing the author speak about the mathematical elements of the novel. Calder, the protagonist, uses pentominoes (you can see an overview of what they are here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pentomino; think Tetris) .

The book takes place mostly in England. Following a Calder (the artist, not the protagonist) exhibit in Chicago, the protagonist and his friends are inspired to think about ways to make moving art–mobiles, for instance. They are also inspired to see the world in different ways and perspectives by thinking about the way the Calder exhibits constantly change. This theme helps the three friends learn to see each other’s perspectives, whereas in previous books (it’s implied) they did not.

Calder goes to England with his dad and is allowed lots of free time to explore a small town–alone–while his dad attends to professional duties. Calder disappears, and his friends show up from Chicago to try to help the stumped police find him. While this was a cool idea (for a kid to show up because the police can’t figure it out), I found it a bit of a stretch that a bunch of kids were allowed to run through crime scenes in England with special permission of an investigator. Still, cool for kids.

While Calder has disappeared, there is also a missing statue–a work by Calder–and no one is sure if the two disappearances are related.

While I enjoyed the book overall, I wondered if I would enjoy it as a kid. Some of the grown-up characters seemed indistinct after their first or second mention, and I had to keep reminding myself which was which. There was also a lot of point of view shifting, which helped to build suspense within the mystery, but I could see myself getting confused about this as a kid–too many POV shifts used to throw me off.

It’s always been a pet peeve of mine as a reader: if there is too much POV shifting in a mystery, I get frustrated about why information was withheld from me in the first place, when ultimately it is revealed through the voice of a narrator anyway.

Reading the material after the story ends, it seems the book offers a lot of details for a second read. For instance, the author reveals that the illustrator hid letters within each of the illustrations, and the reader is invited to rearrange those letters. Like the characters in the novel, the reader is invited to participate as an artist.

The book itself could definitely help young readers learn about things like pentominoes and how to build mobiles, how words’ sound and meaning can go together, etc. It’s a good read for a young reader willing to engage in details. I’m putting it on the shelf for my kids once they get a little older!

I went to bed the night before, ready for a great day. Tomorrow would be my anniversary, and my husband and I were going to celebrate with steak, scallops, corn on the cob, and a homemade dessert. The morning didn’t quite live up to the excitement, with both kids having near meltdowns while trying to grocery shop. But, at least we’d have a nice dinner.

The kids didn’t nap, but at least that meant they’d go to bed early.

When it was finally time to cook dinner, a minor storm came through that ended up knocking down a tree that caused our neighborhood and a few surrounding ones to lose power.

The initial estimate for restored power was 8:30. Not wanting to risk it, we opted for sandwiches instead. We’d eat, get the kids to bed, and maybe have enough time to watch a movie at least. As we counted down to 8:30, we checked the outage map on our phones and saw that the new estimate for power restored was almost midnight.

My husband and I sighed, defeated. The bedrooms (upstairs) were way too hot. The minor storm that came through was not enough to destroy all the humidity, and opening windows without fans running would do nothing for the heat upstairs.

We worked to convince my three-year-old that it would be fun to have a camp-out in the living room. The baby listened, unimpressed.

With neither kid ready for sleep, we decided to take them outside on the swings. At least the back-and-forth of the swings provided a bit of cooling relief. We shrugged and made the best of it. “We’ll celebrate our anniversary tomorrow,” we declared.

My three-year-old was the first to realize the positive side effect of the outage: she was allowed to stay up late enough to see fireflies. Normally, her “mean” parents send her to bed way before it’s dark enough to see them.

Once I let go of my expectations for a nice meal and an air-conditioned bedtime for the kids, I started to notice things I hadn’t. I looked up and saw a spider with an intricate web at the top of the swing set. Upon closer examination, I saw the spider spinning a web around a larger bug—her victim. While the whole spider-eating-bug thing was not my idea of a beautiful anniversary, there was actually something beautiful about being out there in nature. The intricate web, the peacefulness of the spider working efficiently, the background of crickets, and the fireflies like stars falling to Earth.20190702_211559

We opened SkyMap on my phone and took a look at all the lights twinkling above us. We discussed planets and stars and made wishes. In short, it was a night of summer magic.

Yes, we had to go inside (the bugs were eating us!), and it was pretty hot until the power came back on. It was difficult to get the kids to fall asleep in a strange setting rather than their familiar rooms. And taking out contact lenses by candlelight is not much fun.

But for days afterward, all my daughter talked about was the time she got to see fireflies and name planets and swing in the dark and have a sleepover in the living room.

It was a night of memories much more poignant than a steak and some scallops.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story about a tree of (any type of) significance that is cut or falls down.

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series. You can read the ebook for just $2.99. The series, like the following story, is inspired by events of her childhood with a dash of whimsy and a serving of imagination.

Ponderosa

By Val Muller

Today she would be a cowboy. She chose her cut-off jeans—because that’s what a cowboy would wear in the stifling summer heat. Buttoned up a checkered blouse. Donned her leather belt, the one with the two holsters. Stuck her two cap guns in and tied a red bandana around her neck. She wiped Froot Loop crumbs off her face and donned her straw cowboy hat.

Outside, her clubhouse would be a one-room frontier home. Her sandbox today would be her open fire, where she could roast deer and squirrel and mutton—whatever that was. She’d have to hunt, of course, in the forest of pines at the side of the house.

In the suburban neighborhood, those pines provided a bit of magic. The ponderosa’s soft needles fell to the ground like a mattress and muffled sound like a blanket of soft snow. The dripping sap spoke of frontiers, not minivans, and the leafy branches blocked the view of four other homes.

It was that row of ponderosa pines that made her frontier play possible. The needles, brought to her clubhouse, created a mattress and play food that could be mixed with sand or water or dirt to imagine any type of culinary delight of the frontier. At certain times of year, the sap could be collected and made into frontier potions and salves.

She started at her clubhouse, as she always did, tucked away in the furthermost corner of the back yard. The pantry was bare: she’d have to go hunting. Carefully, she lowered her hat and unholstered her weapons. A kill could be waiting around any corner. She shot a deer in the nearby field, but she missed. The imaginary deer leapt away, its escape warning countless others.

She’d have to travel further from home. With a nod of resolution, she made her way to the ponderosa forest. Turning the corner near the garage, she froze. Her pulse raced behind her ears. The tree was—

Gone.

In its place, a pile of logs, like bones snapped and bloodied by a predator. But it was no predator. The real world came rushing in. The frontier silence gave way to the ordinary sounds of a lawn mower, someone’s air conditioning, and the neighbor’s old dryer. And there, at the center of the massacre, was her father.

He and a neighbor were efficiently piling logs into a wheelbarrow. A million questions circled her head, but she could utter none of them. Her dad looked up only after the wheelbarrow was full.

“Ell,” he said. “I thought you were watching a movie with breakfast again.”

She shook her head.

Her dad rubbed the back of his neck and glanced bashfully at the neighbor, who graciously hoisted the wheelbarrow and made his way to the back yard, through the newly-opened passage at the side of the garage.

“This was all supposed to be a surprise, Ell,” he said.

“What?” It was all she could utter—barely a syllable.

“A pool,” he said. “We’re getting a pool. The excavator’s out front.” He pointed to a giant yellow machine sitting in the road in front of the house. In the paradise of childhood summer, she had not heard it during her sugary meal or her frontier plans.

“Pool,” she repeated senselessly.

“It couldn’t get to the back yard. You know, to dig the hole. It couldn’t fit. We had to cut either the pine or the forsythias, and the pine was getting kind of big, anyway.”

Ell turned to the other side of the house, where the forsythia bush peeked at her tauntingly, as if boasting its own existence in the wake of her pine.

“Hole?” she said.

Her mother materialized from inside, as if sensing shock. She held out a shiny brochure. “See, honey? A pool. It’ll be ready within the next week or two. We thought you and your friends would love to—”

Ellen listened patiently without hearing as her parents explained the benefits of the new pool. Her eyes were directed by adamant fingers to the pattern chosen for the pool’s liner, to the color of the pool’s siding and even the style of the ladder.

But all she saw was the brute strength of the industrial era, westward expansion driving the buffalo to near extinction. How could they cut down her pine? She nodded graciously and left her parents to clean up the remains of her pine. She quietly went inside to pout.

Before she threw herself on the bed, she removed her holsters, her hat, and her bandana. Cowboys had no place in such an industrial world. As the mechanized pattern of the excavator lulled her into a nap, her mind filled with images of cool blue water and a lost city of Atlantis.

Tomorrow, she would be a mermaid.


 

The Spot Writers:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/