Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is “New Year’s” and this week’s post comes to us from Kathy Price.

A Clean Slate

by Kathy Price

 

The snowflakes continued to drift down through the still night. She couldn’t decide if the silence enveloping the woods was a comforting stillness in which she could find refuge or simply a brief pause before the next onslaught, a pause which would allow the storm to gather strength. Tears flowed down her cheeks as she sagged against the pillar on the porch. Were they tears of loss or tears of joy? God knew there had not been enough of the latter in her relationship with Mark. Her shaking hands caused the ice in her glass to rattle as she brought it to her lips. Smooth and cold, she used it to sooth the cut on her mouth, hoping the cold would keep it from swelling too badly. Throwing the drink back in one swift motion, the alcohol burned her throat but did little for her courage. How could she face the chaos in the living room? In the kitchen? She was going to have to do it sooner or later, so, taking a deep, ragged breath, she turned and headed back into the house.

A cozy fire flickered with the promise of warmth and welcome, but then crackled, and spit an ember out onto the hearth. How very well it symbolized her husband, Mark: a promise of comfort but a very real potential for destruction if not controlled or contained. She stepped over his body to brush the ember back into the fireplace and looked at herself in the mirror above the mantle. Already the skin around her eye was turning a deep purple and the eye had almost swollen shut. Her lip was bloody but what made her tremble was the amount of blood splattered on her face, clotted in her hair, drenching her clothing. This was not how she had planned for the evening to go.

“Bong, bong, bong . . .” The grandfather clock in the hallway started to strike twelve, but instead of a passionate lover’s kiss for luck and a sip of champagne to toast in the New Year, Gwen found herself alone, but free. She decided to take a shower and wash it all away: the blood, the pain, the fear. She wanted to start 2015 with a clean slate. Mark was gone and could no longer hurt her. She would face the music of his death with a lighter heart, knowing he would never beat her again.

 

 

The Spot Writers:

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Kathy Price

http://www.kathylprice.com

 

For today’s “Writer Wednesday” feature, I wanted to highlight an anthology I edited called Forging Freedom: Dimensions.

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From the publisher: This anthology is for those who appreciate the freedom in our lives. For those who have seen their freedoms stolen and those who see freedom at risk. For those who have sacrificed their time and energies and risked their lives to preserve freedom. Those who believe that humanity has not yet reached its peak, that there is more to the world than we can currently imagine. This anthology is for those who gaze at the stars and wonder. Available at Amazon.com and Freedomforgepress.com

Dimensions was published by Freedom Forge Press, a company dedicated to celebrating stories of freedom (of all types). When the company put out a call for submissions for its general fiction anthology, an overwhelming number of submissions were speculative fiction—science fiction and fantasy. Rather than turn down so many great stories, FFP decided to publish a separate anthology of exclusively speculative fiction.

I thoroughly enjoyed the range of stories and the different ways in which they celebrated or questioned the idea of freedom. What I love best about science fiction and fantasy is the ability of authors to find true freedom by unleashing the power of the human imagination. So many intriguing concepts are explored in the book, pushing our understanding of the human condition.

I was also pleased to learn that several stories from the anthology were honored as part of the Tangent Online 2014 recommended reading list:

I was honored that my story, “The Fourth Poet,” written to honor Ray Bradbury (I wrote it before his death, as he is my favorite author), was included among those mentioned. Also mentioned were “Bringing Home Major Tom” by Leigh Kimmel, “A Brief Biography of Baron Otto von Korek (1717-1783)” by Donald J. Bingle, “Why Can You Never Escape with Escape?” by A. J. Kirby, “Inhuman” by A. K. Lindsay, “The Rainbow Children” by Leo Norman, “The Pathless Skies” by Neil Weston, and “Amnesty Intergalactic” by Douglas W. Texter. Congratulations to all the authors mentioned. My 2015 to-read list has just expanded significantly!

If interested, you can read a more detailed review of the antho by Ryan Holmes over at Tangent Online.


If you like speculative fiction, keep your eyes open for my upcoming release, The Man with the Crystal Ankh:

crystal ankh-RecovereEveryone’s heard the legend of the hollow oak—the four-hundred year curse of Sarah Willlougby and Preston Grymes. Few realize how true it is.

Sarah Durante awakens to find herself haunted by the spirit of her high school’s late custodian. After the death of his granddaughter, Custodian Carlton Gray is not at peace. He suspects a sanguisuga is involved—an ancient force that prolongs its own life by consuming the spirits of others. Now, the sanguisuga needs another life to feed its rotten existence, and Carlton wants to spare others from the suffering his granddaughter endured. That’s where Sarah comes in. Carlton helps her understand that she comes from a lineage of ancestors with the ability to communicate with the dead. As Sarah hones her skill through music, she discovers that the bloodlines of Hollow Oak run deep. The sanguisuga is someone close, and only she has the power to stop it.

I picked up this book when it caught my eye at a second-hand book store. It’s about a twelve-year-old (Joey) who vanishes during a camping trip. He re-appears two years later, only he’s still twelve and wearing the same thing he was wearing when he disappeared. The rest of the world has grown, and he has stayed the same. He’s also got a weird object lodged in his brain, and his nose keeps leaking brain fluid. His memories suggest that he was abducted by aliens.

I chose this book because I always enjoy seeing how authors treat extraordinary stories that take place within reality. In this case, very few people believe Joey. I usually read these books expecting the ending to return us to the realm of the “real world,” revealing that it was all just a dream, or there is a rational explanation, etc. Think the ending of every Scooby Doo episode.

I’m always thrilled when by the end of the book, it’s still a real ghost, or a real alien, or someone has transcended the laws of reality. This book did not disappoint, though I will not reveal the ending.

It seems like it’s written for 10-12-year old male readers. The book is plot-driven, and at times I wished to know more about the emotions and motivations of the characters. For instance, Joey returns home to find his parents preoccupied with a new baby and their jobs. It seems after being missing for two years, he would find them more focused on him. But he’s off to school in no time, and he’s even punished for leaving the house without permission by being grounded to his room. I would think there would be much more action on the part of his parents and authorities after being missing (and suffering amnesia and other medical problems) for such a time. I realize that in middle-grade and young adult books, parental figures are supposed to be largely absent, but I felt their absence was not fully justified.

Still, I could see a younger reader devouring the book and projecting his or her own emotions on top of the characters. It was a quick read. At 160 pages, I read it in three quick sittings—and if I had more long blocks of time available, it would have been a one-sitting book.

The prompt for this writing is “new year’s”. Today’s post comes from Cathy MacKenzie. Check out her books on Smashwords.

 

Smouldering Alive

by Cathy MacKenzie

 

Alice wasn’t sure of her plans for New Year’s Eve—or for the rest of the new year, for that matter. Her life hadn’t unfolded as she had hoped. While growing up, she had dreamt of the small, tidy bungalow with the white picket fence and two children (a boy and a girl, of course). But none of her dreams had materialized.

Over a decade previously, she had moved into her late mother’s single-wide mobile home located in Woodside Flats, located alongside railroad tracks with trains that never ceased lumbering by at every ungodly hour. Sometimes she overnighted with either a one-night stand or a horny old man thrust upon her by her pimp, though she wished she could sleep alone, forever in peace and quiet.

She sighed. New Year’s Eve, which was the following night, had arrived faster than she had expected. She had told Lyle, her pimp, she was unavailable that night, and she had no intention of seeking out a strange male. She wanted to do something special, just for herself.

While driving home, she made up her mind. She’d splurge for a luxury room at the Wiltshire Inn. She’d purchase an expensive bottle of wine, perhaps a rich Merlot, and fancy cheese and crisp crackers. And maybe a box of Renoir chocolates for when the clock struck twelve. She might even figure out the rest of her life while she relaxed.

A block before the turn into the mobile home park, she saw smoke wafting into the sky. A sickening feeling washed over her, and she lifted her foot from the gas. Fire trucks roared in the distance and reached her home seconds before she did—not that there was any home left. It wouldn’t take long for an ancient single-wide trailer to collapse into bent metal and burning embers.

Alice watched the flames from the safety of her car, picturing the fire devouring her second-hand sofa and pressboard furniture as if a ravenous brute had satisfied its urges. She could almost hear the Melamine plates and bowls and mugs crackling in the extreme heat and the dime store ornaments toppling into the inferno when the shelves gave way. Clothing would have been licked up instantaneously without a lingering trace. Shampoo and other liquids would have seeped from their plastic wombs when the containers melted in the heat. Or had it not happened that way at all? Would the tangible items, resigned to their fate, simply have given up and allowed themselves to be gobbled in one insane gulp?

She watched while men scurried from the red truck, which was almost as large as her former home, and doused the raging flames.

Stop, she thought. It’s too late.

But the firemen did their job—and did it well—though they couldn’t prevent incensed anger from accomplishing its goal.

She laughed. What a way to end the year: without a home. She wondered where her tears hid. Shouldn’t she be sobbing hysterically at the loss?

But no, she felt oddly elevated, satiated even. Relieved. She could finally move on. The trashy single-wide located in the even trashier trailer park had been holding her back, preventing her from following her dreams. The insurance money would be enough to start a new life.

She giggled. The timer had gone off as she’d been assured it would. Thank goodness for the sleezeballs she bedded. There’d be no trace of mischief, not in that mass of rubble.

While Alice waited for the police to arrive, for surely they would want to interview her, she tried to drum up tears. She’d then splurge on that luxury hotel one night sooner. She had no choice; what else could she do?

 

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The Spot Writers:

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Kathy Price

http://www.kathylprice.com

 

I’m happy to announce an upcoming release, The Man With the Crystal Ankh, with World Castle Publishing. This is the first in a planned trilogy, which I’m calling the Hollow Oak Chronicles. This book is a young adult thriller:

Everyone’s heard the legend of the hollow oak—the four-hundred year curse of Sarah Willlougby and Preston Grymes. Few realize how true it is.

 

Sarah Durante awakens to find herself haunted by the spirit of her high school’s late custodian. After the death of his granddaughter, Custodian Carlton Gray is not at peace. He suspects a sanguisuga is involved—an ancient force that prolongs its own life by consuming the spirits of others. Now, the sanguisuga needs another life to feed its rotten existence, and Carlton wants to spare others from the suffering his granddaughter endured. That’s where Sarah comes in. Carlton helps her understand that she comes from a lineage of ancestors with the ability to communicate with the dead. As Sarah hones her skill through music, she discovers that the bloodlines of Hollow Oak run deep. The sanguisuga is someone close, and only she has the power to stop it.

 

crystal ankh-Recovere

 

Stay tuned for updates, release date, and contests!

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is “new years.” This week’s post comes to us from Val Muller, who wrote the following poem—on the theme of time—in memory of her father-in-law, who passed unexpectedly earlier this month.

 

The Horologist

By Val Muller

 

He was a warden of time,

Counting seconds, days, minutes, hours

With meticulous care.

His favorite color, green, is the hue of life and growth—

Like the internal ticking, the motion of movements and springs,

The eternal return of summers and springs

Even after the darkest winter—the color of forever.

 

A custodian of time, he measured days, minutes, hours,

Shepherding every ticking second

The way he protected his wife, his son, his loved ones.

He wound movements and restored clock faces,

Made memories and left smiles etched on cheeks.

He fixed hour hands and held frightened ones,

Restoring resonating chimes in the silence.

 

A steward of timepieces, he counted minutes, hours, and years.

He fixed broken clasps

And applied bandages to wounded knees.

He replaced scratched crystals and drained batteries,

Nursed his wife to health and helped his son allay fears.

He kept the right pace, luminous paint glowing on watch faces

And his luminous smile glowing through the years.

 

A warden of time, he counted days, hours, years,

Mechanical wonders keeping pace through the silence,

Making sense of Time, too great for our understanding.

He knows eternity now, but the gears he built remain,

His ticking wonders, luminous hands pointing our way

And the incandescence of his memory shining in every sunset

And the chimes of his clocks sounding a bit like forever.

 

Update: For anyone interested, here is an editorial my husband wrote to honor his father and to thank members of the community who supported his father two decades ago.

 

The Spot Writers—our members:

 

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Kathy Price

http://www.kathylprice.com

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is “new years.” Today’s contribution comes from RC Bonitz, author of A BLANKET FOR HER HEART.

 

   Something New This Way Came

by RC Bonitz

 

Every breath produced a puff of frost before her as she shuffled through the crowd. Fingers and toes tingled already, that’s what she got for choosing fashion over comfort. New Year’s Eve in Times Square, she’d never done it before. So far it was a dud, despite the crowd, she was alone. Her holidays had been like that the last seven years, ever since her mother died. And this year she faced the big four-oh, a milestone she didn’t relish.

She sighed. Her family gone, every guy she’d ever met a Needy Ned, the coming year did not look any better. Well, she might be alone in this great crowd but damn it, she was going to have fun. Even if she had to get drunk all by herself.

Suddenly, there was an arm around her waist and she was practically dragged off her feet. Not to mention the rancid smell of alcohol breath in her face.

“Hey babe, how’s about a kiss?”

The guy was crushing her against his body and she had to throw her head back to get a good look at him. Bloated purple nose, a sure sign of an alcoholic, short gray crew cut, who knew how old he was, a leering grin, he thought he was so smart.

“Let go of me. What do you think you’re doing?”

“Aw c’mon. Just one teensy-weensy little kiss.”

She shoved against him but he was too strong. “Go away. Let go.”

“Hey, it’s New Year’s, time for fun.”

She freed her hand and slapped him in the face.

He snorted. “You’re a tiger. Way to go.”

“If you don’t let me go I’ll scream.” She glanced around. People stood there watching, standing back, some looking concerned, nobody helping. She was alone even in this. She caught the eye if a strapping young man. He turned away… Her heart sank. Maybe if she begged? But she shouldn’t have to; anyone could see she needed help.

Then she saw him, a figure in the crowd, coming toward her. A guy about her age, a grim look on his face. He shoved himself between the last of the bystanders and was there beside the bum.

“Let her go.”

The bum stared at him and laughed. “Go find your own kisses. She’s mine.”

“Let her go. I won’t say it again.”

“Buzz off, big shot.”

The newcomer said not a word. His fist connected with the drunk’s jaw and the man staggered back, still trying to hang on to her. Her new friend caught her, and set her on her feet.

“Are you okay?” he asked.

She nodded. “I am now, thank you.”

He stuck out his right hand. “Jason Trilby, at your service.”

“I’m Mary Anne Westcot.”

“Would you like some company for the evening?”

 

 

The Spot Writers–our members:

 

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Kathy Price

http://www.kathylprice.com

 

Welcome to Spot Writers! This month’s prompt is “statue” and this week’s story is contributed by Kathy L. Price.

 

The Statue

 

Little did they know, the mundane, dreary people who passed by him every day, but he knew. He knew he was there, trapped forever in this coat of bronze. He could see them, sense them, hear them. If any of them happened to notice him at all, he could feel their touch if they placed a hand upon his leg or grabbed his arm. What had it been now, four hundred fifty seven years? Or was it eight? It really didn’t matter. He no longer felt the need to keep track of time. In fact, he tried not to give it much thought at all. In the early days, of course, it nearly drove him mad but he had long ago resigned himself to his fate. He would remain there forever until the statue was either melted down or some other grand catastrophe destroyed the world.

“Look, Mommy,” said the little girl, pulling at her mother’s hand. “Look at the statue. He’s alive.”

His frozen features could not change but her words sent a jolt of electricity directly to his soul. When the little girl reached out to touch him, her caress was like fire. If she could tell he was alive, did that mean the spell was weakening?

“Don’t be silly, Cassandra,” the mother said sternly as she pulled the little girl away. “Of course it’s not alive. It’s just a statue.”

“I know you’re in there,” whispered Cassy. “I’ll try to get you out.”

How cruel it was, the hope. Had Merkenla sent the little girl to taunt him? Did she think he had become too complacent in his prison, that it had ceased to be a punishment? His mind raged against the injustice. How could he endure? Yet, he had to. There was no other option. He practiced the control he’d perfected centuries ago, to become calm and still, without thought. Time moved on.

Seventeen years later, he had almost forgotten the incident when he saw a beautiful young woman enter the park. Her long blond hair was a cascade of waves spun from gold. She was tall and graceful, perhaps a dancer or a gymnast, he thought. It was something he did from time to time to keep himself amused, to try to guess what people did with their lives. She looked, somehow, familiar. Not just her physical appearance but her soul seemed to speak to his.

“The moon will be at the dark tonight,” she said to him. “Be ready,” and she lightly put her hand on his arm.

Again, the electric jolt of her touch awakened his desire to be free. Who was this girl? He felt he knew her and yet, that couldn’t be possible. Be ready for what? Did he dare hope?

The afternoon dragged on. The sun finally set and evening cast the park in deepening shadows. The lamps that lit the numerous paths of the park blinked on causing shadows that danced in the wind.

He tried hard not to think about the possibilities, of what might lie ahead. What did the girl have planned? What day was it? he wondered. Try as he might, he could remember nothing of significance to mark this day, nothing that made it any different from any of the others. If it meant his freedom, though, he would remember it forever. Would something happen tonight? Again, there was the cruel hope of release.

A hateful, familiar chuckle sounded in his head. “Don’t even think about it, my friend. You will be encased for all time. But then again, perhaps inflicting little bit of hope once in awhile adds a special touch to your meaningless existence. I’ll have to think about doing it again sometime. Ha! Your little witch thinks she has the power to undo my spell. She will find out soon enough there is no way she can match me.”

Suddenly, the lights scattered along the numerous paths in the park went out, wrapping everything in the darkness of the night. What was that coming down the path? Because he couldn’t even move his eyes, his view was very limited. It was so frustrating. He could hear them coming though, a slight rustling of footsteps on the path and a low volume chant.

“Perhaps I should let you see this,” Merkenla mused. “See how I destroy her. See how hopeless your situation really is. While you have languished here in bronze, my powers have grown well beyond what you could have ever hoped to achieve. Watch, and tremble.”

Suddenly, he could move his head. He could blink his eyes and open his mouth. Oh, to be able to speak again. He quickly realized Merkenla had made a major mistake and instantly shielded his thoughts from her. Perhaps his little witch and her companions did not have the power by themselves to undo Merkenla’s spell, but if he could speak the words and add his voice to theirs, maybe, just maybe there was a chance.

 

 

 

Members of the Spot Writers:

 

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Kathy L. Price

I’ve been seeing a lot of posts about Elf On The Shelf again—that mischievous “game” in which parents torment their kids with “deeds” the demented-looking elf commits while the kids are sleeping. Though Elf On The Shelf wasn’t a thing when I was a kid, my dad did plenty to torment me with things my stuffed animals did while I slept (or while I was away from my room). They would often put things out of order, stack things precariously—anything to elevate my nerves!

Though I suppose it can be annoying, the game reinforces the magic of this time of year—the idea that anything can happen, that magic still exists in the world. And this can be taken in both the religious and secular sense—whether you believe in miracles or a little bit of elf luck.

I was feeling overworked lately. I begrudgingly put up the tree this weekend (we leave the lights on our artificial tree, so it’s always lit!), but I didn’t have the energy to put up the ornaments. Putting up ornaments doesn’t seem like something that should feel like a chore; it should be fun. But the holiday magic was lost, and the tree sat in the living room, half “fluffed” from its year in storage but not decorated at all. I weighed the time required for decorating the tree with more “productive” endeavors such as working out, vacuuming, or writing.

Bah humbug, I know.

Enter the boxes from online shopping (Scrooge doesn’t like shopping around actual people!). One of the boxes, from the amazing ThinkGeek.com, contained two geeky gifts that shall not be mentioned (lest my husband be reading this); however, the box was also supposed to contain a Doctor Who mini figure, which I added on to the order for free with a coupon/reward points account—a little gift for myself. When the box arrived last night, my husband mentioned that it was damaged (he emailed me right away about it, lest I think he did it himself, to peek inside!), but I thought nothing of it, being tired from the extremely cold rain and grumpy at myself for not being happier that it wasn’t snow.

But this morning, I remembered that my Doctor Who figure was supposed to be inside, so I ran down like a kid at Christmas. The figure is a “blind box,” meaning the mini figure could be one of any number of characters from the show. Who would I receive? Amy Pond? The Doctor himself? Or one of the more nefarious villains? When I got to the dining room, where the box had been stashed, I saw that indeed, the box had been damaged. There was a large gash in the side, allowing one of the flaps to open wide. I thought nothing of it except to check that the merchandise inside was undamaged.

The two items for my husband were there, and intact.

The Doctor Who figure for me was—missing!

But even before my brain had time to become sad, I smiled. I remembered the mysterious crack that The Doctor discovered in Amy Pond’s bedroom, the one that plagues the universe and erases you from existence if it touches you. It looks like this:

doctor who crack

It was eerily similar to the tear in my ThinkGeek box:

thinkgeekorder

 

Here is a comparison. Notice how the shape of the tear is about the same as the shape of the crack:

doctor who crack with box

So I thought: it probably wasn’t a disgruntled, overworked shipping company that tore open the box through neglect, allowing the mini figure to slip away into oblivion. No! It had to have been that the mysterious crack followed The Doctor even through his comfy little shipping box (not quite a TARDIS, but almost). When the crack appeared, The Doctor had nowhere to go but…erased from existence.

Well, since it’s a blind box, hopefully it wasn’t The Doctor that got erased. Hopefully it was one of the bad guys.  Like those horrible weeping angels. Indeed, I have a statue in my bathroom that I had to turn so it would face the mirror, always looking at its reflection, protection lest it wake up and try to get me. Those nasty weeping angels. The world could do without them.

So maybe the good folks at the shipping company that handled by box were actually doing the world a favor, ridding us of one small evil.

That, itself, would be magic enough.


Speaking of magic, my elves (er, my husband?) built me a new store at www.ValMuller.com/store. It’s cleaner and easier to use. AND it allows me to give you coupon codes! So, while supplies last, you will receive a free download code for an e-book copy of The Scarred Letter when you make any purchase at www.ValMuller.com. Just use this code: SCRDLETDWNLD The code will be shipped to you with your order. Happy Shopping!

 

I had been meaning to read this book for years. After I moved, it got packed in the bottom of a box of books, and I finally found it again.

This book reminds me of 1984, only looking at society from a more personal, feminine, perspective. The novel is written (spoken) through the voice of a woman named Offred. Through her narrative, we are able to piece together details about the world we are introduced to, the Republic of Gilead. We come to understand that there was some type of disaster or decline in (what was once) America. Birth rates have declined, possibly following excessive pollution. There was also a religious upheaval that happened as a reaction to this.

As part of the new order, Offred (who was born with another name, but her name means “Of Fred,” who is her commander) must live with the Commander and his wife, and their servants. Her job is to allow him to mate with her once each month in hopes of bearing a child for the Commander and his wife. Like the other handmaidens, Offred has to wear a red dress and a white face mask to keep herself covered; she even wears most of her coverings at home (even while in bed with the Commander and his wife). Much of her time she spends waiting as she is not allowed to have a job or money of her own.

She has several flashbacks of the time before, during which she had a daughter and a husband. Over time, women were allowed fewer and fewer rights. Women are trained and monitored by “Aunts” using facilities and supplies from the time before. Now, people who don’t follow the orthodoxy of those in power are hanged along a large wall protecting Offred and her kind from the outside world. At one point in the book, a group of tourists arrive and gawk, showing us that not everyone in the world agrees with the strict religious (and perverse) order that imposes itself on Offred. The tourists give us hope that perhaps the tormented world Offred lives in does not extent to all of humanity.

I won’t spoil the ending, but I did enjoy the connection I noticed to 1984 by George Orwell. In both novels, we are stuck in a limited perspective. As a result, we are never completely sure of who knows what, who is in charge, what secrets are actually secret. Just as in 1984, this helps the reader experience the paranoia the characters must daily endure.

The liability of this limited perspective is that it’s scattered, much as Winston in 1984 is unable to fully express himself. Offred jumps between past and present. But for me, that structure worked. At times, it moved a bit slowly, but that was the point: Offred spent much of her time waiting for her ovulation so that she could mate with the Commander and hope to bear his child.

The book is definitely disturbing, and it’s for mature audiences. It’s not graphic, but the ideas are disturbing. It’s a book that makes me appreciate the freedoms we have today. I won’t ruin the ending, but I did enjoy how Atwood chose to end it. If you love dystopias, this book might be for you.