Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Happy New Year! This week’s post, on the theme of holidays, comes to us from Val Muller, author of the children’s mystery series Corgi Capers. You can learn about her other work at valm16.sg-host.com.

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The Frozen Rescue

by Val Muller

Katy stepped onto the walkway. The frigid air felt good after the heat of thirty drunken bodies packed into Beth’s apartment. Colored lights from Beth’s LED tree lights reflected on the snow, and for a moment it seemed like Christmas again.

But it was New Year’s, Katy’s least favorite holiday. It was like a really big Sunday night, and a frigid one at that—an end to vacation and magic and time with family. A return to the hum-drum. The ultimate lead-up to a never-ending Monday morning. If Katy had her way, she would have spent the evening on the couch watching Doctor Who, drinking root beer, and working on her illustrations.

But of course Beth would hear none of that. “You can’t work all the time,” she’d said.

“But I like drawing,” Katy had reminded her. “It doesn’t feel like work.”

“It’s still work. Besides, you’re never going to meet anyone if you never leave your house. You’re coming to my party. You’ll like it, and maybe you’ll meet Mr. Perfect. He’ll help you forget about the Creepster.”

Katy shook her head, drawing her leather jacket against the chill of memory. Beth was, of course, referring to her last dating debacle. Sylvester had started out boyfriend material, but he got creepier as the year went on. Katy broke it off right before Thanksgiving. He’d unofficially moved in, so there was much sorting out to do, and she was finally feeling over it. But now she needed Katy time—not a party.

A rowdy couple burst out the door behind her, two drinks in the female’s hand, and a cigarette and lighter in the male’s. They were laughing hysterically, and the woman slid into a snow pile at the edge of the walkway, snapping the heel of her shoe. That brought more raucous laughter.

Katy sighed and shuffled down the walkway. The stars peeked out from a gossamer veil, backlit by the nearly-full moon. She remembered her childhood fascination with wishes and wished this year for a chance with someone like Sylvester, only not so creepy. Beth lived in a small housing development in one of two rows of townhomes. Katy knew the path well, and she decided to walk the loop to kill time before midnight. No way would Beth let her leave before then. At 12:01, Katy promised herself, she could go home and maybe work on an illustration or two before bed.

She sauntered past the mailboxes, enjoying the Christmas décor everyone had left out. That was what she missed most about childhood: time with family. Real, true family she cared about. She wondered if she’d ever meet someone who would feel like family.

A hiss-screech interrupted her musings, and she paused, pricking her ears. She held her breath to make out the sound. If she didn’t know any better, she’d say it was a mouse singing—too much Nutcracker Ballet this year, she scolded herself. Katy shuffled along the path, trying to keep her boots as quiet as possible on the pathway. This hiss-screeching continued.

“What is that?” she asked aloud.

It was coming from an alley, a narrow, paved access leading to the community’s dumpster. The back of the alley was lined with a row of bushes, a buffer between the residents and the dumpster. The hiss-screeching grew louder. Katy knelt down near the bushes and pulled back a snowy green branch. This time it was she who screeched. What she saw was a gray-and-black striped cat, its eyes frozen open, its tongue hanging out, blue.

Katy squealed and propelled herself upward involuntarily, slamming into something. She screamed again and trashed her arms. Strong hands grabbed her own.

“Calm down,” someone said. “It’s okay. I didn’t mean to startle you. I heard a hissing, screeching noise, and I came to check it out. Was it you making that noise?”

Katy shivered, tears already forming in her eyes. “No, it wasn’t me. I mean, I came…I came to check it out, too, and yes, that was me screeching just then, but no, no—it wasn’t me.”

“Whoa, there, calm down,” the voice said. “Take a deep breath.” Katy breathed long enough for her brain to register who was talking to her. It was a man, a bit taller than her. His face looked kind, but concerned. He wore a red and black knit cap and a long wool coat. “I’m Kent,” he said. “I didn’t mean to scare you.”

“You didn’t scare me,” Katy said, trying to speak more slowly. “I mean, you did scare me, but that isn’t why I was scared.”

“What?”

“Just look,” she said, pointing to the bush. “Wait, no—don’t look!”

But it was too late. Kent had already moved past her and peeked at the dead cat in the bushes. “Good grief,” he said. “No wonder you were spooked. That’s so sad. Poor cat looks like it froze to death. I wonder why it didn’t seek shelter somewhere.”

A hiss-screech interrupted his musing. “There’s something else,” he said.

“No, don’t look again!”

“It’s okay.” He reached into his pockets for a pair of leather gloves, which he slipped on. He took a deep breath, and Katy could see the hesitation in his face, but he moved quickly, with resolve. “Don’t look,” he said.

Katy turned away, but she could hear him moving the corpse.

“Oh my!” he said.

Katy spun around to see him squatting over. He stood slowly, his hands full of something. The something was hissing and squealing.

“There are two kittens here,” Kent said. “It’s why the cat didn’t move. Why she froze to death instead. She was protecting her kittens. Poor thing—I’ll come back tomorrow to bury her.” He brought his gloved hands closer to Katy, displaying two tiny kittens. “These were all that were there.”

“Oh!”

“I’m going to take them home with me—nurse them to health,” he said, examining them.

Katy’s mind flashed with something Beth had said. “Why don’t you get a pet? At least then you’ll stop thinking about Sylvester?”

“I’ll take one,” Katy offered. “That is—if you don’t want two.”

Kent smiled. “I knew there was a reason I left that party. I mean, aside from my usual dislike of parties. New Years has always been such a sterile holiday for me. Nothing magical ever happens. Not like Christmas.” He looked up at Katy. The moon reflected on his face. “Except tonight is different, I guess. Must have been some left over Christmas magic this year.” He looked around and smiled. “It’s still an hour or two until midnight. These kittens need to be somewhere warm, but I’m not bringing them back to the party I was at. I live not too far from here—in a townhome in the next development over. Not a far walk.”

Katy reached out to pet one of the kittens, and she grabbed Kent’s arm to steady herself. “I drove here,” Katy said. “I’ll get my car. I’ll drive us.” They walked to her car together, Kent holding the kittens, and Katy couldn’t help feeling like a kid again—the whole evening fitting as comfortably as family.

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The Spot Writers- our members: RC Bonitz http://www.rcbonitz.com Val Muller https://valmuller.com/blog/ Catherine A. MacKenzie http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/ Deborah Dera http://www.deborahdera.com

                                       LINCOLN LOGS

 by R.C. Bonitz, author of A LITTLE BIT OF BLACKMAIL, A LITTLE BIT OF BABY, and A BLANKET FOR HER HEART.

The pre-Christmas sale at Denby’s Toy Shop had attracted crowds of shoppers, but Mike was paying no attention.

The crowd parted briefly and he saw her, just for an instant. Searching, he spotted her again, at the far end of the aisle, talking to a flashy looking blonde. Dark hair, pretty as all get out; she seemed soft and self-contained, not out to impress. That was his heart’s opinion; the normally logical organ between his ears having suddenly shut down. He slipped through the crowd, heading in their direction.

 

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“I like toy stores at Christmas time, with all the lights and decorations. Those great big “Sale” signs just don’t do it for me.” Kristi swept stray strands of long blonde hair from her eyes and grinned at her friend Beth.

“The crowds are just as big though. I suppose you like that?”

“Don’t be sarcastic. You are such a grouch today. What’s wrong?”

Beth sighed. “Jim walked out the other day.”

“You told him about Ben?”

“What else? You tell a man you have a child and that’s it, he’s gone.”

“He was a jerk. He’s what, the third guy to bail out on you?”

“I’m not counting. I usually tell them when we meet, but I held off with Jim, hoping he’d get to caring or something, so he’d be all right with it. If they’d only give Ben a chance they’d like him, you know?”

“It’s not Ben. It’s raising someone else’s child.”

“Sometimes I almost wish I’d kept Hank around.”

“Don’t even think that.”

“Is it me, Kristi? Am I doing something wrong?”

“No way. These guys just want one thing; and it isn’t responsibility.” Kristi gave her a hug and smiled. “At least you got married once.”

“Big success that was. Listen, if you’re going to buy Ben a Christmas present we better get going before all the good toys are gone.”

Kristi squeezed her arm. “I’m sorry, hon. What should I get the little guy?”

“Whatever you want.”

“Sure, but mom’s know best. Does he like trucks?”

“All little boys like trucks. He has a zillion of them.”

“Well, what else is good?” Kristi said.

“They like Lincoln Logs.”

Kristi swung around. The voice belonged to a guy, a tall and handsome guy wearing a mischievous grin. Beth stared. There was something about him, something special. Charm, or maybe that smile that lit up his eyes. Whatever it was made her insides tremble. She turned away. Kristi had caught it too; Beth could see that in the flirting look that broke out on her face. Dark haired, he was one hunk of a man, with drop dead sexy eyes and a dimple in his chin.

“What?” Kristi asked, and then went silent, just smiling sweetly at him.

“I said, little kids like Lincoln Logs.”

“Oh, sure, of course. Who are you?”

“Mike Hartnett.”

“I’m Kristi Morgan. Hi Mike.”

“Who’s your friend?”

Kristi turned, took Beth by the arm, and swung her back to face the man. “This is Beth. Beth Tompkins.”

Beth gave him a tiny wave. Why get excited- he’d just dump her over Ben. If he was even interested at all.

A fleeting look of confusion crossed his face and disappeared. He offered his hand. “Hi, Beth, nice to meet you.”

Beth met his eyes with a noncommittal stare but did not take the hand. That smile, the easy way he held himself; if he wasn’t a one-night stand type she’d be totally surprised. “Hi.”

His face faded to bland, all the sparkle lost somewhere. His glance held steady though. It stayed on Beth, studying her eyes. Not her curves, not her breasts, just her eyes. She shivered, wished her breasts were more his interest. She could get mad at him for that, could choose to be insulted if she wanted to. But this was worse. It was as if he could see into her heart, and her heart began to thud hard enough to shake her.

“Are you buying presents?” Kristi asked with a twinkling smile.

He released Beth’s eyes and turned back to Kristi. “Presents? Yes.”

“Not a toy for you?”

Mike laughed. “Not for me. If you’re asking whether I’m single, the answer is yes, I am now.”

“You’re divorced? Me too,” said Kristi.

That drew a groan from Beth, only in her head she hoped, but Mike Hartnett glanced in her direction with another smile. It was just a flash and then he was back to Kristi.

“Yeah. Three years ago.”

“It’s been two years for me. It’s ancient history now,” Kristi said.

“Can I buy you guys a drink or something?”

It was Kristi’s turn to grin. “That might be arranged.”

He glanced at his watch. “Happy hour soon.”

“Today? Why not, let’s do it.”

“Beth? Will you join us?” he asked.

“No thanks.”

“Can’t I twist your arm? I really wish you’d come.”

She stared. He seemed so earnest, almost pleading. A spurt of hope tickled her heart. Well, no sense in getting her hopes up for nothing- might as well lay it on the line. “I have to warn you. I have a four year old son.”

Mike broke into another smile. “Does he like Lincoln Logs?”

“What? I don’t know. I guess.”

His eyes sparkled, his smiled widened. “My daughter has a set.”

Beth’s breath caught. “You have a daughter?”

He nodded. “Yup. Now, can I buy you that drink?”

 

 

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The Spot Writers- our members: 

RC Bonitz
http://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller
https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie
http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com

 

 

 

Note: I originally wrote this book review for Freedom Forge Press, a publisher celebrating freedoms of all kinds. The review is reprinted here with permission.

Emily Miller is a journalist and a resident of Washington, D.C. When she found herself defenseless as criminals broke into a friend’s home, she decided to go through the red tape required to purchase and possess a legal firearm in Washington, D.C. This book is her nonfiction account of her journey (of several months) to navigate the red-tape aimed at making legal handgun possession too difficult for most people to achieve.

The narrative is told in alternating chapters, with Miller interspersing her personal journey for firearm possession with the recent incidents involving politicians and the media, many of which seem to be aimed at grabbing the guns of law-abiding Americans. Her style is easy to understand—it’s almost as if she’s sitting down with you for a chat. The speeches, laws, and documents she cites are extensively documented, so it’s easy to do further research on any of the points she makes.

I met Emily Miller at a book signing earlier this fall. I was amazed by how crowded her signing was!

I met Emily Miller at a book signing earlier this fall. I was amazed by how crowded her signing was!

Her personal journey to legally register a gun is frustrating, to say the least. She had to spend hundreds of dollars in fees (not counting the purchase of the actual gun), take time off work, navigate officials ignorant of the actual laws and regulations, and jump through many hoops—when in the very same city, criminals and non-criminals alike refuse to register their guns. She proves, once again, that only the law-abiding citizens are being punished by strict gun-control measures.

And yet the focus of the book isn’t just about guns. The last paragraph of her book summarizes her primary purpose in writing the book. While it’s a book about her fight for personal gun rights, she notes, “A gun is just a tool. The fight is for freedom.” Before experiencing the frightening break-in at her friend’s house, Miller had never shot or even held a gun before. Her motive throughout the book is emphasized as wanting to help law-abiding citizens secure the same rights that criminals seem to have—the ability to carry a firearm. She notes how anti-gun legislation doesn’t make anyone safer; it simply removes freedoms.

Throughout the book, she also explains how many of the politicians and “anti-gun” advocates seem to know little, if anything, about guns. For instance, many anti-gun lobbyists seem to believe that Americans can still purchase automatic weapons (think: Rambo). She reminds the reader that the most “dangerous” weapons Americans can possess are semi-automatic, meaning one trigger pull equals one bullet. She also points out that many gun laws seem arbitrary. For instance, when legislation was recently passed in New York, politicians mandated that residents could possess magazines able to hold no more than seven bullets. Had they done their research, they would have seen that seven-bullet magazines generally don’t exist for most calibers. The law was amended to allow residents to possess magazines that hold ten rounds, but only fill them with up to seven bullets. As she points out—a criminal will not abide by the law and will (a) secure even higher-capacity magazines by any means possible and (b) will not think twice about placing more than seven bullets in the magazine.

This point, that laws restricting gun rights only hurt law-abiding citizens, is proven time and again in this book.

She mentions also the arbitrary nature of some of the “assault weapons” legislation aimed at limiting the types of weapons people may purchase. The gun she chose to purchase, for instance, was allowed in the District of Columbia in all black, or in black with a silver accent. But the same exact model was not allowed in the “Scorpion” version, the only difference being cosmetic—the “outlawed” version is earth-toned tan. The same is true for rifles. Many assault weapons are banned simply for having one or more cosmetic features. The type of grip, for instance, could make one gun outlawed but another, of the same exact caliber and functionality, would be legal. Adjustable stocks are also a big “no no” when it comes to legal. It’s ironic that an adjustable stock simply makes it easier for a smaller person—such as a female—to comfortably hold the gun. Things like adjustable stocks and variable grip positions do not give criminals any advantage. Rather, they help disadvantaged people—like small women—hold the gun more safely and effectively in use against a criminal. Once again, the people creating the laws seem to have no practical knowledge of guns, or what specifically makes them dangerous.

As is proven many times in the book, none of the laws deter criminals from possessing or using guns. The point is—criminals are criminals. Murder and theft are already illegal. Criminals ignore those laws. Even police officers surveyed admit that gun bans and stricter gun laws will have little impact on criminals using guns. In fact, politicians usually ignore the most important points, which is that there already is a background system check in place for gun purchasers. The “gun show loophole” only actually allows an extremely small percentage of people to buy guns without a background check, and mental health checks—largely ignored, as states fail to upload important mental health data into the already-existent national background check—are the most important factor of keeping guns out of the hands of people who would most likely misuse them.

There’s also the argument that gun-free zones become like a playground for criminals. Knowing they won’t be confronted by any concealed-carrying  citizens, criminals feel free to shoot as many people as they like without fearing the consequences. Just look at the crime rates in Washington, D.C., and Chicago. Miller also makes the point that even though gun sales have skyrocketed lately (with the threat of gun bans), crime has been steadily decreasing. Increased gun ownership has not increased gun-related crime.

The examples go on and on. (Someone could write a book! Oh wait, someone has!)

Toward the end of the book, Miller cites examples of veterans arrested for arbitrary reasons—one for having three unregistered guns in the city, one for having several loose rounds in the bottom of a backpack (but no weapon). She tells how celebrities and people with political connections do not have to go through the same scrutiny. For both veterans, who were not committing any actual crimes, jail time, extensive legal fees, and undue stress was required before they were finally cleared of (most of) the charges.

Miller notes that she could easily move to Virginia, where gun laws are much more fair to law-abiding citizens, but she chooses not to: she wants to stay in Washington, D.C., and continue her fight for gun rights. She notes that, although she is allowed to keep her gun in her home, she is not allowed to carry it outside, even into the lobby of her apartment. Along her journey to become legally armed, she has met many people who have confided in her, and her goal continues to be helping others exercise their Second Amendment Rights without unnecessary restriction. She is truly a freedom fighter, and one worthy of two thumbs up from Freedom Forge Press.

Welcome to the Spot Writers segment for this week. This week’s contribution comes from Deborah Dera. The prompt for the past few weeks has been to choose an item and write about why your character stole it. Deborah’s piece morphed a bit from the prompt, and is in no way, shape, or form a true story.

 

Next week’s prompt will come from RC Bonitz, author of A LITTLE BIT OF BLACKMAIL, A LITTLE BIT OF BABY, and A BLANKET FOR HER HEART.

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 Family Secrets

 

I knew there wasn’t much I could do about it, but I always convinced myself I had to try – again, and again, and again. The private conversations worked for a couple of days, resulting in the sudden disappearance of his secret stash and several hours of lucidity. Family interventions resulted in tears, promises, and – at most – two or three weeks of cleanliness. Getting picked up for possession should have resulted in about a month of sobriety, but it didn’t. There were too many suppliers in the prison.

When Rex was up for release, my mom asked if I’d take him in. He’s always looked up to you, she said. He’ll listen to you. You’re a great role model.

And I believed her. For some reason, I really believed her. I convinced myself I could rehabilitate my baby brother; make him see the right path.

For a little while, it seemed to be working. Rex lost his license, so I was driving him to work each day. Most nights, after work, I’d drop him off at his meetings – a different flavor for each night of the week. He started drawing again and spent some of his spare time helping me with lawn upkeep and chores around the house. He seemed happy.

Then – out of the blue – he just wasn’t. He’d sulk when I dropped him off at meetings. At night, he’d shut himself in his room. It got to the point where I wasn’t even sure he was consuming more than coffee each day.

Maybe he needs a really good inpatient program, my husband suggested. I can talk to him.

 I didn’t want to hear it or believe it. I didn’t want it to be real. Things had been going so well and all I wanted was for my baby brother to be whole again.

So that’s why I did it, really. I had a good reason.

It was the night I went to pick Rex up from a meeting and found he wasn’t there. He was always waiting outside promptly at 7:15pm. There were always stragglers inside, socializing, but he never wanted to participate. After waiting for 10 minutes, I put the car in park and headed inside. I pulled a tall, lanky woman aside and asked if she knew where Rex was.

Rex? Rex hasn’t been to a meeting here in… oh… 3 weeks or so.

 My heart sank.  I drove aimlessly around the neighborhood that night, trying to remember where some of his old haunts were. My stomach knotted when I spotted him across the dark school playground, huddled near the slide with two other guys. I circled the block and pulled up slowly near the playground gate. I rolled the window down enough for him to see who it was and parked my car at the curb. I waited.

Rex had his back to me but looked around as the others noticed me. I watched as he made some sort of exchange with the guy to his left, then shaking hands with the guy to his right. He turned towards me, head low and hands shoved deep into his pockets. He opened the passenger door and slid in nimbly. He seemed sober.

Hey, sis! I remember the cheer in his voice; his happy-go-lucky attitude. He really didn’t know what was wrong with the situation.

 I took a breath. I don’t know what was going on there, and I don’t really want to know. What I do know is that you broke the terms of our agreement. So when we get home, you can pack your shit and get out of my house.

 Rex looked stunned. No, sis, no. You don’t understand. I’m totally clean. Totally. I just… I have to pay a few people. I owe these guys some money and…

He trailed off, realizing how ridiculous it sounded, telling me he’d shifted from user to dealer. My heart broke into a thousand pieces.

At least… can I at least have until morning? I need to pack up and make some calls in the morning. Just until morning?

 I nodded my agreement. I was angry, but not completely cold-hearted.

We parted ways as soon as we got out of the car. I didn’t want to look at him. I felt betrayed. I went into my room and cried until my husband came in. He listened and didn’t judge, and then suggested I talk to my brother to find out if he was in real trouble. If for no other reason than to make sure we weren’t going to find trouble.

An hour later, I crept down the basement stairs and softly spoke his name. No answer. I gently knocked on the makeshift door, but still no answer. I pushed the door open, carefully and quietly, and flipped the switch inside. Rex wasn’t there.

I’ll never forget what I did see, though. Dozens and dozens of dime-sized baggies. Pills, powders – spread around his room. My brother really had shifted from a user to a dealer and I stood, stunned, as a wave of emotions coursed through my veins. Then I saw it – the syringe – and I realized I was only fooling myself. Neither was great, but knowing he was using and dealing was even worse. Suddenly, holding onto my anger like it was a lifeline, I turned heel. In the basement utility closet I found a 13 gallon garbage bag. I went back to my brother’s room and put every single baggie, box, and related supply into the bag, knotting it tight at the top.

Flipping the light off on my way out, I stopped at the closet and grabbed another bag, dropping the first one inside. I had an irrational fear of the first bag ripping.

I barreled up the stairs and marched past my bewildered husband, straight out the front door and to my car. Peeling out of the driveway, I drove straight past the town dump – too easy. I hopped on the highway and drove for 45 minutes – north – I don’t know why I chose to go north. I chose an exit, at random, and drove around until I found a big box grocery store. At the back of the building, I found the dumps to be about half full – and that’s where I tossed the bag.

When I arrived home, two hours after leaving, I stayed silent. I kissed my husband gently and went straight to bed. The overwhelming anger turned into utter exhaustion, and I was consumed by a deep, dark sleep.

The next morning, Rex was nowhere to be found. When I checked his room, it looked like it had been ransacked, though I suspected he was the only one to blame. He was, very likely, too high to realize what he’d done with his stash, but he remembered me telling him to leave.

I haven’t seen him since.

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The Spot Writers- our members: 

RC Bonitz
http://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller
https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie
http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This week the prompt is to have a character explain why they stole something. 

Today’s contribution comes from Catherine MacKenzie. Her most recent publication, BETWEEN THESE PAGES, is a compilation of 18 short stories. The book is available on Amazon and Smashwords

 

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The Vase

Fragmented snakes twist around broken and chipped Chinese men. Hopelessly, their glossy faces—both snakes and men—glare at me, perhaps begging to be put out of their misery. I want to help, but it’s too late. At one time they were safe—when, healthy and whole, they leered from a two-foot-high porcelain vase. Now, it’s a puzzle as to where one slimy snake begins and another ends.

The vase belonged to my mother, passed down to her from her mother, though it had been a wild ride to her home. At first, it had been in the possession of my maternal great-grandfather until stolen by his disgruntled housekeeper. After his death, the thief had taken pity on his widow, for one day it appeared in a crate on my great-grandmother’s doorstep. The vase had been carted to England, Scotland, Portugal, Canada, China and the United States—not necessarily in that order—and to some places more than once. Surprisingly, the object remained in perfect condition.

Of course, all that was hearsay, since the tale had been passed down from the generations. But it makes for interesting talk.

My mother thought the ornamental object to be worthless. I knew otherwise. My three siblings were clueless and only vaguely knew the item existed.

I wanted the objet d’art. Badly.

Today, I see my mother’s face every time I enter my apartment. Those once-intact Chinese faces have morphed into hers. Too many of them, all sneering at me, as if they know the truth. In my defense, she wasn’t supposed to get hurt. And the vase wasn’t supposed to have broken.

Sometimes, however, you can’t control events. Sometimes life doesn’t play out like you envision. Sometimes you’re left with nothing but regrets.

My mother protected the vase the night the masked man broke into her home. The intruder fought back, selfishly determined to have what he desired. In the end, no one won. The almost million dollar ornament cracked into several pieces when it hit the floor. My mother, devastated—not because of its monetary worth but for sentimental reasons (for if she had cared about its dollar value, it would’ve sat in a vault)—picked up the poker resting by the fireplace beneath the mantle where the vase had been displayed. The intruder, instinctively protecting himself, fought back. The poor woman didn’t stand a chance.

I snatched a hunk of the porcelain before I raced off that night. The large shard now rests on my mantle, a memento as fragile as breath.

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The Spot Writers- our members: 

RC Bonitz

http://www.rcbonitz.com

 

Val Muller

https://valmuller.com/blog/

 

Catherine A. MacKenzie

http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Deborah Dera
http://www.deborahdera.com

I’m on a “kick” of reading or re-reading dystopian-style novels, including 1984, We, Atlas Shrugged and The Fountainhead, and Brave New World. It’s interesting that they all have so many themes in common. Certainly, the later dystopias have been influenced by the earlier ones, but I’m fascinated by the common threads running through each—and the applicability to our current world.

Published in the 1930s, this dystopian novel takes place in London, where humankind has created a perfect society free from change, unpredictability, sadness, and freedom. Though the writing style and outdated vocabulary makes the book a bit difficult at times for a general reader, the implications of this book are frightening.

In this society, which has replaced “God” with “Ford” (as in Henry Ford), and replaced the cross with the sign of the T, and started counting time at the invention of the Model-T, everything is planned, from being “born” in a hatchery to dying in a death center. Life, in essence, is like living in an assembly line. Some characters are named, and their names seem significant: one of the main characters’ last names is Marx, for instance, and the female lead’s name is Lenina, as well as John, the noble savage. There are more that you could research if you were feeling up to it.

I can’t help but compare Brave New World to 1984, which also takes place in London. But whereas 1984 controls the population with vinegar, Brave New World uses honey—which in many ways is more frightening. People are so inundated and stupid that they no longer care about anything.

John, a “savage” from a “reservation” in America, is taken to London and treated with both fear and curiosity as somewhat of a celebrity. His mother Linda was born in London, and she became trapped on the reservation during a vacation there. Left pregnant without the possibility of an abortion, Linda is horrified. The idea of a live birth, or a mother, for that matter, is horrifying in this world. Here, everyone is a “test-tube” baby, designed to fit into a strictly-defined caste system with intelligences from Alpha Plus to Epsilon (semi-moron). From “birth,” babies are conditioned to love their place in life, disliking all other social castes just enough to eliminate any possibility of envy. They are conditioned in all things society deems appropriate, including an addiction to soma, a drug with no side effects after the “trip” has passed, and sex—encouraged with sex-hormone chewing gum, rampant birth control, and a conditioning to desire many and frequent partners. Like other dystopian novels, this society frowns upon “alone time” and attachment to one particular person. The best way to be happy is to remain social on a superficial level. And if things do get frightening, there is always soma.

The most disturbing type of conditioning in the book, I think, is the death conditioning. People in this society are kept “young” until they are sixty years old, at which time their bodies are ready for death. They are placed into dying centers, and young children infest these centers like lice, watching death as it happens. To complete the conditioning, which removes the fear of death, the children are given chocolate éclairs at the time of death, so in their mind, death is comforting and sweet.

Anyone who doesn’t fit in such a society is sent to one of the world’s many islands. Though not many details are given about these islands, I imagine them to be somewhat like Galt’s Gulch in Atlas Shrugged—places where independent thinkers are left alone to invent and produce, with no contact with the outside world. Our savage John, however, is not allowed to go to such a place. He is seen as a social experiment—someone born and raised without any social conditioning. John is addicted to Shakespeare. His mother gave him the only interesting book she could find on the reservation, a copy of The Complete Works of William Shakespeare, and John compares everything he encounters to a Shakespearean play or character (hence the title). In the end, guilt at witnessing his mother’s death and witnessing the dystopia of London, he punishes himself physically but even then cannot get through the conditioned skulls of London’s inhabitants just how frightening their lives are.

As in most dystopias, common threads prevail: no alone-time, as mentioned. No independent thought. No sadness. Time occupied by superficial business. When John finally does confront the population, he realizes they actually fear freedom. They do not want to make decisions. They do not want responsibility. They do not want “the freedom to be unhappy.” He criticizes their society as “infantile” and “too easy,” but none of the general population seems to care. The “Alpha Plus” caste is limited to a small percentage of the population because people of such high ability have the potential of becoming sad and discontent, proving that this society believes that ignorance is bliss. But ultimately, readers are left with the question: if society has “perfected” life to such an extent that we can live as perpetual infants, without any time delay between our desires and fulfilling those desires, what then is the point of living at all?

In making connections to modern life, I see “instant gratification” in such things as Twitter, Facebook, and other apps. If we are discontent or alone, we need not sit and think, or read, or contemplate meaning in life. Instead, we can click onto our phones and see what superficial things one of our 842 Facebook or Twitter “friends” are up to. Government subsidies largely provide phones for all members of the population unable to afford the technology on their own. As John notes, literature of the past has been replaced by “feelies,” smut-filled, plotless, mindless drivel. Reality shows, anyone? Technology has indeed kept us younger longer, and our capitalist society, as of now, has allowed us to find most of what we desire relatively quickly. The only thing we’re missing is conditioning that removes our jealousy of other “classes.” To me, “honey” is the scariest way to control a population—as in The Fountainhead, the population will be so brainwashed that they will “ask” those in power to deprive them of freedom and the rights and responsibilities that come with it.

The following tale is told by Abigail, the main character in Val Muller’s work-in-progress. It’s a post-disaster sci-fi tale in which Abigail struggles to keep a barren earth from falling into a complete wasteland. You can learn more about Val at valm16.sg-host.com or www.corgicapers.com, with holiday sales going on at valm16.sg-host.com/store.

Stealing Time

I took it. No trade, no payment. I just took it and ran. But I had to.

The wire coil was in the best shape of any wire I’ve found. It’s just thick enough to do the job, and there’s enough of it. I’m one step closer to the desalinizer now. That is, I’ll be one step closer assuming I make it back. I’m sure Herrity will discover it’s missing soon, and of course he’ll know I took it. But I couldn’t pay him. Not in any of the ways he wanted. I’m hoping he sleeps through to the dawn. Then I’ll be long gone.

See, I’m traveling all night. Can’t afford to sleep on the road—not being alone with no one to keep watch, and not with Herrity close enough to track me. He’s got that awful hound. It’s safer to walk. The moon is full, and the night is still. I will likely hear a stranger approach—and certainly Herrity or his pooch. Pop would be furious, of course. He still thinks I’m with Ryan. But Pop would understand.

Besides, him and Daddy taught me well. Daddy would be proud, too, wherever he is. I learned from him. I travel light. Have to. Which is why I had little to trade. I couldn’t give Herrity my canteen, though he would have traded for that. My backpack is almost as valuable. Thing is, Herrity doesn’t even need anything. His shop has the most artifacts of any I’ve seen. He can trade anyone for anything. He has two backpacks and three canteens. There’s nothing he could want.

Almost.

I felt his eyes licking my body as soon as I walked in. I’d been warned about him, too. But I’m going to build this machine if it kills me. Still, there’s a limit to what a girl will do. Even in a desert wasteland.

I even told him about the desalinization machine I’m building. I figured he’d understand, want to do something for the greater good. I mean, if I succeed at this, the water will help him, too. You’d think he’d want to help. The wells are going dry. Those left behind are dying. There is no time. The wire to me—it’s time.

But he wanted something too costly.

I had a knife in my boot, and I thought briefly about using it, but I’m not sure Herrity deserved it—even with the reputation he has. Daddy always told me be careful who I judge. So I thought it better to sneak in while he was sleeping. Luckily he’s a heavy sleeper.

I’m still shaking, but the brisk walk helps still my nerves. It was a close call, sure. He could have woken up. And I’m still not sure how I would have reacted. The knife in my boot… or would I have given in? Those rough, crawling hands of his… How far would I go for the desalinizer? When time is not on my side, how far? How far?

I know the answer well. And it scares me to no end.

And so I’ll pick up my pace under the dry pallor of the moon and try not to think about what might have been—and focus instead on what will be, on what I will make become the future.

 

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I’ve previously read and reviewed book one and book two in this trilogy. This review of the third and final book in the series will contain some spoilers, though I’m trying to hold back.

Where we left off, Calwyn, a once-powerful and talented chanter, has lost her powers. She no longer senses magic in the world, yet she is still on a mission to defeat Samis, the antagonist from the first books who seems bent on using magic to dominate the world. Calwyn’s love interest, Darrow, left her in book 2 in order to return to his homeland. She longs to be reunited with him, but she is ashamed that she has lost her power.

Without giving away too many plot points, Calwyn eventually regains her powers but has to find out how to deal the world. A snow-sickness is spreading to all chanters, and it has affected Darrow, who is an ironchanter. Calwyn cannot touch Darrow until she heals him, but even with a talented healer, Darrow’s time is running out. Too much else is revealed in this book that would ruin the plot for you, so I’ll stick with critique for the rest of this review.

I enjoyed the first book in the series the best. I thought Calwyn was portrayed clearly and effectively in that book. In the second two books, the plot seemed to get in the way. There was also a budding romance between Calwyn and Darrow in the first book, and I actually felt the romantic tension between them. The feeling dwindled in the second book (because of the plot), but in the third book, it’s implied that a romance exists, though I wasn’t feeling any of it. (This is for younger readers, so I’m not looking for an all-out romance, but I want to feel something between the characters.) As a counterpoint, Calwyn is at one point kidnapped by Samis, and there is a brief romance that develops between them, and I felt much more tension there than I did at any point with Darrow.

I did like the idea Constable wove into the conclusion of the book (brief spoiler ahead!). We learn of the origins of the two feuding factions—one originated from the tree people, the native population of the world, while the other came from space—the space between the stars. There’s even a spaceship at the end. Really.

Another really great aspect of the book–but a huge spoiler: the tenth power Calwyn had been seeking was actually the written word. It was a new concept for the world in which she lives, and once she discovers the written word, she realizes that knowledge can now be written down and passed on truthfully from one generation to the next; knowledge no longer has to be lost, and superstitions don’t have to be perpetuated as they were in our own Middle Ages. This was a great concept.

My favorite scene, however, was the dancing scene at the end. I won’t ruin why the scene was there, but the imagery contained is amazing.

This was a quick read, and despite my disappointments with some of the characterization, I am glad I finished the series.

Have you ever heard of Elf on the Shelf? It’s that game where parents buy an elf and then arrange it at night doing weird things—which the kids can then find later on. Well, my husband has created his own version… using Mordles.

It started a while back—with a dream, actually (you can read about it here). My husband bought me a set of blue Mordles and gave it to me right away (before I exploded with excitement). After that, he started doing weird things.IMG_0670

He bought a Mordle egg, for storage. One evening I found the egg sitting on my pillow with a Mordle sitting on top of it. I picked up the egg and shook it. Nothing. I put the Mordle and egg on my dresser and went on with my day. The same thing happened for several days. One morning, just when I was disarmed enough, I shook the egg on my dresser, and it rattled. Inside was a Mordle of a different color. This process happened on and off for the entire summer, and eventually I had a set of Mordles in dark blue, pink, green, and yellow.

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Life continued on, and the Mordle craze cooled for a bit, but from time to time I would check out the website (toyfinity.com) to see if any new colors had appeared.

Well, on my birthday we awoke at 3:45 a.m. The furnace was half broken, and the repair person (who would not be able to repair the furnace until an ordered part had arrived) said if it got too cold outside, the heat pump would stop working, but the electric furnace (the backup) would not be able to come on because that was the part that was broken. We awoke to a rumbling in the attic—the temperature had dropped, making the heat pump fail. The electric furnace was trying to come on but failing. No heat. I buried my head under the pillow while my husband turned off the furnace for safety—and I prepared a cold start to my birthday. (Luckily, we have our main furnace in the basement—the broken one is just for the upper-level of our home). There, in the cold darkness, my husband whispered, “You are being watched.”

I turned on my lamp, and sure enough—a blood red Mordle was sitting there on the book I had been reading before bed—watching me. The discoveries continued throughout the day. There was a red Mordle on the dog treat jar, on the hook where I hang my keys. Even one in the fridge! By the end of the day, I had found all ten of them.

Red Mordle chilling in the fridge!

Red Mordle chilling in the fridge!

I also found a few more in a packet labeled “Happy Birthday!” Apparently, my husband had contacted John at ToyFinity about purchasing the Mordles, and he sent a few as a birthday surprise!

Anyway, I brought them upstairs, where all my Mordles from the summer were stored in two egg containers. I dumped out one of them, and put a brown explorer Mordle, a red Mordle, and my original Mordle that I still have from the 1980s on top. I said, “I wonder if anything will hatch.”

The next day, the egg was cracked open, and a midnight black Mordle was sitting in the middle of the ruin. It’s probably the coolest of all Mordle colors. Black as midnight and very sinister. When I came home late after a meeting, the black Mordle was sitting on the dogs’ food bin next to a black permanent marker. It was sitting on a sheet of paper with strange markings on it (that looked similar to WingDings font):

 

A mysterious message

A mysterious message

When I finally decoded the message, it told me that the black Mordle and its nine siblings were hiding—three on each level of the house, all hiding in blackness. I searched the house, and the midnight Mordles were hiding in shadowy darkness: on the black leather chair, on the black DVD player, in the folds of a black umbrella.

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It reminded me of the Elf on the Shelf game: some were sitting there watching TV. Others appeared to be reading or watching the dogs. I think the Mordles could give Elf on a Shelf a run for its money. Someone should write a book: Mordles in the House. Start a new tradition good for any time of year. Heck, maybe I’ll do it.

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Anyway, here is a glance at my Mordle collection as of now. There are still a few colors missing:

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The biggest surprise of my birthday, however, was a special chocolate chip cookie cake (my favorite kind of “cake.”). My husband asked if I would go get him a glass of milk, which was odd—why would he ask me to get up and get him something on my birthday? It’s uncharacteristic, and also suspect because he was already in the kitchen and I was in the other room. I knew it was a trap! There on the counter below where the milk glasses would be, was a photo-cookie-cake featuring… the Mordles (the “crawler edition” blue—my favorites)!

Mordle Chocolate-Chip Birthday Photo Cake FTW!

Mordle Chocolate-Chip Birthday Photo Cake FTW!

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Keep calm and Mordle on!

Keep calm and Mordle on!

Thirty Days of Thankful

As Thanksgiving comes around once again, many people have been posting one thing to be thankful for each day in November. I’ve decided to condense mine to a list of 30 things I’m thankful for. I wrote one each day, and they’re not necessarily in order of importance or thankfulness; rather, they correspond to what I was thinking about each day in November:

  1. Electricity: This came to light after thinking about things that have happened around this time of year in the past—the terrible devastation of Hurricane Sandy, the pre-Halloween snowstorm a few years back that downed tree branches and power lines… Although I didn’t lose power this year, I’ve been without it for a week two or three times in my life, and it’s not fun. Food storage, light, and heat—thank goodness for those!
  2. Shelter: As the weather tries to decide what season it is, I’m thankful for the creature comfort of shelter. Thankfully, I have a warm, safe place to live.
  3. Car: I’m thankful for the freedom and convenience offered by my car. Groceries, job, shopping… I sure couldn’t walk!
  4. Sun: Every winter, I remember how much I love the sun. I’m so happy in the summertime, and part of that is because the sun. It’s hard to explain how I feel during the months of low sunlight. A mix of despair and sadness, like something has been lost and will never return. But that’s okay—it makes golden, sunny days all the more valuable. After all, “nothing gold can stay”…
  5. Mother: Aside from countless acts of caring during my childhood, I am thankful for my mom for being someone to talk to, someone who spent 2 days of her summer helping me paint our huge living room and hallways, and someone who will always be there for me and will always hold me in her heart.
  6. Friends: November 6th is a good friend’s birthday. In fact, so is November 3rd. Growing up, both of these friends always nurtured ideas and embraced creativity. Although I’m a solitary creature by nature, I do appreciate having caring friends and coworkers to help me through life’s ups-and-downs.
  7. Freedom: Above all, I’m thankful for freedom—for the ability to speak my mind without fear of repercussions (and I hope I may always be thankful for this).
  8. Father: My father is full of wisdom and advice despite his penchant for teasing. He’s been called a “writer’s gold mine” and is a constant inspiration for ideas, many of them planted by him while I was a child. He is largely responsible for my creativity.
  9. Sister: “Friends and sisters; not just sisters, but also friends.” My mother used to sing this song to me and my sister when we were kids. It’s true we had our fights, but they were never vicious. Now, we’re even better friends than before, and I’m thankful we can call each other up for support whenever it’s needed. Also, I’m pretty sure if the apocalypse ever happens, we’ll have each other’s back.
  10. Food: I don’t always enjoy eating, but the fact that it sometimes feels like a chore to me make me thankful—it means I have enough of it to be healthy and content. I’ve felt true hunger only a few times in my life, and it was never a serious situation—just a product of inconvenience.
  11. Veterans: I’m thankful for my husband, and all Veterans, for dedicating themselves to making this country a safer place.
  12. Dogs: Not only did my dogs inspire me to write the first novel that was accepted for publication, but having dogs is a constant joy. No matter what kind of horrible day I’ve had, and regardless of whether I’ve been gone for five minutes or five days, the dogs always greet me like my presence is the best thing that could have happened to them. Thank goodness for unconditional love.
  13. Books: Books don’t require electricity, and there are no commercial breaks. I read a quote somewhere that nothing furnishes a home so much as books, and it’s true. When books are around, I am comforted by the fact that I can travel anywhere in my mind with their help. I can stretch my brain and fly around the world without leaving my seat.
  14. Job: As much as we complain about our jobs, we shouldn’t take them for granted. All it takes is being jobless to realize how much a job—even a job we would otherwise complain about—means. As I hear about growing unemployment numbers, I am thankful to have a stable job in which I feel like I am making a difference.
  15. My publishers: I’m thankful to Dancing With Bear Publishing for taking a chance on Corgi Capers and giving me the first opportunity to succeed as a novelist, and also for Crowded Quarantine, World Castle, and Barking Rain Press for current and upcoming releases.
  16. Music: It never ceases to amaze me how music—and all art—can reach across decades and centuries, even after the composer has died, to inspire and entertain us. I write this as I’m listening to Vivaldi’s “Winter” from The Four Seasons. It truly represents the resilience of the human spirit to transcend all limitations, including death.
  17. Mind: I am thankful for my mind. I’ve been blessed with an unnaturally creative and imaginative mind. I am never bored because even when I have nothing to do, I can escape to the recesses of my mind.
  18. Husband: It can’t be overstated that I love living each day with my best friend, a constant support.  
  19. Heat: There’s just nothing like cuddling under a blanket and feeling the warmth of the heat coming out of the vents when the rest of the air is chilly.
  20. Health: I waited for my birthday to write about this one, but it tops my list. To paraphrase F. Scott Fitzgerald, there is nothing more stark than the contrast between the healthy and the sick. All the things we complain about might seem irrelevant to someone fighting for his or her life. It’s easy, being healthy, to lose perspective. And it’s easy to forget that, as my parents used to remind me, we’re all here “but for the Grace of God,” meaning we can never take tomorrow for granted. Although I hate the idea of birthdays, my parents like to say, “would you prefer the alternative?”
  21. Capitalism: I truly believe that there is no better system in the world for bringing equality of opportunity and a better quality of life to the entire population than free market capitalism. Though we don’t live in a world free from cronyism or harmful overregulation, I am thankful that we come close, and I wouldn’t trade the benefits of our system for any other.
  22. Sleep: I didn’t always sleep well. I’m sometimes either excited about a writing idea, kept awake by a book, or kept disturbed by stress or worries, so when I do get to sleep—that really deep, restful sleep, I really appreciate it.
  23. Thinkers: I am thankful for the people who think—who actually use their brains to have engaging, meaningful discussions with me. You know who you are—those I feel free to talk to on a weekly, or even daily, basis. Thank you for not drinking the Kool-aid.
  24. Snow Days: While I don’t think we’ll be having a November snow day this year, there’s nothing like the unexpected gift of time. It’s the only thing in life humans truly have no control over—it passes regardless of our efforts, and we can only control how we spend it. A snow day, to me, represents the invaluable gift of time, and mine are never squandered.
  25. Then Again, Days That Aren’t Snow Days: Even before I got stuck for 12 hours in a car during a (not even that bad) snow storm (people cannot drive in snow and had abandoned their cars in the middle of roads), I’ve hated snow. It’s dangerous. Not having to shovel feet of snow, or figure out what to do until a snow-related power outage ends makes me thankful to be at work!
  26. Human Achievement: I am not a big government supporter, and I believe what we have accomplished as human being comes despite the government, not because of it. I am glad that, despite stupid (even if well-meaning) decisions, corruption, lobbyists, dictators, tyrants, serfdom, and other forms of oppression man has historically allowed, humankind has always held onto that spark that makes us great, that makes us fight for freedom for ourselves and each other, and I hope that this world will never meet something so oppressive as to extinguish that spark.
  27. Memories: Memories can bring me comfort even in the worst of times, and I am thankful that my life has been blessed with mostly happy memories to cherish.
  28. Family: I am grateful each year to be able to spend Thanksgiving with loved ones, and remember those who are no longer with us.
  29. Contact Lenses: A conversation during Thanksgiving reminded me how much better I am able to see thanks to the contact lenses I have been wearing since late high school.
  30. My grandfather: Though I never met him in this life, my grandfather has been a comfort and an inspiration in my dreams, and I truly credit him for my newfound peace with my job and for my budding success as a writer. I don’t purport to understand the mysteries that are out there, but I am thankful to him for showing me that whatever it is, it’s a comfort, not a fear.