Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story using the following five words: tables, swimming pool, pavement, trees, mailboxes.

Today’s post comes from Phil Yeats. In December, Phil (using his Alan Kemister pen name) published his most recent novel. Tilting at Windmills, the second in the Barrettsport Mysteries series of soft-boiled police detective stories set in an imaginary Nova Scotia coastal community is available on Amazon in both ebook and paperback formats.

Pool Party

By Phil Yeats

Michael watched his little sister from the front steps of their suburban bungalow. The Junior Achievement wunderkind at her middle school was selling lemonade at two tables perched beside the pavement.

He noticed her unusual clumsiness, dropping coins and spilling lemonade as she fidgeted while serving her customers from beneath the shade of their cut-leaf maple trees. When she sat down and squeezed her knees together, he twigged. His money-grubbing little sister needed the bathroom, but she was unwilling to risk losing a sale while away from her perch.

Perfect, Michael thought as he rushed down the steps. He could accomplish his goal while helping his annoying little sister. That would totally shock her.

It worked perfectly. Sis was effusive with her thanks as she rushed away before she peed her pants. Michael was sitting there doing his Good Samaritan schtick when Jessica sauntered by on her way to Tuesday afternoon practice at the Y’s swimming pool.

Jessica stopped just as he hoped she would. “Your little sister’s employing you as a barista?”

“She had an embarrassing, um, personal problem, so I’m holding the fort.”

“But you’ll be free at four?”

He laughed. “Hope I’ll be done in ten minutes.”

“Good, you can join us at the pool. We’re getting together for a little relaxation after practice.”

“During the late afternoon open swim?”

“Yup. Pool party, then we have sodas and snacks.”

Michael shook his head. “Pool parties aren’t my thing.”

“Why not? We’re not all championship swimmers.”

He paused, thinking his avoidance of swimming-related activities was common knowledge but didn’t give it the serious consideration it deserved. “I don’t even own trunks.”

She grinned, and he realized he’d fallen straight into her trap. “New policy resurrected from the 1950s. Swim trunks are optional for guys.”

“No way. Those naked swimming at YMCA stories are grossly exaggerated urban myths.”

“Oh, they’re true enough. You’ll find plenty of evidence on the web, and our Y is resurrecting it.”

Again, Michael shook his head. “But those Ys were male only. Ours is a combined YM and YW with a common pool, and you’re talking about co-ed activities, aren’t you?”

“You’ll see. The official send-off for this wonderful idea of CFNM swimming at the Y is this Friday. I’ve sent you a personal invitation. Check your snail mail. It’ll be there.”

Michael played the trump card from his brilliant plan without considering how Jessica’d shanghaied his agenda. “I have a far superior idea. How about we attend Fiddlestix’s Friday night concert?”

She clapped her hands together. “The amphitheatre, so the concert starts at eight?” He nodded, and she continued. “Perfect. You can let it all hang out at the pool in the afternoon and we can attend the concert together in the evening.”

She skipped down the street before Michael could reply. She’d skewered him with her latest scheme and left him no escape route if he wanted her to attend the concert.

He turned, wondering what happened to his sister. He no longer had time to sit here minding her stupid lemonade stand.

After she reappeared wearing a different pair of shorts, Michael rushed to the box office. While waiting for his concert tickets, he texted his friend Jared’s mother. She worked at the Y, so she would have the scoop on Jessica’s crazy event. On the way home, he tackled the community mailboxes at the end of their street. He whipped open their box and extracted a letter with the combined YMYWCA logo on the envelope. The formal invitation confirmed what Jessie told him.

He should have known she wasn’t joking. They’d been close friends through grade twelve and planned to attend the same university. They constantly teased and challenged each other, but his insecurity kept their relationship on a mostly Platonic level despite her frequent attempts to up the intensity.

Friday afternoon’s pool party was bound to destroy their carefully crafted balance, but Michael had a strange premonition Jessica would find it harder than he did.

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https: //alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

Each Christmas, I fill my wish list with books to read during the upcoming year. This year, I received a small stash, which I look forward to tackling. Check out my reading list, and then enter the giveaway at the end of this post for a chance to win The Scarred Letter or Faulkner’s Apprentice.

books on the floor

My TBR list

The Girl with Ghost Eyes

It’s the end of the nineteenth century in San Francisco’s Chinatown, and ghost hunters from the Maoshan traditions of Daoism keep malevolent spiritual forces at bay. Li-lin, the daughter of a renowned Daoshi exorcist, is a young widow burdened with yin eyes—the unique ability to see the spirit world. Her spiritual visions and the death of her husband bring shame to Li-lin and her father—and shame is not something this immigrant family can afford.

When a sorcerer cripples her father, terrible plans are set in motion, and only Li-lin can stop them. To aid her are her martial arts and a peachwood sword, her burning paper talismans, and a wisecracking spirit in the form of a human eyeball tucked away in her pocket. Navigating the dangerous alleys and backrooms of a male-dominated Chinatown, Li-lin must confront evil spirits, gangsters, and soulstealers before the sorcerer’s ritual summons an ancient evil that could burn Chinatown to the ground.

With a rich and inventive historical setting, nonstop martial arts action, authentic Chinese magic, and bizarre monsters from Asian folklore, The Girl with Ghost Eyes is also the poignant story of a young immigrant searching to find her place beside the long shadow of a demanding father and the stigma of widowhood. In a Chinatown caught between tradition and modernity, one woman may be the key to holding everything together.

The Girl Who Drank the Moon

Every year, the people of the Protectorate leave a baby as an offering to the witch who lives in the forest. They hope this sacrifice will keep her from terrorizing their town. But the witch in the Forest, Xan, is kind. She shares her home with a wise Swamp Monster and a Perfectly Tiny Dragon. Xan rescues the children and delivers them to welcoming families on the other side of the forest, nourishing the babies with starlight on the journey.

One year, Xan accidentally feeds a baby moonlight instead of starlight, filling the ordinary child with extraordinary magic. Xan decides she must raise this girl, whom she calls Luna, as her own. As Luna’s thirteenth birthday approaches, her magic begins to emerge–with dangerous consequences. Meanwhile, a young man from the Protectorate is determined to free his people by killing the witch. Deadly birds with uncertain intentions flock nearby. A volcano, quiet for centuries, rumbles just beneath the earth’s surface. And the woman with the Tiger’s heart is on the prowl . . .

The Newbery Medal winner from the author of the highly acclaimed novel The Witch’s Boy.

The Dark Crystal: The Ultimate Visual History

A bit about this one: as a kid, I was absolutely obsessed with the movie The Dark Crystal. I think I watched it four times per week during the summer. I woke each morning to check if I had sprouted wings, like the female gelfling Kira. When I learned that a television series is in the works based on the original film, I renewed my interest in my childhood obsession, and I look forward to sharing it with my kids.

Dark Crystal: The Ultimate Visual History is the definitive collection of rare artwork, interviews, and on-set photos from the beloved Jim Henson fantasy classic.

A true masterpiece brought to life by the ingenious puppetry and peerless storytelling of Jim Henson, Dark Crystal is revered by an entire generation of fans. For the first time, this deluxe and highly comprehensive book tells the complete story of this deeply personal Henson project, highlighting the unique creative journey and groundbreaking techniques that brought the film to the screen. Drawing from unseen archive interviews with Jim Henson and new interviews with the film’s behind-the-scenes creative team, Dark Crystal: The Ultimate Visual History leaves no stone unturned in chronicling the entire production, from the initial concept based on themes close to Henson’s heart to the ingenious conceptual design, puppet construction, and logistics of the shoot itself. The book also delves into the wider world of Dark Crystal, exploring the creation of comics, novels, and other official projects inspired by the film.

This deluxe coffee-table book contains an in-depth look at the day-to-day production of the film and showcases a huge range of incredible visuals, including candid set photography, previously unseen concept art, storyboards, production notes, and more. The book also features a plethora of amazing removable items, such as script pages, notes and sketches from Henson, and other unique treasures. Definitive, enthralling, and revelatory, Dark Crystal: The Ultimate Visual History is the last word on an enduring modern classic and the book that fans of the film have been waiting for.

Woods Runner

Hatchet was one of my favorite childhood books because I adored the protagonist’s resourcefulness in a live-or-die situation. I am eager to read one of Paulsen’s other works, in anticipation of sharing it with my kids.

Samuel, 13, spends his days in the forest, hunting for food for his family. He has grown up on the frontier of a British colony, America. Far from any town, or news of the war against the King that American patriots have begun near Boston.

But the war comes to them. British soldiers and Iroquois attack. Samuel’s parents are taken away, prisoners. Samuel follows, hiding, moving silently, determined to find a way to rescue them. Each day he confronts the enemy, and the tragedy and horror of this war. But he also discovers allies, men and women working secretly for the patriot cause. And he learns that he must go deep into enemy territory to find his parents: all the way to the British headquarters, New York City.

We Have Always Lived in the Castle

Taking readers deep into a labyrinth of dark neurosis, We Have Always Lived in the Castle is a deliciously unsettling novel about a perverse, isolated, and possibly murderous family and the struggle that ensues when a cousin arrives at their estate. This edition features a new introduction by Jonathan Lethem.

For more than seventy years, Penguin has been the leading publisher of classic literature in the English-speaking world. With more than 1,700 titles, Penguin Classics represents a global bookshelf of the best works throughout history and across genres and disciplines. Readers trust the series to provide authoritative texts enhanced by introductions and notes by distinguished scholars and contemporary authors, as well as up-to-date translations by award-winning translators.

Wolves Don’t Knock

I’m excited for this novel, as it’s written by fellow Spot Writer Cathy MacKenzie, and the psychological elements are right up my alley.

A psychological drama/thriller, with elements of suspense, mystery, romance, and family relationships. Suitable for mature teens and up.

Twenty-two-year-old Miranda escapes from her abductor and the wolves that have tormented her soul for six long years. She returns to her childhood home where her mother, Sharon, caring for Miranda’s son, Kevin, has feared for her daughter’s fate. Uncertainty and distrust taint the first year after Miranda’s return. Miranda and Sharon hide secrets they dare not reveal while constantly wondering when Miranda’s kidnapper will reappear. Can mother and daughter bury their demons and repair their strained relationship? Can Miranda bond with the baby she never knew and find the love she so desperately wants? Will Kevin’s father play a role? Will Sharon find the answers she needs to recover from her own troubled past?

Although this book deals with sensitive issues, there are no graphic sexual scenes.

The Giveaway:

For this giveaway, we have up for grabs a paperback copy of The Scarred Letter, an e-copy of The Scarred Letter, and a paperback copy of Faulkner’s Apprentice.

The Scarred Letter

Scarred Leter FinalHeather Primm never anticipated that a single blog post could ruin her life.

Heather’s scoop about steroid use by key players on the school football team sets off an investigation that strips the Orchard Valley Thunderbolts of their state title—and earns Heather a coveted journalism prize. Hated by those involved in the scandal, despised by jealous members of the newspaper staff, ignored by her newly-popular ex-boyfriend, and even berated by her mother, Heather is attacked and a chilling “T” is carved into her face.

Now stigmatized as a traitor, she becomes the object of scorn for nearly all of Orchard Valley High. But when the school offers to send her to a private academy to hush up the matter, Heather is forced to make a decision. Should she refuse to allow fear to control her life by holding to the truth, or accept the chance to escape and build a new life?

Written by a veteran English teacher, The Scarred Letter weaves themes from Nathaniel Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter into an accessible, intelligent tale of modern isolation and a young woman’s quest for truth and acceptance.

Faulkner’s Apprentice

This one is no longer available at Amazon, as the publisher is not in existence anymore, but I still have a few copies to sell or give away.

Faulkner's ApprenticeLorelei Cecelia Franklin broke a twenty-year streak of bad luck when she won the L. Cameron Faulkner fiction contest. Apprenticed to the reclusive and famous author, Lorei will spend three weeks with the master of horror himself in the secluded mountains of Virginia. On her way to Faulkner’s mansion, Lorei meets a leathery man who snares souls that desire too much, and everything in the mansion screams warnings against him. But with her lust for Faulkner, her appetite for fame, and her wish to protect her ailing mother, Lorei’s chances for escape are slim.

Enter the giveaway here:

a Rafflecopter giveaway

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Read on at the end of this post for a book giveaway.

When I was a kid, my parents used to take my sister and me to the local nature center. Even in the winter, we’d go on hikes there. In addition to an amazing statue of a mama bear and her cubs, the nature center featured several trails. Each one felt different. There was one with a wooden bridge over a swamp that felt like we were somewhere in Florida. There was one that cut through hilly woods that felt more like part of the Appalachian Trail, and there was one that felt very much like it was Connecticut.

The nature center allowed me to be a kid. A good, old-fashioned dig-in-the-mud and observe-all-the-little-things kid. A kid allowed to use her imagination.

One of my most memorable moments there was finding a bit of mud that had turned into dirt and crystallized ice. I showed it to my dad. I remember it was during Christmas break, or shortly after. I asked him what it was—I’d never seen crystallized ice before, embedded in the ground like a small geode.

My dad—who is largely responsible for my imagination, as he fed rather than quelled my childhood fantasies—told me it was Christmas Ice, formed by the magic of the season. He insisted that it only grew this time of year, that it was proof of the magic of Santa and the elves, and that it could never be replicated at other times of year.

To his credit, I never did find such ice any other time of year. It was always only in December. Of course, as a kid I never thought about the fact that Connecticut was essentially covered in snow from January to May, so I wouldn’t have been able to see the ice even if it did exist. Still, the memory stuck with me—along with a time my parents took me to a Christmas village and I swore swore SWORE I saw Santa and his sleigh with the reindeer fly across the moon in silhouette.

This week, we were graced with unseasonably warm weather. My daughter asked if we could play in her sandbox, which is attached to a clubhouse I built for her. It has become a make-shift winter shed for her summer toys, housing a water table and a “cauldron,” a large planter bucket that she uses to make pretend witches brew.

As she was digging through the sand, we found that her water table had filled with rainwater that had frozen over and was now thawing. It came out in several large chunks of ice that she put in her cauldron to make a special “Christmas potion.”

20181226_141244

Her new language development this week is “I thought I was going to_____, but then________.” Every time I’ve heard her use this expression has been in disappointment (“I thought I was going to push the garage door button, but then you did it first L ), but this time she used it in a positive way.

“I thought I was going to play sand potion,” she said, “but then I got to make ice potion, too.”

As I helped her get out the largest chunk of ice, I flipped it over to reveal something amazing. The bottom of the ice had crystallized. It was Christmas Ice, something that could only form right around Christmas and something that brought about unexpected joy.

The smile and amazement on her face as she examined her first piece of Christmas ice captured the magic of the season.

And proved that the magic of Santa his elves exists.

20181226_141252


 

In celebration of the holidays, I’m giving away a copy of The Scarred Letter (one print + one paperback) and a copy of Faulkner’s Apprentice.

Enter the giveaway here:

a Rafflecopter giveaway

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. In our last prompt for 2018, we had to use the following words in a story: stables, swimming pool, pavement, trees, mailboxes. Today’s prompt comes to us from Val Muller, author of the YA novel The Girl Who Flew Away and The Scarred Letter, a modernization of Hawthorne’s masterpiece.

What Elves Do After Christmas

By Val Muller

Most of the elves were at the festival. They’d be there a week longer—every year, the festival ran from Santa’s return until January 6. It was a time to celebrate, to burn off the adrenaline of the Christmas rush. Hot chocolate spiked with crème de cacao and harder stuff, too; candy cane casserole, gingerbread mansions. The feasting hall boasted a swimming pool filled with marshmallows. And, oh, the reindeer games!

 

For most elves, Christmas was life. It was their only purpose, and Santa’s insistence on waiting until January 7 to begin planning for next year left many elves feeling glum. Which is why, decades ago, the festival was established. It gave the elves purpose while Santa rested and recovered on his yearly stay-cation with Mrs. Claus. For elves, otherwise, two weeks of idle time would be a prison sentence.

 

It was existentialism, really. But only Ronnie knew it. He was the only one who used his vacation days to read. Or think. It wasn’t even New Years, and he’d already gotten through Hamlet, The Life of Pi, The Stranger, and Rosencrantz and Guildenstern Are Dead—for good measure. Together, the works had wracked his brain. He planned to tackle some Kafka next, and read The Myth of Sisyphus before being summoned back to work.  

 

He’d read enough to know the elves had become defined as what they did every day, 353 days a year. They were cogs in the Christmas Machine.

 

The arctic sun rose as high as it was going to, and Ronnie took advantage of the midnight darkness to take a walk. The roads of the North Pole were paved, but the festival meant no one was available to plow, so the pavement remained covered in drifts of snow. Colored light strings showed the way to the Grand Hall, their incandescent bulbs melting some of the snow and causing icicles to form on the wire.

 

Ronnie passed several mounds—the huge mailboxes, now empty and covered in snow, that would fill in the later part of the year with letters from children asking for sleds and snow globes and dolls and technology.

 

As he trekked away from the Christmas village, the trees shrouded the perpetual darkness, their piney arms bending in defeat. Ronnie had seen a television show once—televisions played nonstop in the workshops, blasting Christmas movies and TV specials 24/7. It had been about an elf who wanted to be a dentist. Everyone acted like it was the most absurd desire in the world, to want to shake off the mortal coils of toy-dom.

 

But standing in the twilight snowdrifts and looking back at the colored lighting running up to the Grand Hall, and the gaudy lighting it threw up into the sky, Ronnie could understand that. All year, he had been in charge of placing computer chips. Almost all toys had them nowadays. His name seemed superfluous, even. Ronnie? Why call him Ronnie? He might as well be Chip-Placer. Or maybe give him a serial number. That’s all he was. A cog in a machine.

 

But what was the alternative, he wondered as he looked over the winter wasteland. Where could he go? Who would employ an elf other than Santa? Humans were known to be prejudiced against the pointed-eared little people. Ay, there’s the rub.

 

What lay beyond the North Pole? What fate awaited him if he were to leave?

 

*

The faint echo of a drunken Christmas carol wafted toward the stables as Ronnie opened the door. The stables were maintained by a skeleton crew these few weeks, so the reindeer remained fed as they recovered from their Herculean ordeal. A pile of curly-toed shoes peeked out from the hay, and the snoring of drunken elves suggested the reindeers’ keepers were well-provided for during the festivities.

 

Ronnie selected one of the reindeer overlooked for Santa’s sleigh ride this year. One of the Dashers, a young one, seemed especially restless. Maybe he, too, wanted to leave this place. So Ronnie saddled him up and left the stables. The gaudy lights of the Christmas village disappeared into nothingness as he rose toward the moon and toward his future.

 

He could be anything, now. Anything at all. Even a dentist.

 ***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers.

This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves a snow globe. The snow globe can contain anything and doesn’t necessarily have to do with or take place around Christmas.

This week’s story comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara dreams, reads, edits texts, translates, and occasionally writes in two languages. She also has a lot of fun.

***

Life’s but a moment in time

by Chiara De Giorgi

 

It was a couple of days after Christmas.

I was in Milan, going to meet one of my middle school girlfriends and exchange best wishes and small presents. Our meeting point was in the city center, in a square not far from the Cathedral. I arrived a few minutes earlier than agreed, so I stopped in front of a shop window all lit up in blinking gold and white. I was surrounded by beautiful historical buildings; lifting my eyes I could see Christmas lights cascading from the dark late afternoon sky, hovering over the narrow cobbled streets departing from the square. A sweet smell of hot chocolate, powdered sugar and roasted almonds filled the air. Passers-by walked in every direction, relaxed for once, just strolling lazily, chatting and laughing with one another, showing off their new woolen hats, winter jackets, boots and gloves. A gypsy woman, wearing a richly colored gown, was singing Can’t help falling in love, by Elvis Presley. Her voice was warm and strong, then sweet and husky. Suddenly, it started to snow. The white flakes descended slowly, elegantly twirling from above, leaving silvery dots on people’s heads and coats.

As I stood there, waiting and taking all in, it felt as if I were inside a snow globe, being watched from outside by another me. What could she see from out there? I wanted to be the other me, the bigger me, able to see all of my world, and not only that little picture of gypsy songs, Christmas lights and snowflakes. And yet, that was my whole world right then. It was my life. It was just a moment, it was all.

I looked up, imagining someone else doing the same somewhere else, in their own snow globe, from their own world and life. Somehow, we’d be connected forever. That single moment was bringing us together, nearer than we’d ever be again, maybe.

***

I wish I could meet you all, people with whom I’ve shared these moments. We could look into each other’s eyes, smile and simply ask, Do you remember? We’ve shared a moment, we’ve shared a life.

Sense you next time.

***

The Spot Writers – Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves a snow globe.

Today’s post comes from Phil Yeats. Last week, Phil (using his Alan Kemister pen name) published his most recent novel. Tilting at Windmills, the second in the Barrettsport Mysteries series of soft-boiled police detective stories set in an imaginary Nova Scotia coastal community is available on Amazon.

 

***

A Waif’s Treasure

Phil Yeats

Mary gently shook the youth sleeping on the open ground near the communal fire. “Shh, Daniel,” she whispered, placing her index finger before her lips. “Get dressed and follow me.”

He slipped from under his rough blanket, rolled it, and secured it with a strap. He wrapped his arms around her and hugged her tightly before reaching for his ragged clothes.

She sighed. Those little expressions of affection kept them sane in the cruel world they inhabited.

They’d been together for several years, orphaned children dumped into the unforgiving wilderness where they’d survive by scavenging or die. After six months struggling to avoid starvation, they were rounded up by the Protectors, marauding thugs who enslaved them, branding them as human cattle before setting them to work. Daniel and Mary scavenged the dusty plain and adjacent badlands for anything the Protectors could sell during dry periods. In the infrequent rainy spells, they tended crops of quick growing grasses festooned with blue flowers.

Daniel followed Mary in the half-light that accompanied dawn. An hour later, she pushed aside some sage and squeezed through a narrow opening in the rock. As Dan’s eyes adjusted to the dim light, he realized they’d entered a narrow cavern.

Mary peered into the gloom before turning back toward the entrance. “I’ve returned as promised.”

A girl crawled from a crevice near the opening to the outside world. She stood, eyes darting furtively, ready to bolt at the slightest provocation. She was very young, barely pubescent, and wearing meagre fragments of cloth that made Mary’s tattered clothes appear majestic.

Mary took one step toward her and extended her hands palm up. “I brought my friend Dan. We’ll help you avoid our fate. Together, we can get you to the city and someone who’ll protect you. But you must trust us.”

She crouched and extracted something from her crevice. “It’s too frightening.”

“Please, show Dan your treasure.”

With shaking hands, she held out a clear glass sphere containing a miniature scene. It was attached to a shiny black base. She overturned it, and the sphere filled with white specks that sparkled in the cavern’s dim light.

She smiled as she offered it to Dan. After Dan took it, she reached out and fingered the scars left by the hot branding iron the Protectors applied to his forehead. Mary’s forehead was similarly disfigured, but the girl’s was untouched. Was she trading her treasure for a promise to protect her from branding?

Minimal exploration proved this cave, like others scavengers discovered, contained the possessions of refugees from the global chaos in the 2050s. Decades later, their long-abandoned possessions supported the meagre lives of another generation of outcasts.

Dan and Mary loaded their two-wheeled cart with items they could trade. At the cave entrance, Mary addressed the barefoot girl. “We’ll leave tonight when it’s dark. You know where to meet us?”

The girl nodded without comment. She’d crouched by the entrance fiddling with her treasure while Dan and Mary filled their cart.

“Don’t forget to bring it,” Mary said as she pulled the cart into the heat of the outside world. Dan followed shouldering a large iron bar he would trade with the camp cook for food they’d need on their journey.

The girl peered outside, nodded again. “Thank you.”

 

She appeared as Dan and Mary reached the rendezvous point. Mary passed her a ragged old shirt to cover her semi-nakedness, and they strode eastward on a two-day trek to the walled city.

At dawn on their third day, they gathered outside the city gates waiting for the morning watch. When the gates opened, they registered for outcasts’ passes and queued at the trading center. With their chit for credits earned, they headed for the professor’s house.

The professor, a frontier town legend, was a renowned collector of unusual stuff. He paid handsomely for relics from the lost era.

The professor barely glanced at the girl’s treasure before hustling Dan’s two companions to a bathroom. They’d soak in a warm bath, a luxury unheard of in their normal existence.

When the professor returned, he picked up the girl’s treasure. “Do you recognize it?”

Dan shook his head. “Never seen anything like it, but it mesmerizes our friend. It must have magical powers.”

The professor laughed as he extracted an old text from his bookshelf. He leafed through the pages stopping at an illustration. “Snow globe. A popular ornament in more civilized times. They’ve always fascinated young girls.”

***

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

Last week, I stopped at McDonalds for breakfast on the way to work.

Long story short, a man in a truck decided to cut in front of me in line IN THE DRIVE THRU, going to contortions to pull his truck in front of my car. (If you want the actual detailed explanation for why I think he did this, see footnote at bottom—it’s largely irrelevant to this story).

The “New Yorker” in me (I didn’t grow up in New York, but close enough) immediately rolled down the window. Then my conscious mind took over. What was I going to do? Yell at him? Get out of the car? Pull in front of him and snatch his order just for the heck of it? My mind brooded, and I wished all sorts of bad luck on him.

Flashes of Oedipus Rex crossed my mind—how in an angry rage he unknowingly killed his own father. And how in arrogance he did things far worse. And the famous phrase “turn the other cheek” echoed in there somewhere, too.

It was utterly stupid, both his move and my angry reaction. So I simply rolled the window back up and turned up the Christmas music my daughter was listening to. If this guy’s life was so angry that he needed to cut me off in the drive-thru, so be it.

As I waited in line, I briefly questioned the universe. I took a picture of his truck, making sure I captured the license plate. I wasn’t sure why, but I wanted to have it. I decided, as I pulled away, that instead of wishing bad luck on him, I wished for a positive sign from the universe that being the bigger person was the way to go. I didn’t tell anyone about the incident because I didn’t want to spread the anger I’d felt. I didn’t get the sign I was looking for on the way to work, and I quickly forgot the incident as I went about my day.

The next morning, a Saturday, was the local fire department’s breakfast with Santa. We’d decided to take the two kids there and try to get a cute picture of them with Saint Nick, and we planned to get there as close to the 8 a.m. opening as possible. We’d been there the year before, and the line was quite long.

We arrived around 8:15, slightly missing our goal, and learned that the field where people normally park for the event was too wet. We were directed to park at a local high school and walk or take the shuttle over to the fire department. We would be even later than we thought.

We shrugged, resigning to the fact that we’d be standing in a long line to see Santa, and hoping that the toddler and baby would cooperate.

When we arrived, we were surprised to see that Santa had not yet arrived. The fire department photographer looked nervous. Everyone—probably close to 100 people—stood in a line wrapped around the firehall, waiting for breakfast. Normally, there is one line for breakfast and one for Santa, so neither is terribly long.

But the atmosphere was different this year, without Santa. We heard rumblings from members of the fire company that he was “on the way” and “running late.” Nervous parents made up stories about delays at the North Pole, and eyes speculated, everyone wondering what would happen when he finally arrived. Where would the line form? How would people funnel in? Who would abandon the breakfast line to begin the Santa queue? Would it be a metaphorical bloodbath?

A while later, a flashing ambulance arrived in the parking lot and was immediately surrounded by cell phones and cameras. Santa had arrived. I looked at my husband. At Santa’s arrival, we just happened to be standing at the carpet/couch/tree areas set up for Santa photos. We hadn’t planned it, nor could we have. It was just where the long, long, serpentine breakfast line happened to dump us.

“Could we be so lucky?” I asked.

We didn’t move or push. Santa came in and waved, then sat on the couch. The fire department photographer, there only a few minutes earlier, had disappeared. Parents immediately swarmed Santa, asking if they could start their pictures.

Santa nodded unsurely, and parents started placing children on his lap, snapping pictures with their cell phones.

“The photographer should be here soon,” I mumbled. “But maybe we should just follow suit and get pictures with our phones to avoid a line?” I wondered.

We took a single step to the right, getting ready to visit Santa, when the people next to us frantically asked if they could see Santa first since they were trying to get to their kid’s basketball game. We shrugged. “Sure,” I said.

As they were taking their shot, the fire department photographer materialized, pointing to me. “Alright,” he said. “The line for Santa starts here!”

We were literally first in line. Without moving. Without pushing our way through. I smiled as my kids both managed to sit for pictures without any fuss at all. As we made our way to the breakfast line, I realized I’d gotten the sign from the universe that I’d been looking for.20181201_083144

In line, I told my husband the story of the guy from McDonald’s. I’d forgotten I’d snapped a picture of him, but was reminded of it as I flipped through the impromptu pictures of Santa we’d taken. I smiled as I deleted the picture and all evidence of his brazen maneuver.

I don’t know what he was hoping to accomplish by wedging his truck in front of my car and leaving McDonald’s a full minute faster than I did, but I hope he found what he was looking for. And I hope he has a merry Christmas.

 

 

Footnote—Long story long: The parking lot at McDonald’s is a mess. The drive-thru lane basically backs up into the parking lot, so no one can exit the parking lot if there is any kind of drive-thru line at all. In an attempt to alleviate the problem, the drive-thru was remodeled so that there are two order lanes which then funnel into the same pick-up windows. When I arrived, the entire drive-thru queue was waiting at the first order lane. No one had pulled into the second lane. If I had stayed behind everyone else, I would have been blocking traffic in the parking lot. Not to mention a huge sign which announces “use either lane.” The people waiting in line had made a choice to wait where they were waiting. But the truck at the back of lane 1 got angry and seemed to think I shouldn’t have driven into lane 2, since he had been waiting before I arrived. Why he didn’t just drive to lane 2 from the start is beyond me, but to right that wrong, he pulled right in front of my car. It took way more effort for him to do that than just stay in lane 1. And honestly, he wasn’t out any faster than the car he was previously waiting behind.

 

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves a snow globe.

This week’s story comes from Cathy MacKenzie. Cathy’s novel, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, is available from her locally or on Amazon.

***

The Snow Globe by Cathy MacKenzie

For the fourth time that day, Miranda stood in her bedroom. Her mother hadn’t disturbed the room except to clean and move some of her books into Kevin’s room.

She spied her Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland book and Ramona, the over-sized ratty rabbit she’d had since her third birthday, and cradled the soft toy in her arms, inhaling scents of long ago. Stuffing escaped from the seams where the stitching had loosened. One floppy ear hung lopsided where her mother, eons ago, had reattached it, but the ear would never be the same. No one could put Humpty Dumpty together again either, not to its original form.

The stuffed animal’s forlorn amber eyes stared the way Kevin stared at her, forcing her to look away. She heaved the stuffy to the bed and shrieked when she spied the snow globe on the shelf, a gift from her father on his last Christmas. The name tag had displayed both her parents’ names, but he had proudly exclaimed that he had picked it out, so she had always considered the gift from him alone.

She shook the globe. White flakes lifted from the bottom, revealing the bitty brick walkway leading from the log cabin to the edge of the glass. Mesmerized, she watched while the flakes settled and obscured the path.

Why did a cherished object bring forth such horrible reminders?

She sank to the bed, one hand clutching Ramona to her shoulder, letting the threadbare fleece absorb her tears. Too many scenes bombarded her: Paul, Kevin, her parents. What was real and what wasn’t?

How could one object that once held so many fond memories conjure such horridness? And how could one small object be so perfect in its portrayal: a non-descript cabin in the woods, an ordinary path leading to the cabin’s door. Pristine snow.

The more she stared, the more the past surfaced. Memories she wanted to forget were jammed in a plastic object, small enough she could hold it in her hand. Small enough she could toss it across the room, watch water cascade down the wall, and eye fake snowflakes falling to the carpet instead of to the bottom of the globe. She could even crush the trees and the cabin beneath her feet.

She wanted to scream. Wanted to shout to a God she didn’t believe existed.

She shook her head, bringing herself back to the present, and squinted at the innate object in her hand. The scene should be a tranquil one—and it would be to anyone but her—but it showcased where she’d spent six years of her life. She almost hurled the globe as she had Ramona Rabbit minutes previously, but she returned it to the shelf, sliding it behind a china doll.

No matter the horrid memories, she couldn’t trash one of the few treasures she had left of her father.

She must pull herself together. Had it been purely by accident she’d managed to escape the kidnapper’s clutches? Her foggy mind wouldn’t allow her back there, at least not to that last evening. Perhaps God did exist, after all.

She dried her tears, slipped off the bed, and knelt on the floor. “Thank you, Heavenly Father. Thank you.”

 

The foregoing is a passage (slightly revised) from a scene in the book, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK. Miranda is kidnapped at sixteen, escapes after six years, and returns home. She and her mother must learn to readjust while constantly looking over their shoulders, wondering if and when the kidnapper will return. Twists and turns will keep the reader turning the pages.

Read this book to discover, as Paul Harvey would say, “the rest of the story.”

 

***

 

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves a snow globe. The snow globe can contain anything and doesn’t necessarily have to do with or take place around Christmas.

Today’s prompt comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series. Check it out at www.CorgiCapers.com.

Home

By Val Muller

He’d finally done it. Finally cleared out the whole house. Four dumpsters worth. Seriously. Decades of accumulation from Mom and Dad. Toys they saved, some his and some Maggie’s. Years of school artwork, paintings, grade school worksheets.

Scrabble. Operation. Toy water guns. Flashlights with leaking batteries. Mildewed stuffed animals. The glue that had bound him to Maggie growing up. Things Mom and Dad refused to give up. The toys were too degraded to be worth much, and honestly, the memories were things he’d rather keep buried.

So he’d done a quick Google search and chosen the first company that popped up, a company that brought empty dumpsters and collected them once full. They’d come four times already, and he watched out the window as they left for the last time.

He’d tossed things in remorselessly. Anything that couldn’t be donated had been tossed. He wouldn’t have any metaphorical ghosts on his back, nothing to haunt his home with memories of his sister or parents. Those days were in the past, and they lived on in his memory only. He didn’t need a daily physical reminder of the pain of loss.

Funny, he’d always thought Maggie would be the one stuck with the task. He imagined her old and gray, with children of her own, or possibly even grandchildren, cleaning out the hoarder’s paradise that Mom and Dad built. He’d always thought he’d have gone first, not his sister. But there’d been the car wreck. Maggie never married, never had children, and now the task was his alone.

He returned inside, noticing the creaking groan of the front door. Funny, he hadn’t noticed it the hundreds of times he’d been in and out clearing years of possessions. It had seemed like someone else’s door then. A relic from a past that no longer belonged to him. He’d grown since he’d lived in the house, and he was a new person, all around.

Didn’t they say a body’s cells regenerated every eight years or so? It had been more than thrice that since he’d lived at home. He was a different person, twice removed. No need to dwell in memory.

But there was something about the creaking door.

The living room was empty now, only the faded carpet remaining. But he glanced at the fireplace and was transported back to a Christmas years ago. The darkened room illuminated with the warm glow of Christmas lights against a crackling fire. He and Maggie had been sitting under the tree, guessing at their gifts based on the shape of the packages. They knew, absolutely knew, that Dad had gotten them a train set, and they were secretly plotting where they would set it up. When Mom and Dad finally woke that morning, he and Maggie tried to act surprised when they opened the huge box of train tracks and locomotives. Their feigned surprise was so ridiculous that they simply ended up laughing instead. Simply laughing and smiling, and before they knew it, the room was full of contagious laughter and Christmas morning hugs. That was his quintessential memory, the pure essence of childhood.

He reached to brush something off his face and pulled his hand back when he found a tear. Here was what he held back years ago when his father died, and a year later when Maggie got in the car wreck. She’d never really gotten over Dad’s death, and she’d had a few close calls prior to the crash. He hadn’t cried at her funeral, either, nor when she was conferred a posthumous honorary degree from the university. Relatives commented on how stoic he was, how strong he was being for his mother. But the truth was, he’d simply buried it.

When he learned about Mom, it was more of the same. He’d cleared the house quickly and efficiently, allowing only superficial thoughts to enter his mind. Was it valuable enough to sell? New enough to donate? Old enough to trash? It was only triage and vacuuming and getting the house ready for market by December 26, as the realtor had requested.

But now, standing in the empty room and hearing the creaky door, he mourned. He longed for the possessions he’d thrown out. Not all of them, but some. Just one. If he only had one, he could make it.

He stared into the fireplace, and the memories of crackling fire faded to the darkness of the fading evening. But something glittered there in the fireplace. Hadn’t he cleared out everything? In her later years, Mom had used the fireplace to store Tupperware boxes full of sewing supplies. Maybe he’d missed something.

He reached toward the sparkle and retrieved something cold and heavy. A snow globe. He’d forgotten about it. It had been a staple of Christmastime growing up. They’d placed the globe on the end table near the couch so that it caught the lamplight. The snow was made of white specks and blue glitter, enclosing the globe’s residents in winter magic.

Dad had bought it on a business trip. He remembered because it was a Christmas when money was tight, and Mom questioned the purchase. But Dad couldn’t resist, he’d insisted. The globe not only contained a snowman, Maggie’s favorite, but a boy and a girl who looked almost identical to him and Maggie. The little girl in the globe was pointing at the snowman in awe, and her brother was holding her hand, looking at her. It captured their personalities almost perfectly.

He dropped the globe in his coat pocket and hurried out the front door, locking it behind him, ready for house hunters. His eyes watered in the cold winter evening, but he didn’t mind. The weight in his pocket felt like the tug of nostalgia, the tug of a home that would always be his.

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

 

This week I had the chance to chat with Bobbi Carducci. A few years ago, I read her book Confessions of an Imperfect Caregiver. When I bumped into her the other day, I saw she has a new book out, this one also related to caregiving. She agreed to answer some questions for today’s Writer Wednesday feature.

Her newest book, Caregiver You Are Not Alone, is an anthology of short stories depicting caregivers dealing with dementia behaviors and issues that are often difficult for family members to understand and respond to.

Bobbi picture 6What inspired you to focus on caregiving as a primary topic of your first book?

I was an in-home caregiver for my father-in-law, Rodger, for seven years. He was schizophrenic, having spent thirteen years in mental hospitals as a young adult. He was released in 1960. Eventually he married and raised a family. After he came to live with us, upon my mother-in-law’s passing, he developed dementia, Parkinson’s disease, and severe swallowing problems, and other less traumatic health issues.  He needed full time care.

During that time I began hearing from other caregivers through my blog and other social media. Many said they wished someone would write a book that expressed what it’s really like to care for someone with dementia.  I decided to write our story and to tell it as honestly as I could.  Confessions of an Imperfect Caregiver, has been called brutally honest and anyone who reads it will come to know my family very well. I hope they will come to understand how difficult and stressful being a family caregiver can be and how it can also lead to the sharing of precious moments of clarity and personal growth. I call it creative problem solving on the run and see him as the most important teacher I ever had.

Who would be a target reader for a book about caregiving?

I thought I was writing it for other caregivers who longed to know that others had a hard time doing this. I shared the moments when I was far from my best self as well as the funny, heartwarming moments which were more rare but deeply appreciated.  I now know the book is often shared with family members of caregivers to help them understand what the caregiver in their family may be facing every day. I wrote it to read like a novel but every word is true. Because of that, it is also read by women and men who enjoy reading about real families coping with difficult issues.

Tell us about your newest book. 

The newest book, Caregiver You Are Not Alone, is an anthology of short stories depicting caregivers dealing with dementia behaviors and issues that are often difficult for family members to understand and respond to.  Almost daily on caregiver social media sites and blogs and during caregiver support groups meetings, caregivers ask many of the same questions. Is this normal? Does anyone else deal with this or that behavior and what do you do when it occurs?  Each story in the book depicts a caregiver who needs help in some way. Caregivers depicted are women and men of varying ages. Some are caring for parents, others for a spouse, child, or other family member.  Each story is followed by a response taken from one of my previously written blog posts.

Caregivers are often isolated and have a need to know that others feel as they do. Especially when they think they are failing in some way.  I hope that through my writing I am able to help caregivers understand that none of us are perfect and sometimes being a little bit crazy is exactly what’s called for. Even on the worst days we carry on as best we can.

I understand there were some “challenging” circumstances regarding the writing of your second book… care to share?

caregiver you are not aloneYes, challenging is the right word for how this book came to be.  The acquisitions editor of S&H Publishing had read my blog posts and suggested more than once that I turn some of them into a book. I liked the idea but it kept being put on the back burner as life and other commitments demanded my attention.

Just before I approached the publisher to ask if she was still interested in doing the book I was invited to be a presenter at the National Caregiver Conference in Chicago in October 2018.  It seemed to me that the timing was right for the new book.  The publisher agreed and asked if I could get it done in time to be published and have it available at the conference.  After selecting the posts to work with, we realized that meant writing almost fifty short stories in a month. I agreed to try my best.

It was quite a task. It really challenged my creativity and it resulted in a few major headaches and a panic attack but I got it done in time to be edited and published. I enjoyed the challenge but if I do anything like that again more time to would definitely be appreciated.  The message the stories send to caregivers I feel is most important. We are not alone. We are an army of individuals dealing with one of the most important, fastest growing issues, of our day. We are here for one another.

Since your first book was published, you’ve made a splash in the world of caregiving. What are some of your most memorable experiences?

When caregivers reach out to tell me I have helped them in some small way means everything to me. I developed a workshop titled, Prepare to Care – What Adults Need to Know About Alzheimer’s Before and After It Strikes Home. I designed it for those in their thirties and forties who may not know what is coming their way in the next ten to fifteen years.

Being a keynote speaker at a caregiver conference in Virginia and participating as a presenter at the National Caregiver Conference in Chicago where I also sat on two panels are not only opportunities to teach people about these issues but also to learn from them.

Aside from caregiving, what do you enjoy writing?

I love writing short stories and I’m pleased to have some of them published in anthologies including Chicken Soup for Soul, Short and Happy (or Not), Abundant Grace, and Cup of Comfort. I also write occasionally for newspapers and magazines, primarily about dementia topics.

What advice would you give to caregivers or those who might soon become a caregiver?

Prepare now, before the need is critical. Learn as much as you can about these devastating brain diseases and how they can affect not just the one needing care and the caregiver, but the entire family.  Attend caregiver conferences in your area. If unable to do that, go to the Alzheimer’s website. There is invaluable information to be found there. www.alz.org

Anything you wish I had asked?

No. Thank you for the opportunity to share here.

You can find out more about Bobbi at www.bobbicarducci.com and www.theimperfectcaregiver.com. Twitter: @Bobbicarducci2

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/bobbi.carducci

https://www.facebook.com/theimperfectcaregiver/