Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Original story by Mary Downing Hahn. Adapted by Scott Peterson, Meredith Laxton, and Russ Badgett

A while back, I reviewed the original novel Wait Till Helen Comes, though when I first became aware of the title, it was as a graphic novel at a book fair.  So of course I had to check out the graphic novel version.

You can read my original review for a synopsis. The graphic novel was fairly true to the original. The characters were not quite what I pictured them, but that is usually the case. The scenery was true to the Maryland setting, and I liked that each scene has its own color scheme that works with the vibe of the scene. There is one artistic choice that I wasn’t too fond of. The little girl, Heather, is very annoying in the novel, and the artists did a good job of making her face look really mean and spiteful when she is being mean—and then gentle when she is with her father, who dotes on her too much (as he does in the book). However, in the story, we eventually are given details that reveal to the reader why Heather is acting that way, and it adds a level of sympathy toward her. It was difficult for me to feel any sympathy for her with her face looking so nasty toward the other two kids in the graphic novel.

That said, I enjoyed the novel better—my imagination is much scarier than artwork, usually—but I would recommend the graphic novel version for reluctant or visual readers.

Now that school’s out, I’m catching up on posting reviews of some of the easier reads I’ve read over the school year. I try to preview books that my daughter might be interested in reading.

Having grown up in the age of dinosaur computers that ran The Oregon Trail game, this book appealed to me, also reminding me of the “choose your own adventure” series I used to read as a kid. This book is structured the same way, so it’s a combination of a low chance of success (Oregon Trail game) with the decision-making power of the “choose your own adventure” series.

The plot is simple: a family is leaving for Chimney Rock in 1850, and you have to help them make the right decisions. It was fun to read through all the possibilities, choosing the best and worst options. It’s the first of four books in the series. It does highlight the trials of pioneers moving west during this era—there was so much stacked against them. The level of detail was not overpowering, but sometimes I wished for a few more details. It was short enough at 150 pages that I was able to read through the whole adventure—and all of the possibilities—before bed one night (the font is very large).

It’s a fun book that I will endorse for my daughter. There is nothing inappropriate about it, and it’s an interesting look into the era—perhaps an entry into the time period that might lead to looking more closely at some of the more nuanced issues in history.

I picked up this book in a classroom one day while substituting for another class, and it was a super easy and fast read, but with complex themes that would be good for a reader in the coming-of-age years, someone confronting the drive to be independent of parents and their beliefs and someone examining their sexual awakening. The novel is written in poetry, and it follows a girl names Xiomara Batista. Her body develops early and conspicuously, and as she writes in one of the first poems, the boys who made fun of her now ask her to send pictures of herself.

The poems help to characterize her Harlem neighborhood and her heritage, as well as how her family’s strong beliefs factor into her life. Her Mami wants her to be religious, but Xiomara doesn’t feel that anymore, at least not to the extent that her mother, who doesn’t seem happy with her own life, demands it. Xiomara is busy juggling her family’s expectations with the taunts she hears from her peers. This all potentially changes when she is invited to join her school’s poetry slam club, and she is torn between her Mami’s expectations of her and her drive to dream and express herself in a poetic way. At the same time, she’s experiencing a sexual awakening, dating and daydreaming about a student named Aman, something else that would be forbidden given her mother’s strong religious views—not to mention Xiomara’s twin being gay.

What I really enjoy about the book is that it can be read quickly for plot, but the poetry begs you to slow down and appreciate its figurative language. At the same time, the words are accessible to many levels of readers, and while the ideas in the poems are complex, they are very accessible without insulting the reader or oversimplifying ideas. It’s definitely in the young adult category, and maturity is required for some of the themes, but the language is rarely explicit.

 

 

Last year, this was the Loudoun County 1book1community pick, and I grabbed a copy after we had excess in our school library. I had forgotten about it until now. It’s about a seventh grader, so that gives you an idea about the target age range. To me, it was odd to choose a book for a younger readership when it’s meant for the whole community. It was an easy read, and I finished it in about two sittings. That said, the topic is an important one that everyone should be aware of.

The book centers on a girl named Mila, who is starting to develop, attracting the unwanted attention of a group of boys at school, who, it turns out, are playing a game in which they earn points for hugging or touching her. To make matters worse, he mom seems to be having problems at work, and the family is short on money, so Mila’s options for clothing are limited.

What the book helps to illustrate is how an event like that—boys acting sinister behind the scenes and behind the view of adults—can spiral out of control. For instance, at one point, Mila reacts by kicking, and that is what the teacher saw (not what the boys did that led to her feeling the need to kick), and Mila was the one who was punished, not the boys.

What I enjoyed was that Mila found an activity that provided her strength in numerous ways—martial arts—to help build her confidence and give her the respect she deserved. It’s a fast read, and it’s important for all ages to read. For those in the seventh grade (or nearing seventh grade) age bracket, it’s important for kids to know that this type of behavior is called sexual harassment. For those who are older, it’s important to be reminded of the types of things that kids go through—and to remember that things might be happening behind the scenes.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves worms. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series.

Served

By Val Muller

It was June 2—exactly two days of school left after today. Marsha had been a menace all year. It was time for Lisa to take matters into her own hands. Mom and Dad had were so old school. “Just punch her once, just once,” Dad had said. Even mom had agreed. “You’ll get in trouble once, but she’ll leave you alone forever.”

Maybe in their day, but nowadays, fighting was serious. Students plummeted in teachers’ opinions after a fight. Privileges were lost. Unwritten penalties were assigned. In the great unfairness of life, psychological and emotional torture happened on a daily basis, but physical torture was met with quick reproach.

No, a fight would not solve this problem. At least not that kind of a fight.

But this kind, Lisa’s kind of fight…

Her mother opened the opportunity in the most perfect way during their weekly trip to the grocery store that evening. “Honey, what do you want to pack for your lunch the last two days of the school year? Something special you’d like?”

Lisa nodded. She already had the idea, and this was her opportunity.

“Spaghetti with meatballs,” she said without a pause.

“For lunch? You’d have to eat it cold,” Mom said.

“That’s okay. I like cold spaghetti—with lots of sauce.”

Mom shrugged.

“Can we get the really thick kind, actually? Linguini, maybe?”

Mom shrugged. “Sure, honey. You do know what you want, I guess.”

Lisa packed her lunch early that Sunday, put it in the fridge with extra care. Got on the bus with a spring in her step.

And just as she thought, Marsha was there on the bus, waiting to torment her. “What’re you so happy about, Leeeeeesa?” she taunted.

All year it had been one thing or another. Her hair ties. Her pencil. Her mermaid bottle of hand sanitizer. Her first-place art contest entry. Of all the things Marsha had taken from Lisa that year, it was her confidence and peace of mind that seems the most unfair to lose.

The adults were all useless. Her parents’ advice to blatantly use force was just as bad as the grownups at school, who seemed to want Lisa to be a perpetual snitch.

“The adults can handle it, but they need to know it’s happening in the first place,” the teachers always said. The adults always spoke in such friendly ways, like they didn’t know what secretly happened to snitches on the playground, on buses, and in the halls.

But this plan—it was snitch-proof. In theory, Lisa wasn’t doing anything wrong. And in theory, Marsha would be so embarrassed by what was going to happen, and so guilty because of how it happened in the first place, that she wouldn’t snitch. Or if she did, she would incriminate herself.

Either way, Lisa would achieve her goal—walk into summer knowing that the next year would be free from bullying.

It happened just as Lisa imagined. Entering the bus, Lisa admitted to Marsha the reason for her smile was her lunch. She talked it up, describing the luscious noodles, the sweet and tangy sauce, the delectable meatballs. The tears were real when Marsha took the lunch from Lisa, promising to eat it in the cafeteria while Lisa watched. These were pent-up tears from months of bullying, but they served Lisa now, empowered Marsha. At lunch, when Lisa went hungry, she repressed a smile when Marsha said, “This spaghetti is so good. Tell your mom to pack me more for tomorrow, will ya?”

Lisa spent a long time playing outside that night. Monday, June 5. It was the perfect summer evening. She got so dirty digging in the mud that Mom insisted she needed a bath.

“My goodness,” Mom said. “I don’t remember the last time you got so dirty. What were you doing out there?”

Lisa smiled. “Looking for worms.”

Lisa woke extra early on June 6 for the last day of school. She snuck out back with her spaghetti lunch, bringing it to the bucket of worms she’d caught the night before. She put so much sauce on her pasta that the worms blended right in.

At lunch, Lisa waited until Marsha had eaten all but a few bites.

“How is it?” Lisa asked, surprised at the confident sound of her own voice. Marsha didn’t answer. Lisa’s confidence threw her off balance, so Lisa said, “I added something special.”

Marsha looked down. Lisa smiled. One of the worms squirmed just enough. Marsha knew. Next to her, Brandon knew. And Camden. And Ellie. They all knew. Marsha wretched and threw up all over the table.

“Kids!” the lunch attendant admonished as she ushered them away from the soiled table. “You should have some compassion. It’s unkind to laugh at someone who’s sick, especially on the last day of school, when she’ll have to be sent home before the class party.”

As the rest of the class hurried to cupcakes and prizes, Lisa watched Marsha slump down the hall to wait for her mother to pick her up. Maybe Marsha was the same height, but her stature had shrunk since that morning, and Lisa had a feeling that Marsha wouldn’t be taking down any more kids the following year.

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

I’ve wanted to read this book for a while now. The fictionalized film version of this story is one I’ve enjoyed, so I was glad to finally pick up this book that was written in the 1970s and has achieved bestseller status.

The title refers to the events that happened in West Virginia in the 1960s leading up to the collapse of the bridge on the West Virginia-Ohio border. Leading up to this time, there were documented accounts of strange objects in the sky, with commonalities such as glowing red eyes and witnesses experiencing discomforts like burned skin, eye infections, and loss of perception of time.

The author shares his own experiences with this, as well as evidence he gathered from witnesses. Without spoiling everything: there are recurring phenomena that happen to those trying to document these cases, such as recording devices not working, tapes being erased, etc.

The author shares some speculation about what might be causing these events, and they suggest possible humans or beings from other time periods (there are some strange instances of beings showing up in out-of-date vehicles that appear brand new), wearing strange outfits, and speaking in weird inflections. My disappointment is in the dearth of actual explanation offered in the book, though I suppose that is to be expected.

I did like the analysis of humans – looking at how easily influenceable we are and suggesting ways we can be manipulated through technology, or what types of people are most easy to manipulate, or even the fact that most UFO sightings take places on Wednesdays after a specific time of night.

It’s an interesting book to read to go through some first-hand accounts of unexplained phenomena, and it would be a good companion to other mothman (or similar) books or films. It read quickly, but the accounts did seem to all be similar to each other, and I was waiting for the ending to build up to something insightful, and that didn’t really happen. In short, I’m glad I read the book, but I was hoping for more insights.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is, “Let’s write a story using the following words: boat – flowers – snow.” Today’s story comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers kidlit mystery series.

Currents
Val Muller

The sun ticked past noon above, but it was chilly for May. Mel adjusted her weight, and the boat shifted, creating ripples on the water. She looked to the shore. Waved to her parents. They either didn’t see or didn’t care.

And why should they? By their own reckoning, Mel had wasted thousands of dollars in application fees, tuition, room and board. Probably the only reason they kept the vacation rental was that they made the reservation a year ago, and it was too late to cancel now. But their demeanors were colder than the weather.

Mel hadn’t expected it to be so hard. All the freedom was just too–well, her teachers had been right. College required much more independence than she had been given in high school, where the whole system kept kids on such a short leash that they were allowed no mistakes.

So, her first mistakes happened at college. Flunked half her classes, passed the others miserably. Traded essays for friends and parties. It’s just that life is so full of details she’d been allowed to neglect until now. She’d been trained to be careless, and here was the result.

The boat stilled, and the late spring flowers on shore reflected on the water like a Monet painting. She felt like the Lady of Shallot, floating in her last moments of life. Indeed, she watched her parents’ reflections. Yes, they were likely to kill her, with those grades.

No, not kill her literally. Just as a metaphor. They were sending her to community college, moving her dorm furniture to their basement, making her get a job. Killing her social life, her independence. She could save up and pay to transfer back to school after two years of community college penance.

She would be wandering in purgatory, much like the ghost of Hamlet’s father. Sent to suffer ineffable tortures unfit for mortal ears. Mel’s parents got up, walked back to the rented cabin. It was like they didn’t care if she drifted off to the other side of the lake or not. Maybe they hoped she would.

She picked up the paddles and stroked gently. The boat glided on the water toward the other side. She slowed as she neared the opposite shore. There was a tree, maybe a pear tree, maybe an elderberry or a silverbell. The new leaves were pushing the flowers away, and they fell gently like snow on the water. Mel thought of Ophelia, the flower girl, the one who had everything stripped away from her—father, lover, ambitions and hopes. Mel leaned over and stared at her reflection, her face speckled with petals mottling the surface.

She was no Ophelia. She wouldn’t have the courage to drown away her problems.

She looked up at the houses and shops lining the street just beyond the tree line. Maybe she could dock there and run away. Like that guy in The Things They Carried. Tim. The narrator Tim, not the author, when he was given the chance to run to Canada during the war. Maybe she could just run away.

But Tim didn’t, did he? He stayed on US soil and went to a war he hated, knowing he could be marching to his death. All the characters from her English class danced in her head. They disapproved of her attitude. Her troubles were nothing compared to theirs. Her problem was a petty one. A completely manageable one. She remembered them like good friends. Why she couldn’t translate that knowledge into a good grade for Professor Snell, she’d never guess.

Mel eyed the distant shore, where her parents were emerging again. They were starting a fire. It looked like maybe they had marshmallows and skewers. So, they weren’t going to abandon her. Not yet. Maybe a little purgatory is what she needed to purge away the last of her irresponsible childhood. Maybe this was the key to opening the door to the rest of her life.

Her parents didn’t even like sweets. It was clear the marshmallows were for her. An apology? No. Maybe a peace offering. A step in the right direction. Two years wouldn’t be so bad. Retake some of the classes, knock out basic requirements and figure out a real major. She turned the boat around and like Pi crossing the Pacific or the crew of the Kon-Tiki pushing for discovery; she cut through the waters, pedals spreading in her wake as she rowed into her future.

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This months prompt is “expectations for spring.”

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series.

April Fool
Val Muller

Milton Miniver planned eveything, from what he would eat each week to when he would take off the storm windows and replace the screens. He loved cable TV despite all the modern alternatives because it kept to a schedule, just like him.

April 1 was screen day. It worried him a little that this year, the switch from winter to spring behaviors coincided with April Fools Day, possibly his least favorite holiday, but it couldn’t be helped. Rules were rules, and his rule was that the first Saturday in April was the switch.

It couldn’t be worse than last year, he reminded himself. Last year, the first Saturday in April brought an unexpected 8 inches of snow, and his fingers turned bright red trying to change out the storm window panels for screens.

This year would be unseasonably warm. In fact, for two weeks now the weather spoke more of late spring than the end of winter. But that was okay. He never changed to screen windows before April.

The night of March 31, he took out his box of spring clothing–the light pants, lightweight shirts, and thin rain jackets. He packed away winter sweaters and corduroy pants and wool socks and tucked the box nearly next to “summer” in his closet.

He woke to moonlight shining right in his eyes, so brightly he thought he’d overslept. So he hurried to the bathroom. By the time he realized it was only 4:30, that it was moonshine and not sunshine that woke him, he was so full of adrenaline that there was no going back.

He had never changed out the screens before sunrise, but it had to be done. It was a before-breakfast task. By the time the windows were switched and he had eaten breakfast, the sun had barely risen. He dressed and did some light weeding around his home. The warm weather had brought out all the flowers and more weeds than usual.

By the time he was finished, he worked up quite a sweat; his spring clothes were a bit too warm. It was nearing summer temperatures, pushing beyond 80 degrees. But all his shorts were still neatly tucked away in his closet. They were not to be unpacked until the first of June.

He was about to go inside when screams from down the street caught his attention. A small dog came charging across his yard, followed slowly by a screaming woman.

“Milton! Milton!” she shouted.

Milton startled. He didn’t recognize the woman or her dog, yet clearly she knew him.

“Milton, stop!” she was saying

Milton had bent down to try to catch the runaway pup, but clearly she didn’t want him to.

He stood again.

“Please, stop him!” she shouted.

Confused, Milton crouched again. The dog leapt into his arms.

“Milton, stay, you naughty boy!” she screamed.

Milton’s face turned red at her words, then even redder when he realized his confusion. The dog’s name was also Milton.

He explained the mistake to her as he tried to cover his embarrassment with laughter. But the woman–Summer was her name–was too relieved to notice. She was busy alternatively hugging him and the pup.

“We were on our way to the park for a hike on such a nice day,” she explained once she and the dog settled down. “Milton got a little too excited and slipped his collar.” Then she looked the human Milton in the eye. “Why don’t you come with us? Go for a little hike and then I’ll buy you lunch as a thank you.”

This was most unorthodox. Dates had to be planned in advance between people who clearly knew each other. And who heard of a first date on April Fools Day?

Milton opened his mouth to refuse, but the words that emerged surprised him. “I’d love to. I only just need to change into some shorts.”

He could barely believe it as he climbed the steps to his bedroom and pulled open the summer box. His heart skipped as quickly as he did as he re-emerged in shorts and a polo–a June outfit–for his hike.

April Fools, he told himself as he locked the door behind him and stepped forward into the smile of Summer, the barking of the dog, and the whisper of the unknown.

The Spot Writers:
Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

I received this book years ago as part of a promotion—it came with the purchase of another book which I cannot now remember. It’s a novella by Stephen King that also includes another short story called “Mortality.”

The novella is told through a frame structure of an old-timer in a nursing home. He goes by the nickname “Granny” and was once a coach for a now-defunct New Jersey baseball team. The old timer is telling “Mr. King” the story of Blockade Billy, a player who was recruited in a pinch when the team ran out of catchers, but whose presence was later erased from MLB history because of a scandal which I will not reveal, or it will spoil the only purpose of the tale.

I tried several times to read this novel previously. The voice of the old timer is interesting, and I could see the voice making a good narration to use as a voice-over during a film in which we see clips of Blockade Billy and company. But as a written word, I lost interest several times, even as the old man admitted he was rambling and hadn’t spoken this much in years (and was enjoying the chance to talk). There was a lot of baseball talk, and I don’t mind sports talk, but because there was little context, I was not drawn in right away.

The book is slim—the novella is 80 pages of generous spacing and wide margins. It took until about page 40 (halfway through) to hook me—when I saw there was something strange about Blockade Billy. I was trying to imagine what I would have thought if it had been an unknown author and not Stephen King. Part of me felt it wasn’t a weird enough tale—I was expecting even more twists from King. I did enjoy the old man’s voice, but it seemed to draw the novella out when it should have been a short story instead.

The short story that was included after, “Morality,” was more in line with what I expected from Stephen King. It’s the story of a couple on the brink of poverty. The wife is given an indecent proposal (but not like the movie) in exchange for much-needed money, and we get to watch the decision and its implications in the marriage. The darkness of this tale was much more King in my mind.

It wasn’t a bad tale, and I brought it to my kids’ martial arts class so that I would be a captive reader and not succumb to other distractions. That said, I have a huge stack of “to be read” books, and this one is likely not worthy of some of the others.

Welcome to the Spot Writers! This month’s prompt is to an unexpected phone call. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers kid lit mystery series.

 

Light

By Val Muller

 

Her alarm went off again. Jenn reached her hand out from the warm covers. The cool air of the house was like a thousand pins against her skin as she hit the last of her allotted snoozes. The darkness of the room could have meant midnight or five in the morning, it could have meant early evening. Hell, it could have meant high noon in these doldrums.

 

Winter was like death. Like every day, fighting a slow death. How did no one else feel it? The cold, the darkness, the struggle just to do anything…She’d tried hot showers, she’d tried altering bedtime, she’d tried spending as much time outdoors as the measly light would allow. She had even tried those special bulbs that were supposed to mimic sunlight.

 

Laughable.

 

Halloween was always fun. Christmas was terrible, but at least the stress of pulling it off kept her busy, running around like a chicken with its head cut off.

 

I bet chickens hate winter, too.

 

After the holidays, there was a horrific lull that lasted until at least March, when the ground woke up. March snows were powerless, even the big ones. They might last a day or two, but the sun was mostly back by then. It was strong enough to counter the cold. Then April would follow, and as soon as the leaves were back…

 

There was a word for what she missed. Psithurism. The sound of leaves rustling in the breeze. Someone had loved that sound enough to make a word for it. Psithurism. That’s what she missed. Sometimes she would Google the word and listen to videos that people had made during the warm months, simply pointing their cameras up at the trees. The sound of the wind through the live green leaves brought her goosebumps, and for a few dream-like moments, she pretended it was summer.

 

But then she remembered she was under the covers, hiding from the dark, from the cold. There were no leaves on the trees. The only sound the wind offered was the clickety-clack of dry bones knocking against each other, against houses. The clack of death.

 

She shivered as her phone sounded again. But this was no alarm. This was the ringer. Who in the world would be calling this early?

 

She chuckled softly. Maybe it was a surprise snowstorm, and work was cancelled for the day. The only thing winter was good for.

 

One can hope…

 

It wasn’t work, but it was her coworker. Shane. An acquaintance more than a friend. They all programmed each other’s numbers into their phones in case they had to call out and seek replacements. But why would Shane be calling her now? If he had to call out, he surely would have seen her name was already on the schedule.

 

“Hello? Shane?”

 

“Jenn, are you outside?”

 

“Outside? Now? No, I…”

 

“Go now! Go.”

 

“Outside?”

 

“I’m out here walking my dog, and you have to see this.”

 

Jenn hopped out of bed, the adrenaline spike an armor against the cold.

“What are you—”

 

“You have to go now,” he said. “I remember what we talked about, with winter. I thought of you.”

 

“Shane, what?”

 

“Just go!”

 

The call ended.

 

Jenn grabbed a pair of sweatpants that were pooled on the floor and pulled them over her pajamas. Then a bathrobe. Downstairs, she pulled on boots and her coat. She hurried out the door, pulling on gloves and hat as she went. Out the front, the darkness still lingered, but the lighting was different. Rosy.

 

She hurried to the back of the apartment complex, where a splattering of clouds was painted pink and orange by a rising sun that had not yet met the horizon. Her amazed breath left in ghostly puffs, but the cold didn’t bother her. The wave of adrenaline took her as she jogged up the hill at the edge of the property.

 

The sun was peeking over the horizon now, just a little slice of an orange sitting on the hill. Incredibly, it rose by the second. It rose and rose and rose. It was telling her something. This planet was moving, increment by increment, it was bringing her closer to spring, to summer.

 

To psithurism.

 

The sun was impossibly orange. No, orange did not do justice to this glowing orb. Gold? Not even gold… it transcended color. She tried not to look at it too much. Couldn’t she blind herself?

 

To be safe, she took out her phone, swiped into camera mode, and watched the run rise through the screen, clicking pictures as it went. The splattering of clouds ignited from pale pink and orange to fiery orange, yellow, gold, red. Colors impossible to describe. Melted gold poured in the heavens.

 

This was not the white winter sun she had come to despise.

 

The sun danced through the clouds, a sole ballerina doing an arabesque against the sky, the clouds accentuating her reach. Now a quiet moment, a lull of color, but the sun wasn’t finished. She was just preparing. She reached her arms out again, but a thick cloud blocked her majesty for a moment. Jenn snuck a peek with her eyes, and just then, the sun rose an inch more, leaping over the offending cloud. In an impossible grand jeté, she leapt into the world as if she had no idea it was winter.

 

This was no pale sun, no sun that would tolerate snow. This was a summer sun allowing herself to perform on this cold January day. She was performing, and perhaps Jenn was her intended audience. Jenn snapped a few more pictures, but then she simply stood in awe. She watched the sun filter through the winter branches, but she concentrated even harder.

 

Her mind took her back to summertime, and the dead branches filled with greenery. The winter silence filled with the whisper of living leaves speaking to each other in a warm breeze. She inhaled, and the air felt impossibly warm. A bird chirped, and Jenn startled. This was not in her mind. Not three feet away, a bright red cardinal and his lady had landed in a branch, eating some of the berries left over from the fall. They sang to each other, or maybe they sang gratitude to the dancing sun as she reminded them that life thrived even in the winter’s gloom.

 

She snapped one last picture.

 

She couldn’t wait to show Shane.

 

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/