Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to The Spot Writers. The prompt for this cycle is to write a story that involves waiting for something. Today’s tale comes to us from Cathy MacKenzie.

Along with several short story collections, books of poetry, and two novels, Cathy has published three anthologies under her imprint, MacKenzie Publishing. The latest one is titled NO ONE SHOULD KISS A FROG, available on Amazon and other retailers—300 pages of fiction, non-fiction, and poetry by 75 authors around the world.  She also has a call out for submissions for another anthology to be published in 2024, to be titled SUCH A LOSS. Contact SuchALossAnthology@gmail.com for submission guidelines.

Cathy continues with Melvin, a character she can’t seem to get rid of…

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Wayward Lee

By Cathy MacKenzie

Melvin woke with a start. The bedroom was awash in blackness. He rubbed his eyes, rolled over, and glanced at the illuminated clock. Five a.m.? What the hell! Within seconds, the howling wind assaulted him.

Lee wasn’t due to hit southern Nova Scotia until mid-afternoon. What was it doing here this early?

And then—

He jumped out of bed.

“Marie! Marie!”

His wife groaned and pulled the covers over her head.

“Marie! The kayaks!”

“Wh—what you talking ’bout?”

“We forgot to bring them in yesterday. They’re in the middle of the storm. Oh, Marie, we gotta go down and get them.”

Marie sat up and glanced at the clock. “Mel, it’s five in the morning. I’m not going anywhere.” She cocked her head. Her eyes widened. “Is that wind? What’s it doing here so early?”

“That’s just it. Lee is early. I gotta get my kayak.”

She yawned. “That’s on you. I’m going back to sleep.” She fell to the pillow and covered her face again.

Melvin knew his wife was scared. She’d never sleep, not with this wrathful wind raging, but he’d never sleep either, not with his Blue Origin in danger.

“Well, I’m going. You sleep all you want.”

She popped up again. “Mel, at least wait until it’s light outside. You can’t see a thing. Another couple of hours isn’t going to matter.”

“It might, Marie. It might.”

“Come back to bed. Cuddle with me a bit.”

That was an invitation he couldn’t resist.

*

Melvin woke when light skirted across his eyelids, forcing him to open his eyes. He wriggled out of Marie’s embrace. “Marie, it’s morning. Gotta go.”

She rolled over. Sighed. “Okay, I’ll go with you. But be quiet. We don’t want to disturb William.”

They hurriedly donned clothes. Rain boots. Rain jackets.

Once they were outdoors, the wind wasn’t as bad as it had sounded. They tramped down the path to the lake.

When they reached the shore, Melvin abruptly stopped. “Marie!”

“Oh, no, Mel.”

The kayak, right side up, lay several yards from the dock, the front end gouged into the sand, half in and half out of the water.

Melvin raced to his beloved Blue Origin. He was dismayed to see the hatch door open and full of sand. Seaweed lay on the kayak’s hull. When he peered under the deck, toward the bow, he discovered seaweed wedged in between the pedals.

He sighed. “It’s a mess, Marie, but at least it’s okay. It’s in one piece. Nothing broken. No cracks. Do you see any cracks?”

“Whew! Mel, that scared me for a moment. And I don’t even like kayaks! No, no cracks that I can see. Here’s the oar.”

“It’s a paddle, Marie.”

“Whatever.”

They each grasped a carry handle, Melvin at the bow and Marie at the stern, and hauled the kayak to the boathouse.

*

“Melvin, what’s that? Melvin! MELVIN!”

“What now, Marie?” Melvin jumped out of bed.

“Trees hitting the windows. Is Lee here now?

*

In the end, Hurricane Lee was a non-event in the Porters Lake area of Nova Scotia. High winds. Rain. No power outages—at least not where Melvin and his family resided. So unlike Fiona the previous year when Mel lost over a hundred trees and power was out for ten days. We won’t even mention Juan or White Juan. Or compare.

Nope…

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Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story involving waiting. 

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit series Corgi Capers.

Lurking

By Val Muller

The autumn chill bit the air. Leaving the window cracked open seemed like such a good idea earlier, when it was warm and sunny. Now, Christy shivered against the cold. Her heavy fleece blanket was barely enough to keep her warm, and she drew the covers up over her shoulders like Garfield in those old cartoons. 

She glanced toward the other side of the bed. Normally, she’d curl up against John for warmth, but of course it was the night of his board meeting. It only happened once a month, but of course it was on the day she forgot to close the window. John never got cold, and he would gladly get out of bed to close it for her.

If he were here.

How long would the meeting go? Once, it went past midnight. How bad would it be if she texted him? “Can you hurry up the meeting so you can come home and close the window?” Hmmm, would he think that was cute, or would it annoy him? 

Christy turned over under her warm cocoon to get comfy as she pondered. It might annoy him, especially if the Board started arguing over funding again. How petty she was to consider texting him about such a thing. It was just a stupid window. She should either fall asleep in the cocoon or close the window herself. 

She peered out from the blankets, and her heart jolted. She was facing the closet door, and it was hanging open. Her nightstand lamp was reflecting off something, creating a grumpy-looking semblance of a face from deep among the clothes. She felt like a child as she pulled the cover back over her head.

Why the hell was the closet door open? She never left it open like that. Probably John had been searching for the perfect outfit for the meeting, and he left in a rush. Christy fought uninvited thoughts and memories. As early as kindergarten, she learned that you never, ever go to bed with the closet door open. It’s an invitation to monsters, after all. It fell into the same category of never letting your foot hang down over the edge of the bed, or sprinking salt over your shoulder if you spilled any. 

Irrational as it was, now she would never be able to fall asleep. Her kindergarten self would be screaming for Mom by now, insisting the offending Portal to Nightmares be closed. But Christy was alone in the house, and she had to either make her way through Cold and Nightmares to remedy the situation, or else wait for John.

As she waited, she rehearsed how she would say it. Of course it would have to be casual. She would have to downplay its significance lest he tease her or, worse, pick up on her fear. Of course the grownup in her knew there were no monsters in the closet. She could explain the logic of that using words. But how to explain the visceral nature of this fear, the primordial dread of darkened passageways opened to the vulnerability of sleepers?

She shuddered to think that the open closet door was going against every bit of biological wiring within her. She ducked back in her cocoon and pulled the blanket tight over her head. This was going to be a late meeting. How long could she wait? 

From her warm bubble, thoughts intruded like marching insects, each bringing a minuatae of dread. Shadowy claws scratched at her consciousness, and the unbearable silence of the room tortured her ears. Where was John? The minutes passed like years in a life sentence, and now, every sound of the house settling brought new paranoid fears of home invaders and wild animals and the supernatural. John’s meeting would never end.

*

John seemed surprised when he got home. Not only was Christy still up watching TV, but she had dragged her heavy fleece blanket all the way to the couch downstairs. She must have felt like a kid again, left home alone to do all manner of crazy things, and here all she chose was to watch a little extra TV. 

He was still shaking his head about it as he led his sleepy wife up to bed and closed the window and closet door as she arranged her blanket back on the bed amd settled to sleep.

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/ 

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

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Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story involving a penguin. Today’s story comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit series Corgi Capers. 

Note: getting ready for my own baby penguin, I forgot to post this story on August 30. The penguin has since safely arrived and sleeps just about as well as the baby in this tale.

Postpartum

By Val Muller

“The female emperor penguin,” Winnie said, looking up from her phone, “breeds during the coldest of winter. She lays an egg and then leaves it with the male while she goes off to feed. It’s the male’s job to keep the egg safe and warm.” She glanced at her husband. “For several months.” As if to punctuate the statement, the baby made a slurping sound. Winnie would have to burp her soon so she didn’t spit up. There was nothing worse than the warm smell of baby spit-up. 

As for Winnie’s report on emperor penguins, it was met with only the soft snoring of Winnie’s husband, who in his sleep had managed to pull the pillowcase over his eyes to shade them from the lamp Winnie turned on while feeding the baby. 

“You know, for months I waddled like a penguin,” she told her sleeping spouse. He continued to snore away, sleeping more soundly than a baby. Babies didn’t sleep all that soundly, she realized. How he could sleep through the crying baby, or Winnie’s clumsy fumbling for the light, or the shifting around as Winnie situated the baby…well, guys were just biologically wired for a good night’s sleep, she guessed. Biologically wired for a good night’s sleep. 

She continued scrolling through her phone as the baby quenched its insatiable appetite. She clicked the next search result. 

“Sea horses,” Winnie announced. “These are interesting. A seahorse—” she turned the phone to show a picture of a pair of seahorses to her sleeping husband— “A female seahorse will lay dozens or hundreds of eggs in the male’s abdomen.” She couldn’t help but laugh at the thought of implanting the eight-pound bowling ball she’d been carrying for nine months directly into her husband’s stomach. It was like a reverse of that scene from the alien film. Her hubby stretched on the table, her forcing the embryo right into his gut. Ha! See how you like it! 

Guys would die if they had to give birth, she thought. Her laughter echoed in the dark, but it did not disturb the baby. Then her chuckles subsided and she continued reading. “The males carry them until they are born into the sea.” Her sleep-deprived brain offered more imagery of her husband spontaneously spawning a baby into a hospital-ocean, and she laughed again. She imagined her husband’s shocked expression as the baby just ejected from him. In her mind, his legs turned into the twisted spiral of a seahorse, and he floated down the hallway, past the nurse’s station, asking for postpartum supplies. 

The baby did not appreciate the disruption and protested. 

Winnie shifted the baby and continued scrolling, her fascination with reproductive habits of Earth’s creatures fueled by middle-of-the-night cortisol and the weird mix of postpartum hormones traveling through her veins.

“Now the octopus,” she declared to the darkened room. “This is an interesting one. The female octopus lays her eggs, stops eating while she cares for them. And get this: she never eats again. Once they are ready to hatch, she dies.” She looked at her sleeping husband. “I guess that’s one way to escape getting up for all these feedings. Just give up all at once. A good, long sleep…” 

She laughed a bit, but then she stopped. The Google rabbit hole she had fallen into was getting dark, and she knew these were just her sleep-deprived night thoughts. The baby drifted to sleep, and she swaddled it back up into the bassinet. She turned off the lamp and sat in the darkness, only the glow of her phone illuminating the darkness. She chuckled again, almost a whisper, contemplating whether women ever murdered their husbands for resting too peacefully. Surely, in the history of humanity… 

How would they do it? She looked around the room. Probably smother them with a pillow. The idea made her chuckle, and she tried to stifle her laughter, telling herself it was just the inappropriate musings of a sleep-deprived mom trying to rid herself of excess hormones. 

The chuckle must have been much more disturbing than a baby’s cry. Her husband sat up in the darkness. 

“Why are you awake?” he asked groggily. 

Winnie laughed. Why was she awake? An emperor penguin keeps the egg safe for month, a seahorse carries the babies until delivery, and a human male sleeps through all manner of things. Why, indeed? 

“Because,” she said. “The emperor penguin gets to go out to sea to feed, and it’s been a while since I treated myself to something. I’m going out to get a breakfast sandwich.” 

Her husband looked out the window. “It’s dark out. What time is it?” 

“Almost five. Places will be open for breakfast. I’m going out to sea. You keep the egg safe, Mr. Penguin. It’s my turn to swim, and you get to waddle now. Watch that baby.”

She pulled on her shoes and headed out the door, taking only a moment to glance back at how perplexed her husband looked, sort of like the blank stare of a male seahorse as he prepared to spawn his children into the sea. Or like an emperor penguin preparing to face the coldest two months of winter with the egg securely between its ridiculously comical legs.  

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

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Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

While my son was in the library, I decided to pick up a graphic novel from the middle grade/young adult section to read over while he ignored storytime and played with all the hands-on activities in the children’s section. This story caught my eye because of its multicultural elements: it follows a Muslim student who is fasting during the days of Ramadan, and she is being bullied for it by her classmates. At her school, which I presume is American based on the descriptions on the cover and marketing materials, there is only one other Muslim there, and she seems to expect Nayra to be best friends, which seems exhausting for Nayra. I have several Muslim students, and I was hoping for this book to be sort of a Life of Pi experience, highlighting the beauty of Nayra’s religion, even in the context of a hostile American culture. For instance, we had an end-of-quarter celebration that involved food, and because of the timing of the school calendar, the celebration took place during Ramadan. I asked my student if she would rather spend the class in the library rather than have to watch her classmates eat, and as I made that offer, I wondered how it truly felt to be a Muslim student fasting in a largely American school.

I was hoping the book would bring me into a rich perspective on that.

I was further intrigued by the premise that the character is visited by a djinn, a mythical character, who helps Nayra with the coming-of-age story. I do enjoy magical realism and elements of fantasy. I liked the color schemes of the pages, and the artwork looked simple enough to let the story work on its own.

In all honesty, though, I was disappointed. I realize the book is for middle-grade readers, but it was too simple. There was not enough richness of culture, and there was a lot of flat characters and telling instead of showing. I was hoping for more perspective from Nayra on what fasting means to her, but it seemed like she was just going through the motions of it—along with everything else in her life. Maybe I am “cursed” by having read and loved Life of Pi, but in a single passage, Martel is able to express the beauty that the main character (Pi) finds in everything, but specifically in all aspects of religion. In Nayra and the Djinn, I never felt connected with any of the characters.

Nayra doesn’t like her friend, the only other Muslim in the school, and I get that her friend is being a little pushy, always wanting to hang out, but I wonder what Nayra wants instead. Then there are the Americans. They are all so cruel to Nayra, but the taunting gets old. Yes, I teach, and yes, I have seen cruelties, but these characters read as flat and unmotivated. The characters seem angry at Nayra because her fasting seems to be impacting her ability to play volleyball, and at first I thought maybe the American characters had a point—maybe it was a way to introduce the complexity of the issues of fasting in a society that doesn’t fast. I was hoping for an in-depth discussion or examination of that issue: should a varsity volleyball player fast and risk harming the team? Should the team respect a player’s decision to fast? But then I saw that it was just gym class. It wasn’t even a real competitive team. This made the Americans seem too petty. I’m guessing it’s a private school, but it seems the girls who were mean to Nayra wouldn’t care too much about how good or bad they look in gym class based on someone fasting being on their team. And in my experience at school, teachers are made aware of when fasting is taking place, and we are asked to keep an eye out for students who might be physically struggling, such as in gym class, during that time. The teachers in this book were also unsympathetic and unaware of the bullying, and I found it hard to believe that there were not any more sympathetic characters until the very end.

I never felt I was deep enough in Nayra’s perspective, whether in the words or the images on the pages. I felt the book would benefit from being two steps deeper, and even if for middle grade, I wasn’t sure the simplicity of the story would mean anything to a reader. There are a lot of questions unanswered. Even Nayra’s family seems a stereotype. How do they feel? Where actually do they live? Why do they live in a community that doesn’t accept them? How did Nayra’s siblings do well in school, and why is she so different?

The djinn side story was interesting, but I was looking for even more parallels and connections between Nayra and the djinn. Overall, I did finish the book, but it is not one that will stay with me, despite my wanting to love it.

The reason I picked this book up is because I saw an interview with Ben Montgomery about how to encourage high school journalists to improve their interview skills, so I was curious to read a book-length piece by him regarding a woman he researched after her death.

The book follows Emma “Grandma” Gatewood, a woman who in her late 60s decided to hike the Appalachian Trail during the 1950s, when the trail was far less famous than it is now. After suffering years of abuse at the hands of her husband, raising 11 children of her own, Gatewood decided to make a handmade rucksack and hike the trail with a walking stick, tennis shoes, and a blanket.

The book follows her story as she takes the trail south to north, often relying on the kindness of strangers to take her in and feed her. Without a tent, if she can’t find a place to stay, she often sleeps on tables or porches or moss. I enjoyed how Montgomery interwove stories of Gatewood’s past, such as her relationship with her abusive husband, as well as details about the time periods, such as the tendency of the country to drive rather than walk (with the increase of cars and highways) as context for her motivation to walk. He relies on interviews with Gatewood’s children as well as quotes that Gatewood herself gave to journalists as she gained fame.

Not only did she hike the trail once, but she went back two more times, despite age and bad knees and a lack of fancy hiking gear. It was an inspiring story and a quick read. In fact, I read it in two days, and on the second day, I had planned to go for a walk with my son. It was rainy and cold for June, and at first I thought about putting off the walk, but when I remembered all the challenging conditions Gatewood faced, I figured I could do a mile walk through the rain, even 7 months pregnant. Montgomery traces those who were inspired by Gatewood, showing how her story helped raise awareness for the trail and begin the process of making the trail more manageable to hike (with more regular maintenance and labeling).

Even if you have no interest in hiking, it’s a great story about a woman with true grit, and just thinking about her and her life will really put other challenges into perspective.

When I was in college, I heard an author speak. I did little research about her before I went to hear her read a passage from her book, When the Emperor was Divine, but I do remember a poignant passage she read about a woman, a shovel, and a dog. I won’t say more, but if you read it (or heard her read it), you will know.

The whole novel is a fast read, a poignant account from various perspectives, of a family displaced from their home during the 1942 Japanese internment relocations. What I like about the novel is the way it allows the emotions of the characters to come through using simple actions and details. We don’t need an angry tirade against the United States to see how wrong it was for the family to be relocated, their house abused in their absence, and the best years of their lives stolen from them. These details come out in an understated way that stays with the reader—in my case, even years later (I hadn’t read the whole novel in college, but I remembered it as soon as I read the first chapter again, decades after I heard the author read the same passage).

This is an important novel for everyone to read, as I believe this is a time period in American history that is glossed over. It’s a fast read at only 144 pages, and an important one. I like that the book shows how and why Americans would become complacent with the relocation of Japanese American citizens—while at the same time pointing out the irony and blatant wrongness of the fact that these are American citizens who happen to be of Japanese ancestry. They were guilty without being allowed to be proven innocent. It’s easy to judge atrocities like how the Nazis were able to come to power—how could a people allow that?—but then equally easy to overlook how easy it is for such fear of generalized groups can lead to inhumane actions. Perhaps it’s fitting to pre-post this to go live on the eve of Independence Day, a reminder that we always must strive to be fair to others and not give in to fear. It’s a fine balance to achieve, for sure, but books like this help us to see multiple perspectives and gain wisdom even if we were not alive to witness these events first-hand.

Original story by Mary Downing Hahn. Adapted by Scott Peterson, Meredith Laxton, and Russ Badgett

A while back, I reviewed the original novel Wait Till Helen Comes, though when I first became aware of the title, it was as a graphic novel at a book fair.  So of course I had to check out the graphic novel version.

You can read my original review for a synopsis. The graphic novel was fairly true to the original. The characters were not quite what I pictured them, but that is usually the case. The scenery was true to the Maryland setting, and I liked that each scene has its own color scheme that works with the vibe of the scene. There is one artistic choice that I wasn’t too fond of. The little girl, Heather, is very annoying in the novel, and the artists did a good job of making her face look really mean and spiteful when she is being mean—and then gentle when she is with her father, who dotes on her too much (as he does in the book). However, in the story, we eventually are given details that reveal to the reader why Heather is acting that way, and it adds a level of sympathy toward her. It was difficult for me to feel any sympathy for her with her face looking so nasty toward the other two kids in the graphic novel.

That said, I enjoyed the novel better—my imagination is much scarier than artwork, usually—but I would recommend the graphic novel version for reluctant or visual readers.

Now that school’s out, I’m catching up on posting reviews of some of the easier reads I’ve read over the school year. I try to preview books that my daughter might be interested in reading.

Having grown up in the age of dinosaur computers that ran The Oregon Trail game, this book appealed to me, also reminding me of the “choose your own adventure” series I used to read as a kid. This book is structured the same way, so it’s a combination of a low chance of success (Oregon Trail game) with the decision-making power of the “choose your own adventure” series.

The plot is simple: a family is leaving for Chimney Rock in 1850, and you have to help them make the right decisions. It was fun to read through all the possibilities, choosing the best and worst options. It’s the first of four books in the series. It does highlight the trials of pioneers moving west during this era—there was so much stacked against them. The level of detail was not overpowering, but sometimes I wished for a few more details. It was short enough at 150 pages that I was able to read through the whole adventure—and all of the possibilities—before bed one night (the font is very large).

It’s a fun book that I will endorse for my daughter. There is nothing inappropriate about it, and it’s an interesting look into the era—perhaps an entry into the time period that might lead to looking more closely at some of the more nuanced issues in history.

I picked up this book in a classroom one day while substituting for another class, and it was a super easy and fast read, but with complex themes that would be good for a reader in the coming-of-age years, someone confronting the drive to be independent of parents and their beliefs and someone examining their sexual awakening. The novel is written in poetry, and it follows a girl names Xiomara Batista. Her body develops early and conspicuously, and as she writes in one of the first poems, the boys who made fun of her now ask her to send pictures of herself.

The poems help to characterize her Harlem neighborhood and her heritage, as well as how her family’s strong beliefs factor into her life. Her Mami wants her to be religious, but Xiomara doesn’t feel that anymore, at least not to the extent that her mother, who doesn’t seem happy with her own life, demands it. Xiomara is busy juggling her family’s expectations with the taunts she hears from her peers. This all potentially changes when she is invited to join her school’s poetry slam club, and she is torn between her Mami’s expectations of her and her drive to dream and express herself in a poetic way. At the same time, she’s experiencing a sexual awakening, dating and daydreaming about a student named Aman, something else that would be forbidden given her mother’s strong religious views—not to mention Xiomara’s twin being gay.

What I really enjoy about the book is that it can be read quickly for plot, but the poetry begs you to slow down and appreciate its figurative language. At the same time, the words are accessible to many levels of readers, and while the ideas in the poems are complex, they are very accessible without insulting the reader or oversimplifying ideas. It’s definitely in the young adult category, and maturity is required for some of the themes, but the language is rarely explicit.

 

 

Last year, this was the Loudoun County 1book1community pick, and I grabbed a copy after we had excess in our school library. I had forgotten about it until now. It’s about a seventh grader, so that gives you an idea about the target age range. To me, it was odd to choose a book for a younger readership when it’s meant for the whole community. It was an easy read, and I finished it in about two sittings. That said, the topic is an important one that everyone should be aware of.

The book centers on a girl named Mila, who is starting to develop, attracting the unwanted attention of a group of boys at school, who, it turns out, are playing a game in which they earn points for hugging or touching her. To make matters worse, he mom seems to be having problems at work, and the family is short on money, so Mila’s options for clothing are limited.

What the book helps to illustrate is how an event like that—boys acting sinister behind the scenes and behind the view of adults—can spiral out of control. For instance, at one point, Mila reacts by kicking, and that is what the teacher saw (not what the boys did that led to her feeling the need to kick), and Mila was the one who was punished, not the boys.

What I enjoyed was that Mila found an activity that provided her strength in numerous ways—martial arts—to help build her confidence and give her the respect she deserved. It’s a fast read, and it’s important for all ages to read. For those in the seventh grade (or nearing seventh grade) age bracket, it’s important for kids to know that this type of behavior is called sexual harassment. For those who are older, it’s important to be reminded of the types of things that kids go through—and to remember that things might be happening behind the scenes.