Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that involves worms. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series.

Served

By Val Muller

It was June 2—exactly two days of school left after today. Marsha had been a menace all year. It was time for Lisa to take matters into her own hands. Mom and Dad had were so old school. “Just punch her once, just once,” Dad had said. Even mom had agreed. “You’ll get in trouble once, but she’ll leave you alone forever.”

Maybe in their day, but nowadays, fighting was serious. Students plummeted in teachers’ opinions after a fight. Privileges were lost. Unwritten penalties were assigned. In the great unfairness of life, psychological and emotional torture happened on a daily basis, but physical torture was met with quick reproach.

No, a fight would not solve this problem. At least not that kind of a fight.

But this kind, Lisa’s kind of fight…

Her mother opened the opportunity in the most perfect way during their weekly trip to the grocery store that evening. “Honey, what do you want to pack for your lunch the last two days of the school year? Something special you’d like?”

Lisa nodded. She already had the idea, and this was her opportunity.

“Spaghetti with meatballs,” she said without a pause.

“For lunch? You’d have to eat it cold,” Mom said.

“That’s okay. I like cold spaghetti—with lots of sauce.”

Mom shrugged.

“Can we get the really thick kind, actually? Linguini, maybe?”

Mom shrugged. “Sure, honey. You do know what you want, I guess.”

Lisa packed her lunch early that Sunday, put it in the fridge with extra care. Got on the bus with a spring in her step.

And just as she thought, Marsha was there on the bus, waiting to torment her. “What’re you so happy about, Leeeeeesa?” she taunted.

All year it had been one thing or another. Her hair ties. Her pencil. Her mermaid bottle of hand sanitizer. Her first-place art contest entry. Of all the things Marsha had taken from Lisa that year, it was her confidence and peace of mind that seems the most unfair to lose.

The adults were all useless. Her parents’ advice to blatantly use force was just as bad as the grownups at school, who seemed to want Lisa to be a perpetual snitch.

“The adults can handle it, but they need to know it’s happening in the first place,” the teachers always said. The adults always spoke in such friendly ways, like they didn’t know what secretly happened to snitches on the playground, on buses, and in the halls.

But this plan—it was snitch-proof. In theory, Lisa wasn’t doing anything wrong. And in theory, Marsha would be so embarrassed by what was going to happen, and so guilty because of how it happened in the first place, that she wouldn’t snitch. Or if she did, she would incriminate herself.

Either way, Lisa would achieve her goal—walk into summer knowing that the next year would be free from bullying.

It happened just as Lisa imagined. Entering the bus, Lisa admitted to Marsha the reason for her smile was her lunch. She talked it up, describing the luscious noodles, the sweet and tangy sauce, the delectable meatballs. The tears were real when Marsha took the lunch from Lisa, promising to eat it in the cafeteria while Lisa watched. These were pent-up tears from months of bullying, but they served Lisa now, empowered Marsha. At lunch, when Lisa went hungry, she repressed a smile when Marsha said, “This spaghetti is so good. Tell your mom to pack me more for tomorrow, will ya?”

Lisa spent a long time playing outside that night. Monday, June 5. It was the perfect summer evening. She got so dirty digging in the mud that Mom insisted she needed a bath.

“My goodness,” Mom said. “I don’t remember the last time you got so dirty. What were you doing out there?”

Lisa smiled. “Looking for worms.”

Lisa woke extra early on June 6 for the last day of school. She snuck out back with her spaghetti lunch, bringing it to the bucket of worms she’d caught the night before. She put so much sauce on her pasta that the worms blended right in.

At lunch, Lisa waited until Marsha had eaten all but a few bites.

“How is it?” Lisa asked, surprised at the confident sound of her own voice. Marsha didn’t answer. Lisa’s confidence threw her off balance, so Lisa said, “I added something special.”

Marsha looked down. Lisa smiled. One of the worms squirmed just enough. Marsha knew. Next to her, Brandon knew. And Camden. And Ellie. They all knew. Marsha wretched and threw up all over the table.

“Kids!” the lunch attendant admonished as she ushered them away from the soiled table. “You should have some compassion. It’s unkind to laugh at someone who’s sick, especially on the last day of school, when she’ll have to be sent home before the class party.”

As the rest of the class hurried to cupcakes and prizes, Lisa watched Marsha slump down the hall to wait for her mother to pick her up. Maybe Marsha was the same height, but her stature had shrunk since that morning, and Lisa had a feeling that Marsha wouldn’t be taking down any more kids the following year.

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Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

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I’ve wanted to read this book for a while now. The fictionalized film version of this story is one I’ve enjoyed, so I was glad to finally pick up this book that was written in the 1970s and has achieved bestseller status.

The title refers to the events that happened in West Virginia in the 1960s leading up to the collapse of the bridge on the West Virginia-Ohio border. Leading up to this time, there were documented accounts of strange objects in the sky, with commonalities such as glowing red eyes and witnesses experiencing discomforts like burned skin, eye infections, and loss of perception of time.

The author shares his own experiences with this, as well as evidence he gathered from witnesses. Without spoiling everything: there are recurring phenomena that happen to those trying to document these cases, such as recording devices not working, tapes being erased, etc.

The author shares some speculation about what might be causing these events, and they suggest possible humans or beings from other time periods (there are some strange instances of beings showing up in out-of-date vehicles that appear brand new), wearing strange outfits, and speaking in weird inflections. My disappointment is in the dearth of actual explanation offered in the book, though I suppose that is to be expected.

I did like the analysis of humans – looking at how easily influenceable we are and suggesting ways we can be manipulated through technology, or what types of people are most easy to manipulate, or even the fact that most UFO sightings take places on Wednesdays after a specific time of night.

It’s an interesting book to read to go through some first-hand accounts of unexplained phenomena, and it would be a good companion to other mothman (or similar) books or films. It read quickly, but the accounts did seem to all be similar to each other, and I was waiting for the ending to build up to something insightful, and that didn’t really happen. In short, I’m glad I read the book, but I was hoping for more insights.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is, “Let’s write a story using the following words: boat – flowers – snow.” Today’s story comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers kidlit mystery series.

Currents
Val Muller

The sun ticked past noon above, but it was chilly for May. Mel adjusted her weight, and the boat shifted, creating ripples on the water. She looked to the shore. Waved to her parents. They either didn’t see or didn’t care.

And why should they? By their own reckoning, Mel had wasted thousands of dollars in application fees, tuition, room and board. Probably the only reason they kept the vacation rental was that they made the reservation a year ago, and it was too late to cancel now. But their demeanors were colder than the weather.

Mel hadn’t expected it to be so hard. All the freedom was just too–well, her teachers had been right. College required much more independence than she had been given in high school, where the whole system kept kids on such a short leash that they were allowed no mistakes.

So, her first mistakes happened at college. Flunked half her classes, passed the others miserably. Traded essays for friends and parties. It’s just that life is so full of details she’d been allowed to neglect until now. She’d been trained to be careless, and here was the result.

The boat stilled, and the late spring flowers on shore reflected on the water like a Monet painting. She felt like the Lady of Shallot, floating in her last moments of life. Indeed, she watched her parents’ reflections. Yes, they were likely to kill her, with those grades.

No, not kill her literally. Just as a metaphor. They were sending her to community college, moving her dorm furniture to their basement, making her get a job. Killing her social life, her independence. She could save up and pay to transfer back to school after two years of community college penance.

She would be wandering in purgatory, much like the ghost of Hamlet’s father. Sent to suffer ineffable tortures unfit for mortal ears. Mel’s parents got up, walked back to the rented cabin. It was like they didn’t care if she drifted off to the other side of the lake or not. Maybe they hoped she would.

She picked up the paddles and stroked gently. The boat glided on the water toward the other side. She slowed as she neared the opposite shore. There was a tree, maybe a pear tree, maybe an elderberry or a silverbell. The new leaves were pushing the flowers away, and they fell gently like snow on the water. Mel thought of Ophelia, the flower girl, the one who had everything stripped away from her—father, lover, ambitions and hopes. Mel leaned over and stared at her reflection, her face speckled with petals mottling the surface.

She was no Ophelia. She wouldn’t have the courage to drown away her problems.

She looked up at the houses and shops lining the street just beyond the tree line. Maybe she could dock there and run away. Like that guy in The Things They Carried. Tim. The narrator Tim, not the author, when he was given the chance to run to Canada during the war. Maybe she could just run away.

But Tim didn’t, did he? He stayed on US soil and went to a war he hated, knowing he could be marching to his death. All the characters from her English class danced in her head. They disapproved of her attitude. Her troubles were nothing compared to theirs. Her problem was a petty one. A completely manageable one. She remembered them like good friends. Why she couldn’t translate that knowledge into a good grade for Professor Snell, she’d never guess.

Mel eyed the distant shore, where her parents were emerging again. They were starting a fire. It looked like maybe they had marshmallows and skewers. So, they weren’t going to abandon her. Not yet. Maybe a little purgatory is what she needed to purge away the last of her irresponsible childhood. Maybe this was the key to opening the door to the rest of her life.

Her parents didn’t even like sweets. It was clear the marshmallows were for her. An apology? No. Maybe a peace offering. A step in the right direction. Two years wouldn’t be so bad. Retake some of the classes, knock out basic requirements and figure out a real major. She turned the boat around and like Pi crossing the Pacific or the crew of the Kon-Tiki pushing for discovery; she cut through the waters, pedals spreading in her wake as she rowed into her future.

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Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This months prompt is “expectations for spring.”

Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers mystery series.

April Fool
Val Muller

Milton Miniver planned eveything, from what he would eat each week to when he would take off the storm windows and replace the screens. He loved cable TV despite all the modern alternatives because it kept to a schedule, just like him.

April 1 was screen day. It worried him a little that this year, the switch from winter to spring behaviors coincided with April Fools Day, possibly his least favorite holiday, but it couldn’t be helped. Rules were rules, and his rule was that the first Saturday in April was the switch.

It couldn’t be worse than last year, he reminded himself. Last year, the first Saturday in April brought an unexpected 8 inches of snow, and his fingers turned bright red trying to change out the storm window panels for screens.

This year would be unseasonably warm. In fact, for two weeks now the weather spoke more of late spring than the end of winter. But that was okay. He never changed to screen windows before April.

The night of March 31, he took out his box of spring clothing–the light pants, lightweight shirts, and thin rain jackets. He packed away winter sweaters and corduroy pants and wool socks and tucked the box nearly next to “summer” in his closet.

He woke to moonlight shining right in his eyes, so brightly he thought he’d overslept. So he hurried to the bathroom. By the time he realized it was only 4:30, that it was moonshine and not sunshine that woke him, he was so full of adrenaline that there was no going back.

He had never changed out the screens before sunrise, but it had to be done. It was a before-breakfast task. By the time the windows were switched and he had eaten breakfast, the sun had barely risen. He dressed and did some light weeding around his home. The warm weather had brought out all the flowers and more weeds than usual.

By the time he was finished, he worked up quite a sweat; his spring clothes were a bit too warm. It was nearing summer temperatures, pushing beyond 80 degrees. But all his shorts were still neatly tucked away in his closet. They were not to be unpacked until the first of June.

He was about to go inside when screams from down the street caught his attention. A small dog came charging across his yard, followed slowly by a screaming woman.

“Milton! Milton!” she shouted.

Milton startled. He didn’t recognize the woman or her dog, yet clearly she knew him.

“Milton, stop!” she was saying

Milton had bent down to try to catch the runaway pup, but clearly she didn’t want him to.

He stood again.

“Please, stop him!” she shouted.

Confused, Milton crouched again. The dog leapt into his arms.

“Milton, stay, you naughty boy!” she screamed.

Milton’s face turned red at her words, then even redder when he realized his confusion. The dog’s name was also Milton.

He explained the mistake to her as he tried to cover his embarrassment with laughter. But the woman–Summer was her name–was too relieved to notice. She was busy alternatively hugging him and the pup.

“We were on our way to the park for a hike on such a nice day,” she explained once she and the dog settled down. “Milton got a little too excited and slipped his collar.” Then she looked the human Milton in the eye. “Why don’t you come with us? Go for a little hike and then I’ll buy you lunch as a thank you.”

This was most unorthodox. Dates had to be planned in advance between people who clearly knew each other. And who heard of a first date on April Fools Day?

Milton opened his mouth to refuse, but the words that emerged surprised him. “I’d love to. I only just need to change into some shorts.”

He could barely believe it as he climbed the steps to his bedroom and pulled open the summer box. His heart skipped as quickly as he did as he re-emerged in shorts and a polo–a June outfit–for his hike.

April Fools, he told himself as he locked the door behind him and stepped forward into the smile of Summer, the barking of the dog, and the whisper of the unknown.

The Spot Writers:
Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

I received this book years ago as part of a promotion—it came with the purchase of another book which I cannot now remember. It’s a novella by Stephen King that also includes another short story called “Mortality.”

The novella is told through a frame structure of an old-timer in a nursing home. He goes by the nickname “Granny” and was once a coach for a now-defunct New Jersey baseball team. The old timer is telling “Mr. King” the story of Blockade Billy, a player who was recruited in a pinch when the team ran out of catchers, but whose presence was later erased from MLB history because of a scandal which I will not reveal, or it will spoil the only purpose of the tale.

I tried several times to read this novel previously. The voice of the old timer is interesting, and I could see the voice making a good narration to use as a voice-over during a film in which we see clips of Blockade Billy and company. But as a written word, I lost interest several times, even as the old man admitted he was rambling and hadn’t spoken this much in years (and was enjoying the chance to talk). There was a lot of baseball talk, and I don’t mind sports talk, but because there was little context, I was not drawn in right away.

The book is slim—the novella is 80 pages of generous spacing and wide margins. It took until about page 40 (halfway through) to hook me—when I saw there was something strange about Blockade Billy. I was trying to imagine what I would have thought if it had been an unknown author and not Stephen King. Part of me felt it wasn’t a weird enough tale—I was expecting even more twists from King. I did enjoy the old man’s voice, but it seemed to draw the novella out when it should have been a short story instead.

The short story that was included after, “Morality,” was more in line with what I expected from Stephen King. It’s the story of a couple on the brink of poverty. The wife is given an indecent proposal (but not like the movie) in exchange for much-needed money, and we get to watch the decision and its implications in the marriage. The darkness of this tale was much more King in my mind.

It wasn’t a bad tale, and I brought it to my kids’ martial arts class so that I would be a captive reader and not succumb to other distractions. That said, I have a huge stack of “to be read” books, and this one is likely not worthy of some of the others.

Welcome to the Spot Writers! This month’s prompt is to an unexpected phone call. Today’s tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the Corgi Capers kid lit mystery series.

 

Light

By Val Muller

 

Her alarm went off again. Jenn reached her hand out from the warm covers. The cool air of the house was like a thousand pins against her skin as she hit the last of her allotted snoozes. The darkness of the room could have meant midnight or five in the morning, it could have meant early evening. Hell, it could have meant high noon in these doldrums.

 

Winter was like death. Like every day, fighting a slow death. How did no one else feel it? The cold, the darkness, the struggle just to do anything…She’d tried hot showers, she’d tried altering bedtime, she’d tried spending as much time outdoors as the measly light would allow. She had even tried those special bulbs that were supposed to mimic sunlight.

 

Laughable.

 

Halloween was always fun. Christmas was terrible, but at least the stress of pulling it off kept her busy, running around like a chicken with its head cut off.

 

I bet chickens hate winter, too.

 

After the holidays, there was a horrific lull that lasted until at least March, when the ground woke up. March snows were powerless, even the big ones. They might last a day or two, but the sun was mostly back by then. It was strong enough to counter the cold. Then April would follow, and as soon as the leaves were back…

 

There was a word for what she missed. Psithurism. The sound of leaves rustling in the breeze. Someone had loved that sound enough to make a word for it. Psithurism. That’s what she missed. Sometimes she would Google the word and listen to videos that people had made during the warm months, simply pointing their cameras up at the trees. The sound of the wind through the live green leaves brought her goosebumps, and for a few dream-like moments, she pretended it was summer.

 

But then she remembered she was under the covers, hiding from the dark, from the cold. There were no leaves on the trees. The only sound the wind offered was the clickety-clack of dry bones knocking against each other, against houses. The clack of death.

 

She shivered as her phone sounded again. But this was no alarm. This was the ringer. Who in the world would be calling this early?

 

She chuckled softly. Maybe it was a surprise snowstorm, and work was cancelled for the day. The only thing winter was good for.

 

One can hope…

 

It wasn’t work, but it was her coworker. Shane. An acquaintance more than a friend. They all programmed each other’s numbers into their phones in case they had to call out and seek replacements. But why would Shane be calling her now? If he had to call out, he surely would have seen her name was already on the schedule.

 

“Hello? Shane?”

 

“Jenn, are you outside?”

 

“Outside? Now? No, I…”

 

“Go now! Go.”

 

“Outside?”

 

“I’m out here walking my dog, and you have to see this.”

 

Jenn hopped out of bed, the adrenaline spike an armor against the cold.

“What are you—”

 

“You have to go now,” he said. “I remember what we talked about, with winter. I thought of you.”

 

“Shane, what?”

 

“Just go!”

 

The call ended.

 

Jenn grabbed a pair of sweatpants that were pooled on the floor and pulled them over her pajamas. Then a bathrobe. Downstairs, she pulled on boots and her coat. She hurried out the door, pulling on gloves and hat as she went. Out the front, the darkness still lingered, but the lighting was different. Rosy.

 

She hurried to the back of the apartment complex, where a splattering of clouds was painted pink and orange by a rising sun that had not yet met the horizon. Her amazed breath left in ghostly puffs, but the cold didn’t bother her. The wave of adrenaline took her as she jogged up the hill at the edge of the property.

 

The sun was peeking over the horizon now, just a little slice of an orange sitting on the hill. Incredibly, it rose by the second. It rose and rose and rose. It was telling her something. This planet was moving, increment by increment, it was bringing her closer to spring, to summer.

 

To psithurism.

 

The sun was impossibly orange. No, orange did not do justice to this glowing orb. Gold? Not even gold… it transcended color. She tried not to look at it too much. Couldn’t she blind herself?

 

To be safe, she took out her phone, swiped into camera mode, and watched the run rise through the screen, clicking pictures as it went. The splattering of clouds ignited from pale pink and orange to fiery orange, yellow, gold, red. Colors impossible to describe. Melted gold poured in the heavens.

 

This was not the white winter sun she had come to despise.

 

The sun danced through the clouds, a sole ballerina doing an arabesque against the sky, the clouds accentuating her reach. Now a quiet moment, a lull of color, but the sun wasn’t finished. She was just preparing. She reached her arms out again, but a thick cloud blocked her majesty for a moment. Jenn snuck a peek with her eyes, and just then, the sun rose an inch more, leaping over the offending cloud. In an impossible grand jeté, she leapt into the world as if she had no idea it was winter.

 

This was no pale sun, no sun that would tolerate snow. This was a summer sun allowing herself to perform on this cold January day. She was performing, and perhaps Jenn was her intended audience. Jenn snapped a few more pictures, but then she simply stood in awe. She watched the sun filter through the winter branches, but she concentrated even harder.

 

Her mind took her back to summertime, and the dead branches filled with greenery. The winter silence filled with the whisper of living leaves speaking to each other in a warm breeze. She inhaled, and the air felt impossibly warm. A bird chirped, and Jenn startled. This was not in her mind. Not three feet away, a bright red cardinal and his lady had landed in a branch, eating some of the berries left over from the fall. They sang to each other, or maybe they sang gratitude to the dancing sun as she reminded them that life thrived even in the winter’s gloom.

 

She snapped one last picture.

 

She couldn’t wait to show Shane.

 

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

I came upon the graphic novel version of this story at a book fair at my kid’s school. When I went home to research it, I saw that it was originally a novel, so I gave it a shot. The novel is middle grade—meant for ages 8-12 or so—and tells the story of a blended family: Molly (12) and her younger brother, and Heather (7) are brought together when their parents marry.

The parents are both artistic and move to an old church in the middle of nowhere (that has been converted to living quarters). There are rumors that the property is haunted, with reports of drownings on the pond on the property. This is a literal ghost story where the ghost interacts with characters.

I won’t use spoilers in this review. I will say that this piece was moody and suspenseful and had me flipping page after page. Heather was absolutely annoying for much of the story, as was her father, but there is a reason for that. Every element of the work seemed to have a purpose, and the characters had a depth I was not expecting for a book for younger readers.

I may have to check out the graphic novel, and in researching the story for this review, I saw that there is also a movie version, but its rating was not great. If you like ghost stories, even if you are grownup, this is worth your time to read.

Like last week’s book pick, I chose to read this one after someone mentioned that it involved journalism. I thought it might be a good read to integrate into my journalism classes, at least in part. While that part of my hope fell short, it was a fun, quick read, even though the genre is not one I would typically read.

This review, in part, contains spoilers.

The story follows an aspiring journalist who is contacted seemingly randomly by famed Golden Age actress Evelyn Hugo, offering to tell her life story to the journalist. This makes no sense because the journalist, Monique, is unknown. It’s clear from the start that Evelyn has motives for choosing Monique, and I won’t spoil the reason—we find it out toward the very end of the novel.

The novel is a frame story in which we experience Monique arriving at Evelyn’s home and sitting down, asking questions, which frames the majority of the chapters, which are Evelyn telling her life’s tale. With some spoilers:

She succeeded as an actress at first because of her beautiful looks, though she had to white-wash her heritage (and name) in order to do so. Throughout the novel, she takes (no surprise) seven husbands, discovering in the process that she is actually in love with a woman. In an era when bisexual wasn’t even a consideration, she realizes that’s what she is—maybe. Or maybe she just loves the one woman.

Because she struggled through the 1950s, 60s, 70s, 80s, she had to hide any lifestyle choices that would put her career at risk. This was frustrating and would perhaps be eye-opening for a reader, but the focus was on Evelyn and her own life rather than society as a whole.

What disappointed me was probably based on my own expectations. The newspaper articles that were interspersed with the chapters were more gossip columns than news stories—there were no quotes (even fictional ones) about or from the characters, only speculation in gossip-column style. And Monique didn’t really have to work for the interviews. It was clear Evelyn wanted her from the start, and it would be impossible for an unknown journalist to walk away from such an opportunity, even if she wanted to. So, everything came easily to her. The story was about Evelyn, not the journalist, even though the journalist grew and changed as a result of her time with Evelyn.

It was a fun read, though definitely for mature readers. Nothing explicit, but the subject matter was explicit at times. It would be okay for high school juniors or seniors, or grownups.

Sure, Christmas is over, but according to this book, as early as December 26, you can start planning your Christmas jar for next year.

I learned about this book in the fall, when my daughter’s swim instructor heard I was an English teacher and invited me to hear a visiting author at their church. I could not attend e(I had work), but I researched the author, and saw that his book Christmas Jars is fairly well known. It was short and inexpensive, so I gave it a shot. I read it in two sittings while recovering from a mild case of COVID, and it was a nice little Christmas read, but I don’t think it will change my life.

This novella is all about the message, not the style or the story itself. It’s a little cheesy, like a Hallmark Christmas movie (I don’t watch Hallmark Christmas movies, but I’ve seen trailers), and it’s a novella, not a novel. The length of the novella limits the character development and complexity of the plot, making it a little dogmatic.

The story follows a young journalist named Hope (one of the reasons I bought the book was it promised to follow the journey of a journalist who wanted to break an amazing story—I teach journalism and newspaper, so I was intrigued). She experiences a break-in while she’s out on Christmas Eve, and when the police are at her place investigating, someone leaves a jar full of money for her. The thought behind the jar stays with her, and she decides to use her journalism skills to investigate, learning that many people have been blessed with such jars over the years. Now, she is determined to find out who left her the jar—and why.

The way she goes about it is through deception: she lies to her target/source by pretending to be a college student working on an assignment (rather than a journalist). This seemed like it would be a major point in the plot, but it wasn’t as big of a deal as I thought (hoped?) it might be—otherwise, it may have been a good point of discussion for my journalism students: when is it okay to lie to a source?

In this case, there was not a really pressing reason to lie. She wanted to know who had been leaving the Christmas jars, and no one who knew about them wanted to speak about it. But it wasn’t a huge conspiracy or anything like that.

What she discovered is that some people keep a Christmas jar in their house, collecting change over the year, and then on Christmas, they give the money to someone they think is in need. While it’s a nice idea, there are other ideas out there that are just as nice—creating blessing bags for the homeless, donating time or money to shelters, etc. It’s not that Christmas Jars are bad ideas, but they aren’t the only way to bless someone throughout the year.

There were some coincidences that happened to characters that were just too unbelievable for such a short novel. I am guessing the message was supposed to be that coincidences happen and perhaps are even divine, but without other things happening, too, it was just so hard to believe. The characters lacked development and they seemed to lack human flaws. It was me being TOLD a story, not being SHOWN and not EXPERIENCING it, and because I was only told almost a summary of what happened, it was difficult to believe it in a meaningful way.

I would loan out the book to anyone who wanted a nice, quick Christmas read, but I’m not sure I would recommend purchasing it. If you want to follow the spirit of the book, wash out a glass jar, and start saving change from throughout the year. On Christmas Eve in 2023, find someone you think is in need, and gift them the jar to see how it might help them, but don’t claim credit, and don’t let yourself be seen.

While shopping for holiday gifts for a raffle basket, I came across this book randomly at Walmart of all places. I read the first several pages while my kids were choosing books for the gift basket, and I fell in love with the artwork and the strong emotional hook (spoilers in the next paragraph, but they happen in the very beginning). But the second half of the book did not meet my expectations.

The main character, Emily, loses her dad in an accident (which we get to see). The scene pulls on our heartstrings (and made me question whether my daughter would be ready to read this book). However, it was a strong enough emotional hook to make me think the book was going to do bold things throughout.

When I did have time to read the rest of the book (which I received as a gift after telling my family about the opening), I was disappointed. Granted, I know there are many more books in the series, so maybe some of what I was hoping for are contained in the continuation of the series, but I found the storyline to be generic and superficial after the initial pages.

The story at first reminds me of Ghostbusters: Afterlife. After the death of Emily’s father, we skip ahead a few years, and her mother moves Emily and her brother Navin to a spooky house that has been in the family. Some weird stuff happens right away, and their mother is kidnapped. Emily must decide in a split second whether she wants to be the keeper of the stone, accepting possession of an amulet that has the power to help save everything.

While the novel opened with some heavy emotions, I thought Emily finding and accepting of the amulet was cliché and shallow. Although the artwork was amazing and carried me through the entire book, I was looking for character development and emotions. But Emily accepted the amulet too readily, she learned how to use it too easily. I was looking for maybe connections to her personality, maybe a hesitancy to accept the stone (her brother begs her not to for about 2 seconds, and she ignores him). I was also hoping for some insights linked to her dad—she lost her dad, and that must leave a huge scar, but I wanted to see how she was working to push past the emotions. Did she remember something her dad told her when she went to accept the amulet? We never know; the story doesn’t go into depth that way. We just see their actions.

There are two strange creatures following the protagonists, but they are explained somewhat easily (one ends up saving them), and the bunny creature they find at their relatives’ house makes the story seem too juvenile and flat.

So to me, the balance of the book is off: the strong and powerful emotions of the book’s opening are a promise to readers who expect depth and a turnoff to those who want a more juvenile tale. The second half of the book contradicts the first, so there is a mismatch between the opening and the remainder of the tale. My daughter would be terrified by the tale’s opening, but she (first grade) would likely enjoy the action of the rest of the tale. For me, its’ the opposite. I’d be interested in hearing from anyone who has read the rest of the series. Does more depth happen later?