Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

I came upon the graphic novel version of this story at a book fair at my kid’s school. When I went home to research it, I saw that it was originally a novel, so I gave it a shot. The novel is middle grade—meant for ages 8-12 or so—and tells the story of a blended family: Molly (12) and her younger brother, and Heather (7) are brought together when their parents marry.

The parents are both artistic and move to an old church in the middle of nowhere (that has been converted to living quarters). There are rumors that the property is haunted, with reports of drownings on the pond on the property. This is a literal ghost story where the ghost interacts with characters.

I won’t use spoilers in this review. I will say that this piece was moody and suspenseful and had me flipping page after page. Heather was absolutely annoying for much of the story, as was her father, but there is a reason for that. Every element of the work seemed to have a purpose, and the characters had a depth I was not expecting for a book for younger readers.

I may have to check out the graphic novel, and in researching the story for this review, I saw that there is also a movie version, but its rating was not great. If you like ghost stories, even if you are grownup, this is worth your time to read.

Like last week’s book pick, I chose to read this one after someone mentioned that it involved journalism. I thought it might be a good read to integrate into my journalism classes, at least in part. While that part of my hope fell short, it was a fun, quick read, even though the genre is not one I would typically read.

This review, in part, contains spoilers.

The story follows an aspiring journalist who is contacted seemingly randomly by famed Golden Age actress Evelyn Hugo, offering to tell her life story to the journalist. This makes no sense because the journalist, Monique, is unknown. It’s clear from the start that Evelyn has motives for choosing Monique, and I won’t spoil the reason—we find it out toward the very end of the novel.

The novel is a frame story in which we experience Monique arriving at Evelyn’s home and sitting down, asking questions, which frames the majority of the chapters, which are Evelyn telling her life’s tale. With some spoilers:

She succeeded as an actress at first because of her beautiful looks, though she had to white-wash her heritage (and name) in order to do so. Throughout the novel, she takes (no surprise) seven husbands, discovering in the process that she is actually in love with a woman. In an era when bisexual wasn’t even a consideration, she realizes that’s what she is—maybe. Or maybe she just loves the one woman.

Because she struggled through the 1950s, 60s, 70s, 80s, she had to hide any lifestyle choices that would put her career at risk. This was frustrating and would perhaps be eye-opening for a reader, but the focus was on Evelyn and her own life rather than society as a whole.

What disappointed me was probably based on my own expectations. The newspaper articles that were interspersed with the chapters were more gossip columns than news stories—there were no quotes (even fictional ones) about or from the characters, only speculation in gossip-column style. And Monique didn’t really have to work for the interviews. It was clear Evelyn wanted her from the start, and it would be impossible for an unknown journalist to walk away from such an opportunity, even if she wanted to. So, everything came easily to her. The story was about Evelyn, not the journalist, even though the journalist grew and changed as a result of her time with Evelyn.

It was a fun read, though definitely for mature readers. Nothing explicit, but the subject matter was explicit at times. It would be okay for high school juniors or seniors, or grownups.

Sure, Christmas is over, but according to this book, as early as December 26, you can start planning your Christmas jar for next year.

I learned about this book in the fall, when my daughter’s swim instructor heard I was an English teacher and invited me to hear a visiting author at their church. I could not attend e(I had work), but I researched the author, and saw that his book Christmas Jars is fairly well known. It was short and inexpensive, so I gave it a shot. I read it in two sittings while recovering from a mild case of COVID, and it was a nice little Christmas read, but I don’t think it will change my life.

This novella is all about the message, not the style or the story itself. It’s a little cheesy, like a Hallmark Christmas movie (I don’t watch Hallmark Christmas movies, but I’ve seen trailers), and it’s a novella, not a novel. The length of the novella limits the character development and complexity of the plot, making it a little dogmatic.

The story follows a young journalist named Hope (one of the reasons I bought the book was it promised to follow the journey of a journalist who wanted to break an amazing story—I teach journalism and newspaper, so I was intrigued). She experiences a break-in while she’s out on Christmas Eve, and when the police are at her place investigating, someone leaves a jar full of money for her. The thought behind the jar stays with her, and she decides to use her journalism skills to investigate, learning that many people have been blessed with such jars over the years. Now, she is determined to find out who left her the jar—and why.

The way she goes about it is through deception: she lies to her target/source by pretending to be a college student working on an assignment (rather than a journalist). This seemed like it would be a major point in the plot, but it wasn’t as big of a deal as I thought (hoped?) it might be—otherwise, it may have been a good point of discussion for my journalism students: when is it okay to lie to a source?

In this case, there was not a really pressing reason to lie. She wanted to know who had been leaving the Christmas jars, and no one who knew about them wanted to speak about it. But it wasn’t a huge conspiracy or anything like that.

What she discovered is that some people keep a Christmas jar in their house, collecting change over the year, and then on Christmas, they give the money to someone they think is in need. While it’s a nice idea, there are other ideas out there that are just as nice—creating blessing bags for the homeless, donating time or money to shelters, etc. It’s not that Christmas Jars are bad ideas, but they aren’t the only way to bless someone throughout the year.

There were some coincidences that happened to characters that were just too unbelievable for such a short novel. I am guessing the message was supposed to be that coincidences happen and perhaps are even divine, but without other things happening, too, it was just so hard to believe. The characters lacked development and they seemed to lack human flaws. It was me being TOLD a story, not being SHOWN and not EXPERIENCING it, and because I was only told almost a summary of what happened, it was difficult to believe it in a meaningful way.

I would loan out the book to anyone who wanted a nice, quick Christmas read, but I’m not sure I would recommend purchasing it. If you want to follow the spirit of the book, wash out a glass jar, and start saving change from throughout the year. On Christmas Eve in 2023, find someone you think is in need, and gift them the jar to see how it might help them, but don’t claim credit, and don’t let yourself be seen.

While shopping for holiday gifts for a raffle basket, I came across this book randomly at Walmart of all places. I read the first several pages while my kids were choosing books for the gift basket, and I fell in love with the artwork and the strong emotional hook (spoilers in the next paragraph, but they happen in the very beginning). But the second half of the book did not meet my expectations.

The main character, Emily, loses her dad in an accident (which we get to see). The scene pulls on our heartstrings (and made me question whether my daughter would be ready to read this book). However, it was a strong enough emotional hook to make me think the book was going to do bold things throughout.

When I did have time to read the rest of the book (which I received as a gift after telling my family about the opening), I was disappointed. Granted, I know there are many more books in the series, so maybe some of what I was hoping for are contained in the continuation of the series, but I found the storyline to be generic and superficial after the initial pages.

The story at first reminds me of Ghostbusters: Afterlife. After the death of Emily’s father, we skip ahead a few years, and her mother moves Emily and her brother Navin to a spooky house that has been in the family. Some weird stuff happens right away, and their mother is kidnapped. Emily must decide in a split second whether she wants to be the keeper of the stone, accepting possession of an amulet that has the power to help save everything.

While the novel opened with some heavy emotions, I thought Emily finding and accepting of the amulet was cliché and shallow. Although the artwork was amazing and carried me through the entire book, I was looking for character development and emotions. But Emily accepted the amulet too readily, she learned how to use it too easily. I was looking for maybe connections to her personality, maybe a hesitancy to accept the stone (her brother begs her not to for about 2 seconds, and she ignores him). I was also hoping for some insights linked to her dad—she lost her dad, and that must leave a huge scar, but I wanted to see how she was working to push past the emotions. Did she remember something her dad told her when she went to accept the amulet? We never know; the story doesn’t go into depth that way. We just see their actions.

There are two strange creatures following the protagonists, but they are explained somewhat easily (one ends up saving them), and the bunny creature they find at their relatives’ house makes the story seem too juvenile and flat.

So to me, the balance of the book is off: the strong and powerful emotions of the book’s opening are a promise to readers who expect depth and a turnoff to those who want a more juvenile tale. The second half of the book contradicts the first, so there is a mismatch between the opening and the remainder of the tale. My daughter would be terrified by the tale’s opening, but she (first grade) would likely enjoy the action of the rest of the tale. For me, its’ the opposite. I’d be interested in hearing from anyone who has read the rest of the series. Does more depth happen later?

Welcome to the Spot Writers! This month’s prompt is to write about a memorable gift. This week’s prompt comes to us from Val Muller, whose family always manages to align “spring cleaning” with the weeks leading up to Christmas (and its guests). She is currently working on the fourth installment of the Corgi Capers kidlit mystery series in between vacuuming and teaching. You can keep up at www.corgicapers.com.

Sorry I’m posting this late–it’s been a week! My new year’s resolution is to post more regularly here, so be on the lookout for more book reviews and flash fiction 🙂

The Sixth Annual Psychotic Christmas Purge

By Val Muller

 

In the weeks before Christmas,

Mom crept through the rooms.

“Do we really still need this?”

She asked into the Doom.

She took it and tossed it

Before we could answer

With the speed of Santa

Pulled by Dasher and Dancer.

 

Alarmed, we looked ‘round

And stowed all our favorite toys:

My dolls and his trucks

And our big carton of slime.

“This place must be clean

Before we put the tree up,”

Mom said as we sunk

Into our cold, winter rut.

 

The place looked horrendous,

As if hit by tornado:

Toys scattered with shoes,

Socks crusted with Play-dough.

Dolls lying around

As if killed in a war,

With markers and beads

Littering the floor.

 

“Turn off that tablet.

Let’s clean off the floor.”

We sighed, ‘cause when we finished,

There would always be more.

“Those papers need shredding,

The fridge needs cleaned out,

The mantle is dusty—

Now, don’t scream and pout.”

 

As Christmas grew closer,

The house still a mess,

Mom stepped up her efforts.

Like a witch with a hex,

She waved her hand over tables,

And clutter disappeared.

A dozen trash bags grew fuller;

Our souls filled with fear.

 

I kicked off my slippers

One mistaken night;

Then Mom’s eyes grew wide,

Then mine filled with fright.

Shaking, I took the slippers

From off of the floor

And hoped the Great Purge

Wouldn’t last that much more.

 

Then still we just sat there

On the soft sofa, cozy.

Mom’s muscles grew larger,

Her cheeks grew quite rosy.

“We’re not putting the tree up

Until this room is spotless.”

And then brother said

Something quite thoughtless:

 

“I like having toys

All over the floor:

The couch is a bridge,

And there at the door,

Is an imaginary highway

That goes down the stairs,

Which is why I leave

All my trucks over there.”

 

Mom sat down, quite tired,

So I thought we might win,

And I opened my mouth

And spoke into the din:

“And my dolls like the table;

It’s their school and their town,

And the dining room chairs

Are their homes, all around.”

 

We thought we had won:

Mom just sat there and sighed.

But then she spoke,

Her eyes glossy and wide.

She told us a tale

Of a beast huge and scary,

A monster named Krampus,

Enormous and hairy:

 

“He takes naughty children

From out of their homes,

And whips them with rods—”

A chill ran deep through our bones.

“Not even Santa

Can save you from him.

He’s got a wicker basket

And a sinister grin.”

 

We looked over at dad,

Who was reading the paper.

“Kids, do what your mom says,”

He muttered—the traitor.

“And don’t you think Krampus

Will spare you, my dear,”

Mom said to dad,

Whose eyes filled with fear.

 

“Your papers are clutter.

This one’s from October!

I’m recycling it now.”

Dad’s eyes grew wide and sober.

He stood like a robot

And started to clean,

And so did me and brother,

Like golems in a dream.

 

As we cleaned all that night,

Mom looked much like Santa;

A sack on her back,

She repeated this mantra:

“Declutter, declutter,

Then vacuum and dust.

If you haven’t used it in months,

Tossing it out is a must.”

 

Yes, like deranged Santa,

She filled so many sacks,

And she filled up both trash cans

With her decluttering pact.

Dad looked alarmed.

We had run out of trash bags,

So she put stuff in boxes—

Our mom who’d turned mad.

 

We cleaned for forever,

Until our feet ached and bled.

Every muscle sore,

We three begged for bed.

And we slept quite soundly

To the vacuum’s soft whir.

Our day of cleaning

Was a nightmarish blur.

 

Krampus did find me,

But only in dreams.

I woke quite early

To my horrified scream.

Had I really cleaned

The evening before?

Would I ever recover

From that scarring chore?

 

But now Mom was sleeping.

The house was quiet and dark.

I could get up and play.

My eyes lit with a spark.

I took a box of dolls

And skipped down the stairs

When a wonderful sight

Caught me unaware:

 

The room was quite spotless,

No clutter to be seen,

And the tree in the corner

Looked just like a dream.

It sparkled and glowed,

Put there by an elf—

Or a mom on a cleaning rage

Who couldn’t help herself?

 

I hurried up the stairs

To my sleeping brother’s room.

I stowed my dolls away,

And then quite soon,

We crept down the stairs

To the ornament box,

And we decorated the tree

With garland and the lot.

 

“It’s really quite nice

To have such a clean room,”

My brother whispered to me.

And then, soon,

Dad came down the stairs,

And his eyes opened wide.

“It looks so nice.

Mom is amazing,”

He practically cried.

 

Then we put on our boots

And our thick winter coats,

And we got in the car

And headed right out.

“To the store,” Dad commanded,

“To get more trash bags,

And to get Mom some breakfast

To make her feel glad.”

 

When we got home,

Mom had awoken.

We gave her the breakfast

Without a word spoken.

She ate and she smiled

And looked at the clean room

As we imagined the toys

That’d be filling it soon.

 

“We do this each Christmas,”

She said after a while.

“Let’s just keep the house neat

So it’ll be easier.” She smiled.

We nodded our heads,

Though we knew we were lying:

By January first,

We wouldn’t even be trying.

 

But for now, that very morning,

We enjoyed the nice gift

Of a clean living room

And pre-Christmas bliss:

A happy Mom and some trash bags,

A breakfast sandwich and a tree,

And a calm weekend morning

For my brother and me.

 

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write on the theme “trying something new.” This week’s poem comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit mystery series Corgi Capers. This poem may or may not have been written in the dentists’ waiting room.

Fear of Flossing

By Val Muller

It started with a play,
A simple one-act she read during grad school:
A full-grown woman, the anti-hero,
Seated in a dentist’s chair,
Revealing deep fears of mortality
Through a discussion of teeth.

The notable imagery:
Protagonist’s teeth disintegrating into powder,
The sands of time,
And some bizarre music.
“Oversimplified,” she decided, an astute grad student,
Well-qualified to criticize the play.
“Obtuse.
“I could write it better.
“No one in real life is that crazy,” she thought–
Smugly, smug like the young;
Life had not yet knocked her down a peg
Or seven.

Then:
Two babies who never slept.
Entire months–years?–of her life
Lost to the fog of sleep deprivation.
And clenching teeth.

The moment surreal, more so than the play.
No, not more so.
Just like in the play.
Flossing one night,
A *clink* in the sink.
A chip of a tooth.
Hysterical laughter.
Maniacal, almost.
“I thought I was awake,”
She mumbled to her husband.
“Turns out this is one of those dreams,
The ones where your teeth fall out. A lucid one.”

Her husband did not laugh.
He was not asleep.
Neither was she.
Life had knocked her down a peg.
She called the dentist.

Skip ahead: two kids later,
Three chipped teeth (mostly fillings, but still).
Sitting in the dentist chair
Like a middle-aged female protagonist,
Trying to explain her fear of flossing
To a bright-eyed hygienist.

“I associate flossing
With my teeth coming out,” she said.
“Doesn’t everyone have dreams
Where their teeth fall out,
Dreams that represent our
Powerlessness against time,
That sort of thing?”

“I don’t,” the hygienist said.
Then he called in the dentist
For a lesson on flossing
And its importance
And the fact that flossing
Had nothing to do
With the teeth that the babies cracked,
The teeth that would have plunked
Onto a plate, or into a pool,
Or down a shower drain,
If they hadn’t clinked in the sink.

“You need to floss,” the dentist said,
Sending her out the door
With threats of gum disease
And crowns
(But not diamonds or royalty).

So she programmed her alarm.
Every night it would ring,
And she would face her fear
And floss–
That was the plan.

The time came.
The alarm rang.
Two children inquired.
They wanted to floss, too,
Just like Mommy.

So up they went,
To the bathroom,
Past the clink sink.
The minty thread
passed between teeth–

Uneventfully.

She studied her eyes in the mirror,
Eyes wide with fear,
Fingers careful not to pull too hard,
But these teeth were not going anywhere.

“Lookameflossing,” a child crowed.
“Am I doing a good job?”

The woman maintained eye contact
With her own self in the mirror
As she replied.
“You are, my dear,” she said,
Proud of the start of her new habit,
Her new self.
“You’re doing a fantastic job.”

 

The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

 

Welcome to The Spot Writers. This month’s prompt: autumn/Halloween. Write a story where a literal or metaphorical ghost plays a prominent role.

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is currently in Berlin, Germany, doing her best to catch up with semi-abandoned writing projects. Her YA novel “Mi chiamo Elisa” (My name is Elisa) was published in Italy by “Le Mezzelane Casa Editrice” in September 2020 and recently in Turkey with the title “Benim adım Elisa”. Her children’s book “Şebnem ve Schrödinger’in Kedisi” (Chiara and Schrödinger’s cat) was published this year in Turkey by Sia Kitap and in Italy with the title: “Chiara e il Gatto di Schrödinger”.

 

Return to Canterville

by Chiara De Giorgi

 

Time, in the Other World, does not flow as it does in the world of the living, as Sir Simon De Canterville was about to discover.

It took him about three hundred years to finally manage to set foot beyond the threshold of the Hereafter, and when he finally did, he was genuinely convinced that it was exactly what he wanted: to finally walk into the light, to rest in peace, to enjoy the company of other spirits. Enough with those human antics! His last experience had been especially frustrating. He needed a vacation, no: he needed to retire. For eternity.

However, when he found himself on the Other Side, it took him no more than a couple of hours to realize that he had never been so bored.

I’m bored to death, he thought. Then he considered what he had just thought and chuckled. Ha, ha! Bored to death… I am already dead, so I can’t die again, no matter how bored I am.

That second thought made him want to cry. “I can’t even die any more”, he said out loud, “so what am I supposed to do?”

His fellow spirits were of no use at all: either lost in contemplation, or singing, or polishing their halos… “Yes, yes, all noble activities for sure”, agreed Sir Simon when one of them proudly explained the workings in the Ever After. “But don’t you also find it a bit… unfunny?”

His companion looked at him with a surprised expression on his translucent face.

“Why would anyone want to have fun? You made it to the Other Side, that’s as huge an accomplishment as anyone may wish. What else does one need?”

Not wanting to look like a newbie, Sir Simon nodded gravely.

“Sure, sure. I understand, I understand. How true, how true”, he muttered, pensively smoothing his beard.

As soon as he was alone again, he took a decision: he would go back. He just couldn’t stay there.

He stood near the threshold, and as soon as a soul appeared from the world of the living, he rushed to the other side.

He was greeted by a cacophony of noises he was not used to: the honking of cars, the roar of airplanes, the sirens of ambulances…

Oh, dear me! he said to himself, alarmed. Could it be that I went in the wrong direction? Maybe I ended up in the world below! This place seems really… infernal!

Looking around frantically for a way out, he noticed a sign: “Canterville Manor, B&B – Opening Soon.”

“What is the meaning of this?” he cried out loud.

No sooner did he think of his castle than he found himself standing in front of it – one of the perks of his ghostly status. It looked like his castle, but at the same time it did not. Puzzled, Sir Simon entered, going through the front door.

Sitting at a table in what used to be the drawing room, a dark-haired lady was shifting some papers on the table in front of her while talking aloud – clearly by herself, since there was no one else in the room.

“Yes, that could work, but we need to check all the old pipes to make sure they carry the voice”, she said. After a pause, she laughed and added: “We can keep the bats as a last resource, if all the other tricks fail.”

Sir Simon was confused and yet intrigued. At least, this wasn’t boring!

He peeked over the lady’s shoulder to look at the scattered papers on the table and recognized the layout of his castle. There were also drawings of the various rooms, vertical cutaways showing the interiors of the chimneys, the walls, and so on.

The lady laughed again, then said, “See you soon”, and placed a small, rectangular, black object on the table.

More and more mysterious, thought Sir Simon.

At that moment, someone else entered the house and joined the lady in the drawing room. It was a man with his hair cut very short and a thick dark beard.

Hm, he has a nice face, thought the ghost. I wouldn’t mind pulling some tricks on him.

For that night, he decided to keep an eye on the new tenants of his castle to try and get to know them a little so he could learn how best to scare them. Oh, how he had missed this!

He was surprised when, at dinnertime, another woman joined the company. Seated at the table, the three chatted for a long time, and the ghost began to get an idea of what was going on.

The bearded man was married to the dark-haired lady, and the newcomer was his sister. The three of them had bought his castle with the intention of making something called a “bed and breakfast” out of it. From the way they talked about it, Sir Simon got the idea that it was some kind of inn.

Those people came into his most ardent sympathies when he better understood what they were planning to do: they intended to advertise their inn as a haunted manor, where guests would pay to be spooked by fake apparitions, fake voices coming up the pipes, bats in the bedroom, and other such amenities.

I really like these guys, he said to himself. In no time at all he had made up his mind: he was going to help them! He knew from experience how hard it was to think up believable tricks, and he had a feeling that if a real ghost spooked the inn’s guests, business would be booming!

The next morning, Sir Simon prepared breakfast for the three tenants of the castle, who came down to the kitchen lured by the smell of coffee, toast, and fried bacon. In the middle of the table, he had placed a letter in which he explained, in black and white, his ideas for a truly spooky inn. Thrilled, full of anticipation… Sir Simon was beyond excited!

The three humans looked at each other suspiciously, wondering who had come up with the little prank. It did not take them long, however, to realize the truth: Sir Simon, impatient and tired of waiting for the numbed intellect of the living to put two and two together, took matters into his own ghostly hands. With solemn gestures, he opened the refrigerator (what a phenomenal invention!) and took out the fresh milk jug.

“Guys, I think the ghost of the manor is home”, said the bearded man, gazing at the milk jar floating mid-air.

“Can it really be?” asked his wife, in disbelief.

“I think this is great news”, cried the bearded man’s sister. “We all know the story: Sir Simon De Canterville is a professional! Working with him will be the most fun and we’re sure to make a lot of money!”

“Did you hear that, Ghost?” called the man. “We are so glad you want to help us!”

Sir Simon was beside himself with happiness. He darted up to the attic where he retrieved his old bagpipe, then returned to the kitchen where he started playing cheerful music – at least, he tried. The instrument was battered, but the three humans did not mind. They sprang to their feet and danced in the middle of the kitchen, thus sealing their alliance with the ghost of the manor. 

To make it short: the inn was a great success, Sir Simon finally found his calling, and he never had a boring moment as long as the three humans lived at Canterville.

What happened next, well… That’s another story.

 

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is to write a story that features someone dancing in the rain. This tale comes to us from Val Muller, author of the kidlit Corgi Capers mystery series. Since Halloween is Val’s favorite holiday, she decided to be a month early and go in that direction. 

Career Aspiration

By Val Muller

“There’s no such thing as a witch,” Mrs. Patrick said. “It’s all just fictional. That means pretend,” she added.

Millie frowned. She knew that was a lie. Olivia’s older sister was Wiccan, and that meant “witch.” And magic was real, too. How else to explain Santa? Or the Tooth Fairy? And if witches weren’t real, why did they have so many of them in stores for Halloween? 

Millie wrinkled up her paper. So she wouldn’t research “witch” for her career day presentation. “I guess I’ll just choose something boring like firefighter.” Her eyes flashed. “Or teacher.” 

Mrs. Patrick handed her a new sheet. “I think that would be for the best.” 

That night, she walked to Olivia’s house to make her poster for the presentation. She had gone with firefighter, and so far her poster had angry red, orange, and yellow flames. 

All over it. 

“I think you have to do more than that,” Olivia said, frowning at the poster. 

Millie shrugged. 

“Like you’re supposed to research the job requirements, salary, training, job duties…” Olivia put down the assignment sheet. “You’re still mad you can’t research witches, huh?”

Millie shrugged again. “This is a stupid assignment. I’ll just copy some stuff off the internet.” 

“I’m gonna see if I can find some ice cream. That’ll help your mood.” Olivia hurried up the stairs, and almost immediately, her older sister appeared. 

“I thought I heard company,” Wendy said. “Weird for Olivia to have friends over on a school night.” 

“It’s not for fun,” Millie said. “I have this stupid project to work on.” 

“What’s stupid about it?” Wendy asked. 

“My teacher says witches aren’t real. And that means she thinks magic isn’t real. And if magic isn’t real, then…” 

Wendy’s eyes softened. She grasped a pendant hanging from her necklace. “Magic is real,” she whispered.

Millie gasped. “Are you a witch?”

“Witchcraft isn’t what they show in movies. It’s not pixie dust or cackling spells. Magic is–feeling connected. There’s magic in the croak of a frog. There’s magic in…” 

“The flap of a butterfly’s wing?” Millie asked. 

Wendy smiled. “Exactly. There’s magic in looking at the moon and finding yourself invigorated. And there’s magic in what we create.” Wendy took off her necklace. It was a crystal pendant, wound at the top with wire bent to look like a leaf. 

From upstairs, Olivia called, “Do you want chocolate or vanilla?” 

Millie smiled. “Both, please.” She winked at Wendy. 

Wendy glanced at Millie’s poster. “There’s magic in drawing, too. Creating something out of blankness. Don’t let your teacher get you down. You just follow you. That’s witchcraft.” 

Wendy patted Millie’s shoulder, leaving just as Olivia descended the stairs with ice cream. The pendant hung heavily around Millie’s neck. 

Later, Millie walked home slowly. She was looking for the moon, but the clouds were too dense. She took the long way home, looking at the way the porch lights lit up the falling autumn leaves. She felt the rain in her mind before she felt it on her skin, and she didn’t hurry. The crystal felt warm on her chest now, getting lighter with the rain. As the rain fell, she held her poster above her like a makeshift umbrella, delighting as the large droplets turned into a deluge, ruining the doomed project. She wove the limp poster through the air like a scarf as she danced in the rain, humming a song that only she understood, a song about red and yellow markers and a firefighter and a teacher and a girl who went to bed with wet braids and went to school the next morning with a smile instead of a project. 

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

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Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is “Back to School.”

This week’s contribution comes from Chiara De Giorgi. Chiara is currently in Berlin, Germany, doing her best to catch up with semi-abandoned writing projects. Her YA novel “Mi chiamo Elisa” was published in Italy by “Le Mezzelane Casa Editrice” in September 2020 and recently in Turkey with the title “Benim adım Elisa”. Her children’s book “Şebnem ve Schrödinger’in Kedisi” was just published in Turkey by Sia Kitap and in Italy with the title: “Chiara e il Gatto di Schrödinger”.

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The Inn at the End of Dreams 

by Chiara De Giorgi

 

When my grandparents opened the inn, they thought they would leave it to their children once they retired. Neither my mom, though, nor her brother or her sister ever wanted to work there. 

“It’s too secluded, too busy, too noisy, too weird…” 

That’s what they used to say, whenever grandpa addressed the issue. Growing up, I witnessed more than one discussion about this: my grandparents were getting older, the inn was their life, but it really was a lot of work, and it didn’t make sense to hire more help, as the earnings would drop significantly. 

“Why don’t you sell?” my uncle would ask from time to time. “It’s in a good position, the new owner could even build an additional story and add a couple of rooms or three.”

I always followed these exchanges with a bit of apprehension, as I loved the inn and hated the idea of my grandparents selling it. Luckily, they were having none of it. 

“And where would we go?” my grandma would reply. “We like it here, that’s why we built the inn here in the first place.”

Conversations like this always ended with my mom and her siblings scrolling their heads and muttering under their breaths. I eavesdropped, once, and I was horrified to learn that they meant to sell the inn as soon as their parents were dead, if they would not manage to convince them to sell before then. The thought made me sad, and I promised my grandparents that I would come live with them and work at the inn as soon as I finished school. I was like them, I loved it there. And I really could not understand why my mom and her siblings didn’t. 

 

The inn was built at a crossroads. There wasn’t much around, but the significant detail was the roads that met at that specific intersection. To the west was the World of Dreams, from which came the creatures on their way to our world; going north were the Lands of the Gods, who liked to travel to all the other places; to the east was the Realm of Fairy Tales, and to the south were the World of Humans and the Province of Talking Turtles (we often met some on our way to visit my grandparents).

There was a big variety of guests staying at the inn, and, growing up, I sometimes befriended some kid from one world or another when we both stayed long enough. I got a taste for ice skating one winter when I spent a few days playing with a fairy of the Cold from the Lands of the Gods, whose family stopped there for a short vacation. One summer, as a teenager, I had a crush on a young werewolf. I was convinced that he reciprocated, as we kept writing letters to each other throughout the following year: we sent them to the inn, and my grandparents forwarded his to me, and mine to him. Unfortunately, one day the letter I received was meant for someone else, so I learned that the scoundrel had a girl in each of the worlds.

Anyway.

When my grandparents decided to retire, I was studying to become a teacher. I had always believed that, when the time would come for me to take over the inn, I’d be ready, but it turned out I was not. My grandparents were saddened, but very understanding: they’d never put themselves in the way of another’s dream, especially if that someone was their only niece. 

They passed away a few months from each other a couple of years ago, and they left the inn to me. My parents, and my aunt and uncle, tried to convince me to sell it.

“A teacher’s salary is not enough to live a comfortable life”, they’d argue. “Think of all the things you could do with the money!”

But I couldn’t bring myself to do that. And, slowly, a plan was born. I’d turn the “Inn at the End of Dreams” into the “Boarding School at the End of Dreams”, and it would be open to all creatures, coming from any world. 

I found a partner from the World of Dreams, who was willing to invest money to build an annexe for rooms and a canteen. Classrooms, a large common room, and the library are in the main building, where we also have or quarters. (Gathering books to fill the shelves in the library has been one of the most exciting and fun undertakings of my life, by the way. I swear, the whole operation almost failed because I was too busy reading the books of fairy tales and legends from the Dream World, or the history of the Lands of the Gods, to take care of the necessary administrative stuff!) 

And, finally, the time has come: tomorrow is the first school day at the Boarding School at the End of Dreams. We have thirty-five students from all the worlds, there have been so many requests and we had to decline quite a few, but we are working on extra projects, so that other kids can take part in our exclusive programme. 

Needless to say, my family and friends were – and still are – very concerned about my decision, but I am sure my grandparents would be proud of me. My partner and I are determined to prove our detractors wrong, so wish us luck!

 

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/ 

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/ 

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.com/

Welcome to The Spot Writers. Catherine A. MacKenzie’s novels, WOLVES DON’T KNOCK, a psychological drama, and MISTER WOLFE, the darkly dark sequel/stand-alone novel (18+), are available on Amazon. The prompt for the months is “New School Year.” This week, Cathy continues with Melvin and his tales…

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“What? Sending William Away?” by Cathy MacKenzie

 “Melvin, I think we need to consider sending William to King’s.”

I looked up from my tablet to see Marie staring at me.

“Huh? King’s?” I asked.

“King’s-Edgehill.”

“What? Why?”

“He’s depressed. Didn’t do well in school last year as you know, but you don’t seem to care.”

“Of course I care, Marie. He’s my son. Of course. I care. I do!”

“You have a weird way of showing it. I told you ages ago about his depression, not to mention his horrible grades.”

“He’s lost his siblings, Marie. What the hell do you expect?”

“I think he’s in denial.”

“Denial?”

“Yes, I hear him sometimes. He prays for them to return. Kneels at his bed. Clasps his hands together. Like a steeple. Bows his head. Seconds later, he’ll plop to his bed and just stare at the ceiling.”

I couldn’t resist. “Maybe he thinks he can see Heaven if he stares long enough.”

Marie jumped up from the couch and flailed her arms. “Melvin, you’re so exasperating.”

I felt like shit. Knew I was wrong. “Sorry.”

“I really think King’s would help. Give him a fresh start.”

“He’s only ten, Marie. Is he old enough to go there?”

“I think so. I’ll have to check.”

“But do they deal with problem children? Don’t you just have to be smart to get in?”

“Melvin! William is not a problem child. About the grades: I think that’s the purpose of the school. To give children a better education with one-on-one learning. Fewer children for teachers to deal with. I think they have a day program, so he wouldn’t have to board there.”

“Marie, it’s in Windsor. Over an hour away. Too far for us to drive every day.”

“He’ll have to be a boarding student, then.”

“A boarding student?” I groaned. “How much is that gonna cost?”

She threw me one of her Marie-looks. “Melvin, the world doesn’t revolve around money. Well, maybe it does, but we can’t let it affect us. As to the cost, I haven’t a clue. But it’d be worth it to get William back on track.”

I pondered. Yeah, sure, I wanted my remaining child—my only son—to have a good start in life, but boarding school? And the cost? Man, not like I’m raking in the big bucks.”

“It’s still August, Marie. Lots of time to think about this.”

“No, there isn’t. Kings is booked years in advance. It’s THAT prestigious a school.”

“Then he won’t get in this year, will he?” I heaved a sigh of relief. Then, I stared her down. “Why don’t you see about next year?” Give me some breathing room, I thought. Time to make more money—maybe. With two less kids, you’d think our savings account would be higher, but crappy climate change and Russians invading Ukraine… And now talk of a recession? No wonder I can’t get ahead. Does anyone realize how hard it is to be Man of the House? Unless… Was Marie dipping into our accounts? Buying herself fancy clothes and jewels? I made a mental note to check her closet and jewellery box.

She gave me another “look” and emitted a long, drawn-out sigh. “I’m going to call tomorrow. See what the admittance policy is.”

“Yeah, okay,” I mumbled.

“Our son deserves the best we can give him considering all he’s been through over the past year. We haven’t done much for him. Not really…”

She rambled. On and on. I blocked my ears (mentally, of course, so as not to piss her off more than necessary) and concentrated on the positives over the past year. Wracked my brain but couldn’t come up with one except for Kailani. And where the hell’s she been all this time?

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The next day, Marie informed me that King’s started with Grade Six. William was going into Grade Five. I breathed a huge sigh of relief.

But then—

“I’m going to enroll him for next year, Melvin. That way, he’ll be on the list, and we can change our minds if he improves. We’d just have to pay a deposit.”

Change our minds? My mind hadn’t been changed. Would never be. I didn’t want him to go to King’s. The cost. The distance. Marie hadn’t figured out those major details yet. Hmm, I thought. Boarding school. Marie had been talking about the day program. But if we sent William away for the entire school year, what a pleasure that would be. Of course, he’d return home for holidays: Thanksgiving, Christmas, Easter. Couldn’t let our sweet son be without family on special occasions.

I decided to let the idea fester. We had a year, after all. I could grab some extra shifts at Centrix—that is, if Alexander J. Tupper would cooperate. I could talk to him, explain the situation. He’d understand. He’s always asking how William is. Has sons of his own. Hmm… Might work.

If not, well, a lot can change in a year, right?

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Phil Yeats: https://alankemisterauthor.wordpress.com

Chiara De Giorgi: https://chiaradegiorgi.blogspot.ca/