Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

A few years ago, a student of mine recommended this book. I bought it, stuck it on my TBR pile, and started reading it over the summer. I enjoyed it, but it got swept into a box when I decided to paint the bedroom, so I had about half of the book to read when I found it again earlier this month. Though I generally prefer fiction to nonfiction, this book had me laughing out loud multiple times–to the extent that my husband kept looking at me funny and asking “Are you okay? Oh… you’re just reading again!”

The book follows author Bill Bryson as he attempts to hike the Appalachian Trail. He’s over his prime, and hiking is a challenge for him, but his spirit is strong, and his eye for humorous observation is keen. The humor is augmented when his only companion is an unlikely man who is ill-suited to life on the trail.

Bryson alternates between recounting his experiences on the trail with (usually) interesting facts about plants, animals, the history of the trail, the US government and state organizations (especially the departments responsible for the trail), and other historical and educational tidbits. These were interesting and relayed with humor, so they were usually engaging to read.

The only time I got a little bored was when Bryson accounts his time in Pennsylvania. At this point on the trail, he took to day hikes and checking out local attractions rather than focusing on the trail. While parts of this was interesting, I wished he would just get back on the trail, already (interestingly enough, he wished the same thing).

When I mentioned to a coworker that I was finishing up the book, I learned that it had been made into a film that was currently in theatres. So of course I had to go see it. The film was funny as well, and I thought the two main characters did a decent job capturing the spirit of the book (especially Katz, Bryson’s companion). The film shortened the book (which is long at almost 400 pages) but kept the important elements, interactions, themes—and even some of the most important “lines” from the novel. It’s not a 100% substitution for reading the book, but as far as book-to-screen translations go, this one came close.

What I enjoyed most about the book was vicariously living through someone’s experience on the Appalachian Trail. It’s something I’ve thought about doing once in a while in my life, but practical considerations always seem to get in the way. If the physical challenge isn’t enough, who has several months to devote solely to hiking?

Since Bryson did get me to consider doing at least part of the trail someday—and I do mean only a small part—I liked that he included a list of suggested readings in the back. But interest in the Appalachian Trail aside, I recommend this book for anyone looking to gain an appreciation of nature while being entertained and—ironically—not having to set foot outside one’s home. It’s true that since I’ve read the book, I have more of a keen eye for nature and water features. I live relatively close to the Appalachian Trail, and each time I pass by certain roads, I keep my eyes open for the hikers that I occasionally spot, sporting heavy packs and scraggly hair. Whereas once they were simply a neutral feature of the road, now I look upon them with a bit of awe and a bit of admiration.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to use the following phrases (in any order): “back to school,” “glorious roar,” “and then it fizzled,” and “while the wind gusted.” This week’s contribution comes from Cathy MacKenzie.

Give Cathy’s new Facebook page, “Granny MacKenzie’s Children’s Books,” a “like” and a comment perhaps?

Calvin’s First Day

by Cathy MacKenzie

From the living room window, Carol watched the bus vanish down the street, taking with it her only child. How would Calvin, a young five-year-old, not as mature as others his age, survive the day? Back to school, a term never before applied to him, arrived too soon.

Throughout the summer, Carol had hoped her fears would dissipate and she’d watch the bus zoom off in a glorious roar, an event to rejoice. But the bus disappearing to pick up other children, ones more prepared than hers, filled her stomach with flip-flop motions.

She had taken a vacation day from work in order to see Calvin off in the morning and greet him home mid-afternoon. She tried to concentrate on reading, but too many thoughts flashed through her mind.

A sudden noise caused her to walk to the window. While the wind gusted and the sky darkened, she pictured Calvin crying and the teacher scolding and him slinking to the corner where he’d don a dunce cap.

And then it fizzled. The wind died as quickly as it had arrived. The sky changed to baby blue, the sun replacing black clouds.

Carol brushed away her tears. So what if he peed his pants. Teachers were trained to deal with children his age, and Miss Jones would handle any situation. Five-year-olds were allowed leeway, especially on their first day. Heck, this school year wasn’t grade one but primary, a glorified term for kindergarten.

She smiled. Calvin would be okay.

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

RC Bonitzhttp://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenziehttps://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Happy Friday!

For me, today marked the last day of the first full week of school for the year. Teaching high school is always interesting–and usually tiring, especially at first. I’m looking forward to the long weekend.

So I was especially excited to find a box on my doorstep when I got home.

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It’s my author copies of Chicken Soup for the Soul’s newest book, Dreams and Premonitions: 101 Stories of Miracles, Divine Intervention, and Insight.

Here’s the publisher’s description:

Sixth sense, gut feeling, instinct. Whatever you call it, sometimes we have no logical reason for knowing something—but still we know it. In this collection, you’ll read 101 stories of intuition, insight, and inspiration that will amaze you and encourage you tap into your own inner wisdom

We all have the ability to tap into our intuition, but often find it hard to do. Dreams and premonitions are often the way our intuition or our faith in the beyond manifest. You will be awed and amazed by these true stories from everyday people who have experienced the extraordinary. The 101 stories in this book will enlighten and encourage you to listen to your dreams and your own inner voice.

My story, “The Mentor,” details a life-changing dream I had in which my grandfather, who I never met in life, guided me down the right path and led me to where I am as an author. I never cease to be amazed by the way we are all connected–and the way we influence and help each other even when we aren’t aware of our impact. It’s a gift I’ve been given as a teacher–the chance to touch countless lives even if I’ll rarely know the extent of my impact. And it’s great motivation to live each day a little better.

The book doesn’t go on sale until September 22, but you can pre-order now on Amazon–or send me an email to order an autographed copy while they last 🙂

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to use the following 4 phrases in a tale (in any order): “back to school,” “glorious roar,” “and then it fizzled,” “while the wind gusted.” Today’s tale comes to you from Val Muller, author of The Scarred Letter, the YA reboot of Hawthorne’s original in which a girl tries to stand up for the truth in a deceptive world.

Stolen Time

By Val Muller

Rebecca had been dreading Tuesday night for weeks now. September the Fifteenth was the longest night of the year. A night of sweating and stuttering. Of uncomfortable shoes and business suits. Of mosquito-eyed parents staring her down, questioning her, ready to feast on her dignity.

Tuesday was Back to School Night.

Whoever thought of the idea was clearly a sadist. Anyone but first-year teachers hated the concept. Rebecca’s first year, she looked forward to the opportunity to meet and impress parents. She spent two weeks prior making a folder for each student—yes, all 125 of them. A welcome letter for parents. A copy of the syllabus and her office hours. Even a bookmark with a Shakespeare quotation underneath Ms. Reynolds – British Lit – Looking forward to a great year!

That had been in 2010 when her passion for teaching was new, and at its peak.

And then it fizzled.

Though parents seemed to enjoy their folders, they spent the night as Inquisitors. How many years of teaching experience do you have? How many movies do you plan to show? Why so many? Why so few? Who chooses these books on the curriculum, anyway? Why so dated? Why so new?

A haughty woman quizzed her on the spot about prepositional phrases to see how sharp her grammar was. She knew all about the concept, but her mind went blank, and she spent the rest of the night flustered and tongue-tied.

She’s hated Back to School Night ever since.

Which is why the prospect of Hurricane Hughie thrilled her. They had cancelled after-school activities and sports, just as a precaution, and they promised to make a decision on Back to School Night in the early evening. Rebecca flipped on the local news station. Still nothing.

But the wind and the rain certainly was picking up. Nothing like hurricane winds yet, but enough to be alarming. While the wind gusted, she checked the school’s website from her phone. Nothing yet. The power flickered, browned, returned. Then it went out.

The land line rang, and her heart lifted. She picked it up and answered eagerly. She knew this was no telemarketer. It was the robo-call she had been desiring. Back to School Night was cancelled. Not only that, but so many schools had already lost power—with three elementary school basements flooded—that school was cancelled for the next day as well.

Imagine that—a “snow day” in September!

Rebecca pulled on her slippers, lit a candle, and pulled out a good horror book. It certainly fit the mood, and October wasn’t too far away. Then she stretched out in her favorite chair and lost herself in a book against the glorious roar of the wind, snapping trees, upending furniture, and fulfilling dreams.

 

The Spot Writers–our members:

RC Bonitz: www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

 Catherine A. MacKenzie: http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to use the following 4 phrases in a tale (in any order): “back to school,” “glorious roar,” “and then it fizzled,” “while the wind gusted.”

Today’s contribution comes from RC Bonitz, author of A BLANKET FOR HER HEART. His latest book, DANGEROUS DECISIONS, will be published soon by REBEL INK PRESS.

 SOMEBODY

 by RC Bonitz

The fire burned with a glorious roar while the wind gusted outside the rustic log cabin. He sat quietly, almost dozing, listening to the pop and crackle of the flames, imagining Cheryl smiling beside him in the other Adirondack chair. Except the chair sat empty, she wasn’t there. Helluva summer vacation this was. Weather cold and raw, the winds too strong to take his canoe out on the lake, and no Cheryl. He could deal with the weather, hell that was a minor inconvenience.

Every time he saw her image in his head now she was grim faced. No more those smiling sparkly eyes, the warm grins she’d had for him the past six months. He’d thought she loved him. Their chemistry had been hot and fiery, but then it fizzled out, leaving only open echoes, memories and dreams. All because he’d asked her to marry him? There had to be more to it than that, what was he missing?

He’d be going back to school next month and she’d be there. Or would she? Did she care so little that she’d face him in class as if nothing had ever happened between them? He groaned. Damnation, a girl could tie a guy in knots with a flick of an eye. Well he would not let that happen anymore She’d ruined his summer vacation, but that was it, no more. He grinned. When he got back to school, he’d date her best friend Carol, that would fix her. Or Wendy. Or Jennifer. Or somebody.

 

The Spot Writers–our members:

RC Bonitz: www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

 Catherine A. MacKenzie: http://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

 

 

Sharyn McCrumb was the banquet speaker at Longwood University’s Summer Literacy Institute, and I enjoyed hearing her speak. In preparation for hearing her, I wanted to read one of her back-list titles, so I chose The Hangman’s Beautiful Daughter, a title from 1992.

20150814_133734McCrumb is known as a writer of Appalachian fiction, both historical and contemporary. This novel follows several characters in Dark Hollow, Tennessee. At first I thought the characters and their stories might be related only tangentially, but as the novel progresses, it becomes clear that they are part of a poignant and interwoven quilt that adds depth to each character and adds life to the town of Dark Hollow.

My favorite character is Nora Bonesteel. She is gifted with “the Sight” and is able to see glimpses of the future, though she is unable to do anything about it. For instance, she might create a quilt that illustrates a series of gravestones, and although she may know who is going to die, she is powerless to prevent it. She plays an important role in foreshadowing throughout the story, especially as we come to know her and the other characters better.

Laura Bruce is a mid-thirties preacher’s wife left to tend to the “flock” by herself while her husband serves overseas in his role as preacher. She is pregnant and feels out of place and is looking to find a sense of belonging—both in the community and in her religion. It is appropriate that her husband is absent the entire time, for it allows her to focus on her personal growth without relying on him as a crutch, or someone who will define her for her.

There are other characters as well—there’s Tavy Annis and Taw McBryde. At first I thought their story was randomly thrown in there, but keep faith: it, too, weaves into the larger tapestry. Tavy is dying of cancer, and he believes it’s the result of chemicals being dumped into the river by a North Carolina water company. He begins his dying crusade to right this wrong.

There’s also the Underhill family—four of them have been killed in a murder-suicide, and the remaining two (teenagers) are left to fend for themselves. Their case is a strange one, and no one seems to give them the full attention they deserve until things escalate out of hand.

There are several other characters as well, and they all add depth and flavor to the town. Their stories help to develop the novel. The final page ended in a satisfying way—bittersweet, expected, and unexpected at the same time.

During the author’s talk, I enjoyed hearing about history from a local perspective–and the ways certain people or events tend to be left out of history textbooks. Since the Revolutionary War is one of my favorite time periods to think about, I purchased one of McCrumb’s newer books, King’s Mountain, at the signing event, and I look forward to reading it soon.

I had the honor of hearing Cushman speak at the Shenandoah University Children’s Literature Conference this year on the day I was presenting a workshop. Her writing journey amazed me because she waited until age 50 to start writing because she realized until that point, she hadn’t had anything she needed to say.

20150810_135859The Midwife’s Apprentice is one of her most famous books. The story follows a “tween” (I guess we could call her that, though that term is a rather modern one) who finds herself homeless in medieval England. She sleeps in dung heaps to keep warm in the colder months, earning the nickname “Beetle” as a result. On a constant search for food and warmth, she finds herself in a variety of roles: the object of boys’ bullying, a midwife’s apprentice, a helper at a local eatery, and even an unexpected student of letters. Throughout the novel, her one true friend is her cat, Purr, who follows her around.

She is not an overtly strong protagonist, but she has a quiet inner strength that she must realize on her own. She is intelligent and able, but she lacks confidence. I found this refreshing, as many protagonists are a bit more arrogant than that. I enjoyed watching her grow through all of her jobs to come to a realization in the end of what she should be. I won’t reveal spoilers—it’s a short read, and worth the time.

What I enjoyed the most was Cushman’s historical research. I’m always fascinated by historical novels that do a great job integrating the local flavor of the time. I enjoyed some of the details about food eaten, ways barkeeps ripped off customers, ways boys might have bullied each other (and others), as well as beliefs and practices about delivering babies.

The shifting points of view took the focus of the story away from Beetle the entire time, though she was the main focus. We were also allowed briefly into other characters’ minds. Though short, it felt like the story was the right length for what had to be told. The author does not waste the reader’s time, and each chapter ended in an artistic way that felt complete while still promising there was more to the story. I will definitely check out some of her other works.

Thanks to friend and fellow author/blogger Debbie Roppolo, who presented me with The Dragon’s Loyalty Award. You can check out her site and read up on her series Amelia Frump and her Peanut Butter Loving Imagination (and also score some seriously delicious peanut butter recipes).

As part of this recognition, I am to share 7 interesting facts about me with my readers. I thought I’d focus on some of the fantastic parts of my childhood and background.

Fact 1

When I was a girl, I watched The Dark Crystal maybe once each week during the summer. I was convinced that since female gelflings had wings, I would sprout them one day. I checked the mirror each morning and wondered why mine hadn’t grown yet. I had several dreams about flying in the living room that were so real, I woke up believing they were memories.

Fact 2

The first “book” I ever wrote was called “The Mystery of Who Killed John Polly.” It was written on stapled-together paper and featured some of my “original” illustrations. The tale featured a vigilante mob who, with the help of a dog, tracked down a murderer. Perhaps it was a very early precursor to my Corgi Capers series.

My first "book"--The Mystery of Who Killed John Polly

My first “book”–The Mystery of Who Killed John Polly

Fact 3

Writing is in my blood. In kindergarten, I did not understand how to write a story (I was too young), and I remember getting “talked to” by the teacher about being more creative. (I didn’t really know what was going on and just imitated the behavior and ideas of others; I was creative in my mind but had no idea how to share it). But then in first grade, my creativity started to flourish. My first grade teacher took me to the fifth grade classroom to have me share a poem I’d written. My second grade teacher wrote in my “yearbook” that she believed she’d see my work in books and magazines some day. My third grade teacher allowed me to share “The Mystery of Who Killed John Polly” with the class. My college professor once accused me of re-using something I had previously written because “no one could write that well, that fast.” An in-class writing exercise proved him wrong.

Fact 4

I once had to walk home during a blizzard. Home was about two miles from school, and my mom walked to get me (with a sled). I remember wearing plastic shopping bags over my feet to keep the snow from getting in my boots. It felt like an arctic expedition. I believe we all got sick later. I now loathe snow and would love to live somewhere snowless, at least during the winter months! They say the El Nino pattern this year *might* be strong enough to make it too warm for snow where I live. I’m praying for it!

Fact 5

When I was a kid, I found Easter to be a terrifying holiday. I woke up multiple times the night before Easter, wondering when a giant, red-eyed rabbit was going to show up in my room. I was always relieved when the sun would light the room and I could release my terror. The basket of candy was cool, but, I never understood why no one else in the world seemed concerned about the idea of a giant rodent breaking into homes and bedrooms. Shouldn’t we call the police?

Fact 6

My favorite sound is Summer Evening. I love the soft whoosh of wind through summer leaves, the chirping of crickets, the buzzing of bugs and singing of frogs. In the winter, the near total silence leaves me heartbroken and longing for the opposite end of the year.

Fact 7

My favorite place to play as a kid was this treehouse my dad built for me and my sister. It was double-decker, so the bottom level doubled as a stage for us to perform and allowed us to get up on a rope swing and swing into leaf piles or slide across a frozen “lake” created by dumping water under it in the winter. The upper level had a ladder leading to it, and my sister didn’t prefer to be up that high, so I would go up there and read, daydream, and write.

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Speaking of fantastic, a reminder that all Barking Rain Press books, including The Scarred Letter, are on sale for $1.99 through August 20. They are available wherever ebooks are sold or directly from the Barking Rain site.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. The prompt for this month is to use three of the following six words in a story: dreamy, tender, boss, week, lamp, table. This week’s contribution comes from Cathy MacKenzie, who doesn’t normally write romance, but the prompt shouts “romance.”

Give Cathy’s new Facebook page, “Granny MacKenzie’s Children’s Books,” a “like” and a comment perhaps?

Bad Table Manners

by Cathy A MacKenzie

 

Clint had always been the most handsome man Stacey had ever seen, and his outgoing and empathetic personality complemented his looks. She watched while he flicked hair from his forehead and adjusted his shirt over his lean frame before he sat at the bar. Her husband, Steve, would go ballistic knowing she coveted his good friend. Steve’s temper flared enough without her help.

Stacey sighed. “Come on, let’s go. Nothing much going on here.”

Carol glanced at her friend. “What do you mean? There’s lots going on here.”

“Nah, it’s boring. I’m bored.” If Stacey were single like Carol, she’d be clamouring to stay at the Thistle Downe Pub, which had been one of her favourite places before her marriage.

“It’s Clint, isn’t it?” Carol asked.

Stacey’s eyes darted in Clint’s direction before flashing at Carol. “You see right through me, don’t you?”

“Leave Steve. You’re not happy. Neither of you is happy, truth be known.”

Stacey snickered. “Steve is. He has the best of both worlds—single and married.”

“My point exactly. It’s time for you to make the break.”

“Yeah, I know. Just not sure if I’m ready for that giant jump into the wild blue yonder.”

Carol laughed. “You have such a way with words, even when you’re almost in tears.”

“Ha, ha, ha.”

“Clint likes you. He always has.”

“Carol, get real. He’s still Steve’s friend. Besides, I had my chance with Clint and I blew it.”

“You didn’t blow it. Clint blew it. He didn’t want to commit, remember? So you settled on Steve.”

“I didn’t really settle. I truly thought I was in love with Steve.”

“He’d be on your side. He’d de-friend Steve if you said the word.”

“Clint has no interest in me anymore. Maybe it’s you he’s interested in. He bought you a drink, didn’t he?” Stacey picked up Carol’s wine glass and clacked it to the table.

“He bought you a drink, too.” Carol clinked her glass against Stacey’s. “And for the record, I’m not interested in Clint, and he’s definitely not interested in me. I know that for a fact.”

Stacey examined Clint again. He truly was dreamy. Most men didn’t possess more than one or two good attributes—at least that was her experience. Her marriage and past relationships had never lived up to her expectations. In retrospect, she should have given Clint more time.

But what was she thinking? Carol was right; Clint had never wanted to commit. Had three years changed him? Was he ready to settle down?

Stacey had dated Clint for a few months after she and Steve, early in their relationship, had temporarily broken up. Perhaps it was Steve’s bad-boy reputation that had reeled her back or perhaps she hadn’t wanted to be alone. Would she have married Clint instead had he asked? Could she have been happily married to Clint for the past three years instead of unhappily married to Steve?

She wondered for the umpteenth time if Steve had proposed to knock Clint out of the picture. Clint had been annoyed when they announced their engagement and, although Clint had been Steve’s best man, he had avoided both Steve and her for a good year after the wedding. She hadn’t noticed Clint’s absence at first since Steve had always had a ready excuse as to Clint’s whereabouts, but she soon questioned it. Gradually, Clint resurfaced but the tension was unmistakeable.

Had Steve ever, really and truly, loved her? Did Clint love her? Did she still love Clint? She thought she had back then, but never received the same vibes back from him. She shrugged, tired of asking herself questions she couldn’t answer. The past was the past; the present was now, and the future lay before her. And she wanted a better future.

She silently thanked God she hadn’t conceived since it was just a matter of time until she left Steve. Perhaps tomorrow. Or the following week. Or next month.

Perhaps tonight?

Where was her gumption? She should have left long ago when Steve’s philandering became public knowledge among their friends.

She’d have to sit down, ponder her future, plot her revenge. What could she do to her husband? Retaliate with her own affairs? Slash his clothing and toss them out the apartment window? Sprinkle a poisonous powder in his coffee? Substitute toxic pills for his vitamins?

She sighed and downed her wine, slamming the glass too hard on the table, startling even herself.

Carol nudged Stacey. “I spy with my little eyes. Poof!” She raised her hands from her lap to table-height. “I see a man. The one in the blue shirt. Do you see him?” She pointed to the far side of the room.

“Yeah, I see him. With my little eyes.”

“What do you think?”

“He’s okay, I guess.”

“Okay? He’s more than okay. He’s a hunk.”

Stacey didn’t feel like arguing. “Yep, you’re right. You gonna ask him to dance?”

“I might.” While Carol watched the stranger, Stacey watched Clint, who still sat at the bar alone.

Carol elbowed Stacey and whispered, “He’s coming our way.”

“Hello, ladies.” The man’s eyes darted first to Stacey, then to Carol, and then back to Stacey. He motioned to Stacey’s drink, ignoring Carol’s empty glass. “Can I get you a refill?”

Carol’s smile disappeared.

“Sure. White wine. Oh, and my friend needs another, too,” Stacey said.

As if it was a chore, the stranger glanced at Carol before looking at her glass. “Yeah, okay. Be right back.”

“Red for me,” Carol said.

The man glared at her and then swaggered to the bar. The two women snickered.

“Can’t believe you did that,” Carol said.

“He’s a loser,” Stacey said. “Losers should pay. Besides, though he may be handsome, he’s obviously dumb and lacking in personality. Unlike Clint. And he thinks he’s king shit.”

Carol laughed. “Ah, so you’ve finally clued in about Clint. Divorce Steve. Marry Clint.”

“Carol! Who says he wants to marry me? Who says he’s even interested in me?”

“Oh, you know darn well he is.”

Their conversation stopped when the man returned with two drinks.

“I’m John. John Brown.” He nodded at Stacey. “And you are?”

“Stacey. Stacey Jones.”

“I’m Carol. Carol Smith.” Carol covered her mouth. Stacey knew Carol was trying not to laugh.

John, oblivious to the women’s joking, pulled out a chair beside Stacey. “Nice to meet you both.”

He leaned in to Stacy. “I saw you eyeing me.”

Stacey had just taken a sip of wine and, at his comment, sprayed it toward him. He seemed oblivious. “I wasn’t eyeing you. I think that was Carol.”

John glanced at Carol before returning to gaze at Stacey. He patted her hand. “I could have sworn it was you.”

Stacey removed her hand from the table. “No, I’m married. And my vows are important to me.”

John sighed. “Who cares about vows anymore? Marriage is passé. He turned to focus his attention on Carol. “What about you, Cathy?”

Carol’s face reddened. “My name is Carol.”

“You married, Cathy?”

“Divorced. And my name is Carol.”

“Imagine that. So am I. Divorced, I mean. My name’s John.” He grinned, baring perfect, pearly-whites. “We’ll make a good match then.”

Carol was saved from further conversation when Clint appeared.

“Everything okay?” Clint glanced at one woman and then the next.

“I think John here was just about to leave,” Stacey said. “Unless Carol wants him to stay?” Carol’s face flushed, and Stacey immediately regretted her words. She opened her mouth to apologize but Clint interrupted.

“Carol?”

“Sorry, John Brown, I’m tired. I’m going home. Alone.”

“I’ll take you both home,” Clint said.

The three watched John slink away. Clint helped Stacey from her chair and linked his arm into hers. “You okay?”

Stacey grinned. “I’m fine. What a louse, but aren’t all men like that at closing time?”

Carol giggled. “All except for Clint, of course.”

Clint laughed. “Yeah, I’m a perfect man though a little slow.” He gazed at Stacey. “About three years too slow.”

Carol slung her purse over her shoulder. “I have my car, Clint. I’ll see you both later. Behave, the two of you.”

Stacey feigned embarrassment. “Carol! The nerve of you.”

“Tit for tat,” Carol said.

“Not sure about the tit for tat, but Carol’s right about one thing,” Clint said. “But before we misbehave, we need to talk.”

Carol winked at Stacey before vanishing out the door.

 

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

RC Bonitzhttp://www.rcbonitz.com

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenziehttps://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Deborah Marie Dera:  www.deborahdera.com

I won this book at a door prize at one of the sessions at Longwood University’s Summer Literacy Institute this summer. The class was about how to integrate activities to prepare children for disaster situations using literature.

I’ve always been fascinated with the idea of disaster situations. Maybe it’s because I’m a writer, and my imagination is prone to think of the “worst,” or maybe it’s that I was obsessed with Gary Paulsen survival books when I was younger. But think about it: people involved in a disaster situation rarely ever think anything interesting will happen to them that day.

The only real “disaster” I was in that wasn’t predicted (as in a hurricane) was a minor earthquake. It wasn’t anything dangerous, but it was jarring. I was at work—planning in my classroom before the start of school. At first I thought someone was wheeling one of the very heavy laptop carts down the hallway, but the rumbling got worse, and the projector was shaking up at the ceiling. My sister is more of a preparation expert than I am, and she told me to find a doorway or a triangle support area if I was ever in an earthquake, so I made my way to the metal doorframe of my classroom. The precaution wasn’t needed, but it got me thinking: what if a major disaster happened at school? We would all be unprepared. After all, teachers and students are not allowed to have things that would be helpful in a disaster situation—guns, firestarters, etc.

Which is why I am fascinated with books like Cave-In. In this middle-grade novel, a small group of students join their teacher and student teacher on an isolated island right after Thanksgiving. Their goal is to clean up the island for the wildlife that will be arriving in the spring. Their teacher insists on an authentic experience, and cell phones are not allowed. While there, they check out an aging and abandoned storage structure—just when an earthquake hits, trapping them inside.

I enjoyed reading about the different ways the students react—there is a whole range of emotions. I also enjoyed seeing how resourceful some of them were in finding food and water (after their supplies are crushed by the cave-in). Some of the elements of the situation seemed a bit too coincidental, such as the fact that the teacher didn’t bring ANY phone to call for backup (would a school district even allow such a field trip?) or the fact that the person scheduled to pick them up died of a heart attack before he was able to get them. Still, it’s these types of coincidences that no one ever plans for, and they’re the types of decisions and events that can make or break a situation.

The book does contain deaths, and not just the fisherman’s. I enjoyed this—not because I enjoy reading death, but because it is more realistic than a toned-down book in which everyone survives. The deaths were glossed over, though, to keep the book appropriate for a middle-grade reader.

Monninger uses multiple perspectives to tell the story. I did enjoy hearing each student’s thoughts and perceptions, but I felt that all the jumping around limited the extent to which I was able to truly understand or sympathize with any one character. I would have liked to stay in one character’s perspective for longer. Still, it should be noted that the situation, and not the characters, is the purpose of this novel.

It was a fun read, one I would have enjoyed to augment my Gary Paulsen collection as a child, and a series I would recommend as an entry for any student wanting to know more about survival.