Val Muller

The Electronic Wordsmith

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt is: Write about a character whose one ability is to amplify the best traits in others. Who would they hang around? Who would they choose to avoid?

Today’s post comes to your from Val Muller, author of the young adult novel The Girl Who Flew Away

The Herald

By Val Muller

I came for a Wisher, a little boy sitting on a rusty swing in a lonely park after dark. His was a Genuine Wish, not a superficial one like most. Some ask for ponies or money, games or toys. True Wishers ask for things that matter.

He asked for his parents to love again.

A Wish intangible for him as stardust in the vacuum of space.

He first saw my twinkle floating above the park, shimmering in the darkened sky. I descended with his Wish and landed at the edge of a fence. I had to move quickly because the boy stood right away to investigate. His life at home was so strained, he’d lost all fear and sense of self preservation.

I turned first into a glowing flower, tempting him to pluck me, but I knew that form would never last. The flowers here are ephemeral, not like the sentient ones in the outer planets of Myler. But in the instant her reached to pluck me, I felt his skin and knew his mind. And so in the darkness I disintegrated into the earth and followed the rooty passages into the brush, where I emerged as a puppy.

It was one he’d seen on a television show—a cartoon, which is a type of art form on this world. I worked quickly to make myself look a bit more realistic than the two-dimensional ink of his mind. It was enough. In the darkness, the boy cradled me, and with his touch I saw it all:

His mother, taxed and tired at the end of each day, his father grumpy and exhausted from an unfulfilling job. And each nearly looking forward to the dinner table, where they nightly poured their wrath as quickly as they poured their drinks. Dinners were a verbal battle that left the boy nauseous.

His father drank to squash his courage, so that he could not stand up to his boss or his desires or the temptation to lash out with his fists. His mother drank to sharpen her courage, so that she could stand stone still while her husband put another foot through the drywall, or punched through a window, or turned plates into shrapnel. She drank to find the courage to stand stone still as her son ran out to the park every night and to tell him, when he returned, the lie that she never feared his father would turn his wrath on them.

As he held me tight, I saw through his mind the way life used to be, the way it lingered in his memories. His father building and playing each night, constructing roads and bridges for toy vehicles, making anything the boy asked for out of wood and straws and cardboard and love. I saw his mother, happy and young without the stress of an angry spouse, supporting him and reading homework and stories together. A mother who didn’t drink.

In the midnight darkness, he cradled me in his arms. He ran home as his life played in my mind until I knew my task.

A yellow light shone above the stovetop in the kitchen as we entered. His mom sat at the table, a glass of water in front of her. I knew from the boy’s memories that she always sat up this way, waiting for him, making sure he was safe. This time, a new bit of plaster littered the kitchen floor.

She took us both into her arms, her embrace warm and trembling. She didn’t question my presence, but her eyes leaked and she spoke of her childhood and the dog she grew up with. She spoke of how it’d brought comfort to her, a perpetual friend. As her fingers ran through my simulated fur, the stress of her life floated out. I made sure the harmful rays dissipated into the air and into the night.

I knew my task, so I barked once, twice, just the way I heard it in the boy’s memory, a cartoonish bark, until I heard the rustling upstairs. I felt the boy’s father wipe the haze of drink from his eyes and stumble down the stairs. When he saw the tableau before him, the boy getting kisses from his new best friend and the woman embracing them both, his heart melted into tears, and it all came pouring out—in words this time, not in anger—the frustration, fatigue, disappointment. He had only just begun to realize that such is the reality of life on his world. A constant flux, a managing of expectations, a search for the small things that bring joy. He had lost balance.

The three of them sat together, circled around me, the parents’ faces wet with tears and the boy’s sore with the unfamiliar smile of joy.

In their touch, I saw everything. Recovery would be a hard road for the boy’s father, but he would succeed with only two transgressions. He would heal soon enough to be joyed by the news the boy’s mother would save for just the right moment: that the boy would soon be an older brother.

I could not stay for a lifetime, not even for the life of a dog on this planet where life flies by as fast as comets. There was no need of me anymore. I had fulfilled the Wish. I saw how it would happen. The next day, father and son would build me a doghouse out of the wood scraps in the garage, the ones he used to use all the time when he built toys for the boy. While they were sawing, I would disappear. But it would be only a matter of days before the family stumbled upon a box of puppies for sale on the way home from the boy’s school.

They would pick the runt, the one that needed extra love, because of course they’d have to have something to live in the dog house they’d built. Something to build toys for, to center their love around. Something to bring them together. They’d name him Herald.

They would wonder about me for a time, but I cast an order for their memories of me to be brief. In a decade, they would not remember that they had built their doghouse before the arrival of Herald. They did not need memories of the strange light that descended from above and took the clumsy form of a dog in the darkness. They did not need those memories of me. They needed only to remember who they had once been.

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Dorothy Colinco. www.dorothycolinco.com

CaraMarie Christy: https://calamariwriting.wordpress.com/

 

I had my daughter in January 2016. So it’s no surprise that I didn’t get to that month’s issue of National Geographic. Cleaning the house, I found it tucked away with a few other unread magazines. The article on page 70, “Bloody Good,” features the benefits of vultures in our world, and the positivity made it into my brain for this week’s Fantastic Friday post.

From the Bible to Darwin to pop culture, we normally think of vultures with such negative connotations. As writers, we use the term “vulture” to refer to someone who is predatory and takes advantage of others. We associate vultures with death and decay. One of my favorite childhood films, The Dark Crystal, created the evil Skeksis to look like human-sized vultures, playing on their aggressive and disgusting nature. Even the National Geographic article feature photography speckled with blood and written descriptions of vultures fighting for access to the intestinal tract of a dead animal.

But, like many of the animals we think of negatively, vultures are important to our ecosystem: they rapidly clean up dead animals, preventing disease and rot. As the article goes on to explain the threats to the vulture population, it also details what would happen in the absence of the bird: animals would take three times as long to be consumed/decompose, meaning other scavenger mammals would interact longer, and the pathogens that are neutralized in a vulture stomach would spread more easily, both in the wild and in domestic populations.

Nature always seems to have balance down to an art. As a writer and teacher, I like to look for metaphorical lessons in nature. In the case of the vulture, the “bad” brings about unexpected benefits and makes the world a cleaner, safer place.

I like to think that the negatives in our own lives help to improve our lives in their own unique way. A (minor) surgery my daughter had scheduled made me appreciate her all the more—even the tantrums—as my mind imagined the worst. A vacation ending soon helped us appreciate the time we do have, savoring every ocean sunrise (or sunset). After tearing my ACL, I better appreciate the ability to run since its (relative) healing. Even in the case of serious illness, which of course is mostly out of our control, there are such gatherings of love and support from friends and family that we realize how blessed we are, despite the horrors life throws at us.

And that is the blessing, wrapped in the curse, of being human. None of us are here forever, and that knowledge is what can bring out the best in us. Whether it’s taking a moment to enjoy a mottled sunset sky, letting the toddler have five more minutes in the bathtub, or taking a casserole to a friend in need, we all have a deep impact on our own outlooks just as our actions have deep impacts on each other. Even if you’re a vulture.

Welcome to the Spot Writers! The prompt for August: Where have you always wanted to vacation? Pick a country and set your story there – only in this story, the dream location sadly is a setting for disaster. Today’s post comes to us from CaraMarie Christy.

The Day the Doctor Melted

by CaraMarie Christy

When Emilia Song was ten years old, she wanted more than anything to go to go to London. Most kids had grown out of their fairytales and children shows by ten years old, as they begin the slow switch over to animes and teen dramas. But Emilia still held on tight to her passionate love for the scify series—Doctor Who. She wanted to keep her plastic toy Sonic Screwdriver and bright, red fez close until the day she could see The Doctor for herself. All her classmates acted like she had six heads when she spoke about Doctor Who. Her parents didn’t want to travel anywhere to see The Doctor. They liked “moving” vacations, like hiking the Grand Canyon or Mount Esja in Iceland. Emilia sometimes cringed at the idea of vacations, because she associated the term with large amounts of exercise.

Her mother saved and saved, until one day, with a grin and a ticket purchase in her inbox, she came home to announce that she had surprise. They were going to Cardiff, Wales.

“We’re going to the museum in Cardiff,” she clarified when Emilia’s face sank. Wales was not London. She was not even sure where Wales was. “It’s got everything Doctor Who; props from the show, wax statues of all the Doctors, and it’s where they film the show! You even get to go on your own ‘space adventure’.”

Her own adventure was all Emilia needed to hear. She was packed and ready to go that night, even though their vacation wasn’t for weeks. Just in case The Doctor wanted to stop by and whisk her away to her adventure before then.

When they finally did reach Cardiff, the first thing she wanted to do was wait in the incredibly long line to go down the row of Doctors.

“Are you sure? You don’t want to go play with the TARDIS?” Her parents tried to drag her toward the area where kids were ecstatically pressing buttons on an oversized console. Emilia insisted on waiting to see her Doctor.

A slight stir began in the line in front of her. The buzz of tension was still there when Emilia stepped up to have her turn to look at The Doctors.

“The Doctor…” Only something was wrong. She could see the face of Five, one of the older Doctors who had been on the show in its early run, but something was wrong with him. He looked—heavier. Like a massive force was dragging him toward the ground. Emilia realized, as her mother pointed to a drop of liquid rolling down the side of The Doctor’s face, that it was because he was melting.

“Sorry miss, I need you to step aside.” One of the tour guides with a shiny white badge pushed past Emilia’s mother. “Somebody forgot to turn the AC up today. This whole place just… We need to get the artists here.” The man made a growling noise and charged forward with his keys.

“Oh, I’m sorry babe.” Her mother squeezed her shoulder. “Maybe we can get a refund and come back when they’re fixed.”

“It’s fine. I’m just thinking—of how to save him.” Emilia squeezed her sonic screwdriver. A real companion would never let her Doctor melt. She’d fight whatever alien had done this to him.

 

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Dorothy Colinco. www.dorothycolinco.com

CaraMarie Christy: https://calamariwriting.wordpress.com/

We’ve all heard the cliché: don’t judge a book by its cover. I love when perception and stereotypes are contradicted. Earlier this summer, as I was walking through a shopping center, my husband and I were approached by an old man who practically ran out of his car, saying, “You want to see something neat?”

As a writer, my mind is always stirring up possibilities, often thinking up worst-case scenarios. So of course, my mind immediately began: the old man didn’t look distressed, so my immediate thought was that he was part of a scam. My brain flashed back to kindergarten. Stranger danger. Beware of strangers offering tempting things. He would be the perfect bait, wouldn’t he, a seemingly harmless old man to distract us while some sinister plot was carried out by his partner to…

But before my mind could continue, he was standing two feet from us, holding out a plastic sleeve containing a $100 bill. As it turned out, he’d been to the bank to make deposits, and one of the bills he had tucked away turned out to be from 1934. The teller had caught the ancient bill and suggested that he might want to keep it. (A quick Internet search tells me they are worth a little more than $100, but it seems the man was more enamored with the romanticism of it all.)

I’ll admit, a part of me was still wondering if this was a scam: was he going to try to sell us the bill for more than its $100 face value?

“Almost 80, and it’s the first one I’ve seen!” he said proudly, displaying the clear plastic sleeve. “I’m almost 80, and this is the first I saw,” he repeated. “And when I saw you coming—” he said, motioning to our toddler, as if he wanted to include her in the experience—“I just knew I had to show you!”

I was glad my initial thoughts turned out to be wrong. What I perceived as a possible scam artist was just a happy old man wanting to share his discovery. He kept repeating the number of years it had taken him to see such a unique bill, and the way his eyes included us in the conversation made it clear that he especially wanted to share the bill with the toddler: what had taken him nearly 80 years to see, she could experience before age 2. We thanked him and continued on, and when he watched us go the magic in his eyes was almost tangible.

Later, on vacation, I was watching the PBS show Splash and Bubbles with my toddler. We don’t’ have cable, so we hadn’t seen the show before. Imagine my thrill when the main characters—fish and their friends—said they were in search of sea dragons. The entire episode was full of talk of what the scary dragons would look like.

I had to snap a shot of the screen while my daughter learned about leafy seadragons.

I had to snap a shot of the screen while my daughter learned about leafy seadragons.

I knew right away they would encounter the friendly, beautiful leafy seadragons.

I’ve already blogged about leafy seadragons here:  They are similar to seahorses, but they are covered in leafy appendages that make them blend in with kelp, making them one of the most amazing animals I’ve ever seen.

Leafy seadragons play a role in my young adult novel The Girl Who Flew Away. In the novel, the protagonist is often so worried about appearances that she doesn’t always consider what lies beneath. It’s a lesson we’re always learning. In our busy lives, it’s easy to make a quick judgment, categorize, and move on. But the true magic of this life is when we dig deeper, and see the uniqueness of each individual—regardless of their “cover.”


 

The Girl Who Flew Away coverThe Girl Who Flew Away is available everywhere books are sold, including Amazon.com and Barking Rain Press.

This title is part of a book club I’m in, in which teachers evaluate young adult (YA) books for use in the classroom. The goal is for teachers to have resources available to help students choose books they would enjoy. To that end, I’m evaluating this novel not only on its own merit but on its appropriateness for classroom use.

20170807_193053The novel follows a shy girl named Ginny. She’s in high school and is generally quiet and uninvolved. But her late Aunt Peg has left her 13 little blue envelopes with instructions for traveling Europe with just a single backpack, some cash, and a bank card. Though she always liked her aunt, Ginny exists at the opposite end of the personality spectrum. Whereas Ginny is quiet and hesitant to try new things, Aunt Peg was always the artist: although kind, Peg often skipped from one place to another and let her capricious sense of artistry take her through life—even through a bout of being penniless in Europe. In the envelopes she leaves for her niece, she shares tidbits of her life and explains part of her reasoning behind her strange behavior. She also sends her niece on a wild quest across Europe.

The novel is told in three ways: mostly we hear of Ginny’s adventures in third person limited. I found this refreshing, as many YA books stay in first person. But the third person voice stayed relatively simple, imparting information without editorializing too much. We also see Aunt Peg’s letters, so we get to hear a bit of her voice even though she has died before the story begins. Finally, we read a few of the letters Ginny writes to her best friend back home in America.

I enjoyed the fact that Ginny is simply an average high school student. She isn’t overly angsty or angry, and she isn’t especially brave. Going to Europe and following each envelope one at a time, without knowing what the next instructions will be, contradicts everything she is. I can certainly relate. While I would have been excited to travel Europe in high school, I would have been terrified to do so on my own—without any parents or friends or plan. I also liked that Ginny’s decisions were not always the best ones, but they weren’t catastrophic either. In other words, the book was realistic.

The chapters were short, and although Ginny bounced around Europe, the pace was fast enough so I didn’t feel bogged down by any one piece of her adventure. There were few difficult vocabulary words to stand as obstacles to YA readers, but I never felt that the language was simple enough to be condescending or feel “beneath” me.

From a content perspective, the book is PG-13. Though there are a few romantic scenes, they only involve kissing, and nothing is described too explicitly. At one point, Ginny ends up in Amsterdam, and although there could have been scandalous things she could have seen, she ended up with an American family (parents with two kids of their own), who kept her on a strict schedule that prevented her from taking the book in a more R-rated direction.

There was some subtle symbolism, such as a semi-temporary tattoo Ginny receives as part of her adventure. The artist tells her it’s best that the first one doesn’t last—unless she wants it to. This happens in the same scene that Ginny introduces the artist to her sort-of boyfriend. The theme of finding love follows us through the story as we learn about Aunt Peg’s relationship as well. But none of the symbols were over-the-top enough to distract from the novel. Art and its subjective value plays a prominent role as Ginny travels Europe to enjoy famous works of art as well as art created by Aunt Peg.

I was hoping this was a stand-alone novel because I think it works as a self-enclosed narrative. But of course when I turned to the last page, I saw a preview for the next book in the series, The Last Little Blue Envelope. I’ll admit, as a teenager, I would have read the next book right away. As a grown-up, I think there is something to be said for leaving the “next chapter” to the reader’s imagination.

In a nutshell: a fun, fast read that introduces the reader to various adventures in Europe while following a teenager on her quest toward self-improvement. The language is not too challenging for a hesitant reader, and the fast-paced journey will hold the interest of most teenagers.

August is prime beach time, and anyone caught in a rip tide or current knows how frightening it can be. Last month, I came upon this news story about a group of 80 people who formed a human chain from beach to save a family who was caught in the current in Panama City Beach, Florida.

Myrtle Beach in 2013.

Myrtle Beach in 2013.

It was a moment that would make John Steinbeck proud, something he would capture in a modern-day Grapes of Wrath, perhaps. It was a moment of complete strangers seeing someone in trouble and working together across gender and social lines to save other strangers.

It’s easy to get caught up in hate and take sides and call names, but it’s nice to know that in a true moment of need, we are quick to come to each other’s aid. Every time I go to the beach, I feel like the ocean is always teaching me something: serenity or humility or gratitude. It seems even when I’m not at the beach, the ocean is always providing.

Welcome to The Spot Writers. August’s prompt is: Where have you always wanted to vacation? Pick a country and set your story there—only in this story, the dream location, sadly, is a setting for disaster. Please excuse the lateness of this post. I was away on vacation and had terrible Internet connectivity!

Today’s post comes from Cathy MacKenzie. Her one-woman publishing company, MacKenzie Publishing, has just published its second anthology, TWO EYES OPEN, a collection of sixteen stories by sixteen authors, to read during the day . . . or even at night, as long as two eyes are open. Available on Amazon.

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Hugger-Mugger Eyes by Cathy MacKenzie

Behind the makeshift draperies of the master bedroom rises the sixteen-foot stone wall. The wall’s presence has never been intimidating before—once even served as a comforting barrier to the outside world—but now it’s a solid fixture to be feared. Though Wilma can be unreasonably scared at times, her fear and the danger are real. Every day, everywhere she goes, eyes confront her—the same ones she is certain spy into the bedroom through the sliding doors from high atop the wall. Those eyes watch and wait, biding their time until they strike again, for everyone says they’ll return. That’s what burglars do—once they’ve successfully burglarized a place, they’ll allow the occupants a week to replace stolen items and will ransack again. Wilma is certain of that fact, and no one can convince her otherwise. Foreigners—the perceived rich in Mexico, or anywhere—are easy prey.

A friend chastised her the previous day. “Don’t say ‘robbed.’ You weren’t robbed; you were burglarized. A burglar is a thief who enters a building with the intent to steal. A robber is a thief who steals by threatening violence. You weren’t there, so you were burglarized, not robbed.”

What are you? A walking dictionary? But when Wilma later checked a dictionary, she found her friend was correct, which didn’t help her mood.

She gulps and holds her breath, gripping the sheet tightly to her chin. What’s that? Every minuscule noise puts her on edge. The room is as dark as coal with the heavy blankets draped over the rods, which is better than the wispy, see-through drapery. She was happy with the drapery as it was—until the break-in happened. Though the sliding doors open to the outdoors, she and her husband enjoyed complete privacy on the small patio because of the high wall—or so she’d thought.

She hasn’t slept for four nights. She dozes for several minutes and then awakens in a cold sweat. Whether awake or asleep, she’s alert to every sound, familiar or not, for who’s to say what’s normal and what isn’t at a particular moment.

She nestles against her husband’s backside. “You awake?”

He’s not awake, not at three in the morning. Brave, unconcerned Hubby fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow. And no wonder, considering the numerous times his wife disturbed him the last several evenings.

“You awake?” she repeats.

“I am now.”

She wraps her arms around his waist and fingers his chest hair. If fear grasped her too hard and she lost control, she’s certain she could rip those strands from their roots.

“There’s someone outside,” she says.

“No one’s there.”

“I hear something. Don’t you hear it?”

“Go back to sleep. There’s nothing there.”

Hubby remains calm and sympathetic to his wife’s plight. He wouldn’t dare become upset, not after what they’ve been through—what she’s been through, for she re-lives the horror over and over. The episode is usually far from his mind, especially when he sleeps. He is bothered if he dwells on it except macho men don’t reveal weakness.

“Sweetie, go back to sleep. There’s nothing there.”

He rolls over and holds her tight.

Oh, how she loves the feel of his warm, strong body against hers. Despite that, she doesn’t feel safe; no one can quash her uneasiness.

“I can’t sleep. I just can’t.”

He rubs her back. “It’s okay. Don’t cry.”

“I can’t help it.”

“Tomorrow’s another day. The sun will be shining. Things won’t seem so scary then.”

“I’m scared in the light, too. I just want to go home.”

“We can leave. Just say the word.” He kisses the side of her head.

“Yeah, but how do we change our flight? It’s non-refundable. Our credit cards are gone. Our money is gone.”

She snuggles farther into her husband, wishing she can disappear for a week until it’s time to fly home.

~~Based on actual events when the author and her husband wintered in Mexico one winter and robbers (or is it “burglars”???) entered their rental while they were out for an evening. When they returned, their computers, tablets, and cash were missing. Hubby later found his wallet (with credit cards intact but money gone), which had been tossed under the bed in the spare bedroom.  ~~

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The Spot Writers—Our Members:

Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

Catherine A. MacKenzie: https://writingwicket.wordpress.com/wicker-chitter/

Dorothy Colinco. www.dorothycolinco.com

CaraMarie Christy: https://calamariwriting.wordpress.com/

 

I chose this book as part of my interest in exploring the steampunk genre. It’s a young adult version of Cinderella, only it involves elements of steampunk and a super-empowered protagonist.

Mechanica, or Nicolette, is a girl whose mother passed away. Following the traditional fairy tale, her father remarried a less-than-kind woman with two daughters of her own, both of whom have ugly souls. The book plays with elements of the traditional fairy tale while adding its own twist.

While the world created is a steampunk one, there are also elements of magic: the people have discovered a realm of fairies who use magic, such as a potion that allows you to remain hidden from people who know you.

On her sixteenth birthday, Mechanica discovers that her mother left part of her workshop hidden and ready for Mechanica’s use. There, she fixes tiny, sentient steampunk insects as well as a horse, Jules II, that her mother had created. She doesn’t fully understand how the creations seem to have a consciousness, but she learns that there is something called ashes that her mother acquired, and that spooks even the fairy folk. A small sprinkling of the ashes (which move on their own where they are stored) seems to add life to the creations.

I enjoyed the way the tale played with traditional elements of the fairytale while adding a modern twist. The main character was certainly empowered and left behind all the helplessness that many “damsels in distress” seem to show. I also liked the steampunk element, though there was a weird mix of fairy and steampunk.

What I would improve is the order of the story. It was told in Mechanica’s voice, and it seemed like she wasn’t always able to organize it into the most effective tale possible. At times I felt she repeated herself or told us something she should have mentioned earlier, simply because it came up at that point in the plot. While I understand it’s told in an authentic teenage voice, it felt a bit rough from a reader’s perspective. Still, I’m glad I read the book, and I would pass it along to anyone wanting to read about an empowered individual taking her destiny into her own hands.

Earlier this year, Cheerios made headlines by giving out millions of seed packets (though not without controversy) in an effort to help people plant more flowers, thus providing more pollen for the bees.

As you’ve likely heard, bees are essential to Earth’s ecosystem and responsible for much of our food supply. Yet in recent years, their natural population has been on the decline: with colony collapse disorder, bees were abandoning their hives. Many factors have been blamed, including changing climate, crowded living space, mites, and pesticide use. Regardless of the cause, it’s important to save pollinators. Bees and butterflies help sustain the plants that we need to eat and sustain the rest of our food chain.

Despite the “bee-pocalypse,” as it was dubbed by Time magazine, I have been heartened recently to hear about the excellent steps people have been taking to help remedy the situation. I often hear people say things like, “What does it matter? It’s a drop in a bucket.” I like to think that a bucket is made of many, many drops, and put together, each individual drop contributes to the whole.

I snapped this shot of a bee pollinating a Rose of Sharon plant in my front garden a few years ago.

I snapped this shot of a bee pollinating a Rose of Sharon plant in my front garden a few years ago.

I was heartened to learn in a recent newsletter that Franklin & Marshall College, my alma mater, has done its small share to save this important species. At the schools’ Center for the Sustainable Environment, there’s an observation hive built into the wall in the director’s office. It was constructed by Dan Chambers of the Lancaster County Beekeepers Society to allow people to observe the ways bees work and live but also to provide them a sanctuary. The college also has hives at another campus, a mile down the road. Though small, the effort to provide more homes for bees is doing its small part to help the population that might just help save our planet.

It’s also important that people stay educated about bee populations and recognize “good” bees from the more harmful wasps they might be inclined to exterminate.

I was especially heartened to learn that the private market stepped up: because of the crisis and the demand for bees, beekeepers stepped up to the challenge, and now the honeybee population is more than it was when the colony collapse disorder began. Beekeepers and farmers have been working together to rent out bees for farms needing them, or to rent space on farms for bees to have hives if honey is the desired product. I always love hearing about how the private market steps in and helps people work together voluntarily to solve a problem.

If you’re looking to help the bees, consider planting a pollinator garden. Several sites on saving bees recommend sticking with native plants (which is what most of the controversy was surrounding the Cheerios packets), so a bit of local research might be necessary, including researching pesticide use (or lack thereof). Though this contradicts advice if you’re looking to prevent mosquito-breeding, many sites remind us that bees get thirsty, so if there is not water nearby, consider a bird bath.  If you’re feeling brave, you can purchase or build your own hive, or provide a location for bees to “move in.” F&M College has provided a guide for anyone interested in starting a pollinator garden.

Bee Lazy!
And another fantastic piece of information for a Friday: leaving weeds and letting lawns grow a bit can actually help the bees: clover (which grows on lawns) contains flowers that help feed the bees, and many weeds (like several variety in my own yard!) flower, too. Mowing, I often see bees frequenting the flowers. So don’t call it slacking when you let your lawn get a little unruly—calling it doing your part for the bees 🙂

Recently, I’ve started taking over a bit of my front garden. The previous owner(s) had covered it in several strata: landscaping mesh, rock, and mulch of varying degrees. Now that the landscaping mesh is starting to disintegrate, I am reclaiming the garden bit by bit, trying to plant hardy, native flowers. (One of the suggestions is to plant flowers that bloom at different times of year so that the bees will always have something). This is my goal. Though I’m in a constant battle with deer that seem to eat even “deer resistant” vegetation, I hope that my garden will help at least a handful of bees and butterflies and do its small part to help our entire ecosystem.

Welcome to the Spot Writers. This month’s prompt: Where have you always wanted to vacation? Pick a country and set your story there—only in this story, the dream location sadly is a setting for disaster. This week’s story comes to us from Val Muller, author of The Girl Who Flew Away, a young adult tale that tackles adoption, addiction, and loyalty wrapped up in a dangerous wilderness journey.

Staycation

By Val Muller

Mortimer Harris loved rules. As a child, he was always in bed by nine, just like his mother insisted. There was something satisfying about lying in bed, pulling the covers up to his chin, and watching the minute hand sweep across the “12” at such a clean, precise right angle with the hour hand on the “9.” He watched the perfect alignment for a full minute, enjoying the peace of his room before turning out his light. He always shook his head at his brother, John, whose bedtime shenanigans kept their parents busy well past nine. Shook his head metaphorically, of course. He couldn’t have shaken it for real. His head was—literally—nicely resting on his pillow at 9 p.m. and would stay there until at least 6 a.m., the earliest he or his brother was allowed to wake. There would be no literal head-shaking until at least then.

He looked forward to each heavily-regulated day in grade school and high school and took pride in having perfect attendance, and no tardies, and no infractions of any sort. He loved the precision of it all: keep your locker clean and tidy, get to class in the six minutes allotted for traveling, be on the bus no later than seven minutes after the dismissal bell. The comfort of rules was like a warm blanket wrapped around his soul (but only between the hours of nine and six; even his soul had to be awake when protocol dictated it).

When he grew up, he was glad to find a home in a heavily-regulated HOA. The homeowner’s association he found was one with the most rules in all of Arbor County. Grass was to be cut to six inches in height or less (Mortimer preferred an even three). Rooftops and siding were to be power-washed in the spring. Halloween decorations could be put up starting on October 1; Christmas décor could go up the day after Thanksgiving. Decorations had to be put away three days after each holiday’s completion, though Christmas décor could be up until the sixth of January.

The list went on and on: rules regulating shrubbery and bushes, stone walkways, shutter color, front door embellishments, types of trees and flowers. Cars had to be parked a minimum of two feet from the edge of the driveway, but Mortimer preferred leaving at least four.

With his love for regulation, Mortimer preferred stay-cations to vacations. Stay-cations allowed him the pleasure of taking care of his house without having to worry about work getting in the way. (Once, when he was really busy, he let his grass grow to an average of 4.5 inches before he had a chance to cut it—there would be none of that this week!) Vacations were the total opposite. There were very few rules on vacations, and some of his coworkers even tried to argue that that was the point. But who would want to go somewhere with no rules, where people just acted on a whim and flew by the seat of their pants?

Not Mortimer, that was for sure.

At 6:59 on the first day of his stay-cation, the neighbor, Ed, was out mowing the lawn. Mortimer looked at his watch. 6:59 meant that Ed was mowing two minutes earlier than the county—and the HOA—allowed. Mortimer shook his head—literally this time—while sipping his coffee.

Ed looked over, sneered, and cut the engine. “Give me a break, Morty,” said Ed. “I’m taking the family to the beach this morning. We were supposed to leave already, only I forgot about the damn lawn. Got to mow it now, or by the time we get back from vacation, the HOA will have fined us. Damn HOA.”

Mortimer smiled inside. Ed often deserved fines. The last time his house had been power-washed was seventeen months ago. And Ed often took the trash can to the curb several hours before the 5 p.m. regulation allowed. Sometimes he even left the empty cans out for a day afterwards. He was a rulebreaker and a scofflaw.

Mortimer looked in the driveway. Ed’s SUV was parked almost at the edge of the driveway—a clear violation—and was packed with bags. His wife watched impatiently from the kitchen window, and his kids were running around in the open garage with inflatable rafts, their screams a violation of quiet hours by a whole minute and a half.

Too bad the HOA mandated that anyone mowing the lawn other than the homeowner him- or herself had to be properly licensed and contracted. Mortimer was neither, and so he didn’t bother offering to mow for his neighbor, even though he had nothing else to do that day.

“Well,” Mortimer said, “you did start a few minutes earlier than—”

But Ed simply shot him a look. “Mortimer, don’t start up again.” He started up the mower and continued his work. Mortimer watched him mow while he finished his coffee. At first, he enjoyed Ed’s straight, precise lines. But then he noticed that Ed left a long strip between the edge of the patio and the start of the lawn. HOA regulations were very strict about that: if a clean line couldn’t be made with the mower, the homeowner was required to use a weed eater or edger.

“Ed,” Mortimer called, walking to the fence.

This time, Ed left the mower engine idling and trudged to the fenceline.

“You missed a spot,” Mortimer said.

Ed flashed him a look, but he said nothing. He pulled the mower back to the missed spot and re-mowed, leaving a clean line. Mortimer sighed relief. Then Ed picked up his pace and flashed Mortimer a look. He mowed several clean passes before his lips curled into a devilish smile. On one of the passes, he sporadically twisted the mower a bit, leaving a line of two to three inches of long grass between the neat, even rows.

Surely an oversight. Mortimer wiped a bead of sweat from his brow. Surely Ed had simply slipped. He’d see the mistake and re-mow it on his way back. But then Ed did it again. And a third time.

Finally, he cut the mower engine and wheeled it into the garage. His kids cheered and hopped into the SUV. “Can we go? Can we go?” they shouted.

Mortimer tried to stop the family as they pulled away, but Ed would not roll down the window or even slow his car. Mortimer was stuck, alone, on his staycation, looking at the lawn directly next to his and the three horrid stripes of tall grass Ed had left.

Mortimer hurried to his highlighted and dog-eared copy of the HOA regulations. Surely there was some provision in there, something he would be allowed to do, some action he could take. But he was stuck. He was not allowed to hire someone to mow a neighbor’s lawn, and he himself could not mow, given that he was not licensed or contracted.

He logged onto his computer and composed a strongly-worded email to the board. Surely they’d fine Ed.

But what good would that do?

At nine p.m. that night, Mortimer tossed and turned in bed. He shook his head—quite literally, for it was not resting on the pillow—and then did the unthinkable. He actually got out of bed and glanced out at the neighbor’s lawn through the window. The nice, even lines flowed together like smooth waves in the ocean—until they broke with the choppy unevenness of the three spots Ed had neglected.

Ed shook his head again and returned to bed. It was going to be a long staycation.

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Val Muller: https://valmuller.com/blog/

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